May 10, 2016 archive

A Review of One Night Sand by Natalie Severine and Eric Severine

One Night Sand by Natalie Severine and Eric Severine

The seventh review of the ongoing series called Lily Quinn written by Natalie and Eric Severine this time on the Tale. You can find my first review here, the second here, the third here, the fourth here, and the fifth review ere. The review of the prior work to this one can be found here on the Tale as well. One of …

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A Review of Submitting to the Alpha Demon by Demona Lust

Submitting to the Alpha Demon by Demona Lust

There are some works which I have a difficult time reading. The problem mainly comes to how the story is told, the disconnect I have with the characters and, more often than not, erotica that just has no heat in it to speak of. Dialog is a difficult thing to write, because when it is …

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