A Review of Succubus by Sal Aceous

Not all Succubi are the same. Some are more passionate, some are less so. Some have seduction as their goal, some do not. Sometimes what they desire however has a lot to do with the one they are called to, or are with.

So, what happens when the other is a werewolf? Where does the story go from there and how is it different?

• Title: Succubus
• Author: Sal Aceous
• Length: 11 Pages
• ASIN: B00646CDKY
• Publishing Date: November 6, 2011
• This work at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

A werewolf encounters a succubus intent on possessing his very soul. But she wants his body first.

The meeting of a Succubus and a Werewolf takes many turns in this story. While the tale is interesting, there are a few points in it that bother me. First among those is whether or not the Succubus and the Werewolf actually have met before or not. This is somewhat unclear in the story and is confusing at certain points.

The story is a rather violent one, though the characters themselves enjoy things more when they are a bit on the rough and dangerous side. Personally I don’t enjoy violent works, there really isn’t anything in those kinds of stories for me, but the story, if a good one, can overcome that.

The Succubus, who is never named, is, as she should be, using her powers of seduction and attraction to control the one she wants, the werewolf. But in doing so there is a good deal of BDSM in the story, and a touch of blood and pain, which you would expect in a tale like this. In return the werewolf is, as you would expect, violent and animalistic at times.

Overall the story is told well, but I found it a little difficult to get past the violent aspects and into the erotica. Beyond that the characters are well written, the author tells a compelling story and it was, in its own way, an interesting read. I would have liked something of a longer story however in that there was parts of the past of both characters that wasn’t told and confused me.

Three out of five pitchforks.

Overall well written, a little too violent for my own preferences, and I would have liked a bit more story.

 

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