His Girlfriend Is A Witch by Janet Graceland

There are some stories which focus on transformation of characters which explore various themes. On occasion, either, or both Succubi and Incubi transformations happen, sometimes with a gender transformation as well. Overall, this can work well, but when such things seem tacked onto the story or really don’t matter much overall, was there a point to such things happening?

If the story works well without a Succubus or Incubus transformation, or appearance, was there really a point to it in the first place? Perhaps there is, to some small extent, but what’s the point if there really doesn’t seem to be one?

• Title: His Girlfriend Is A Witch
• Author: Janet Graceland
• Published By: Amazon Digital Services
• Length: 23 Pages
• Format: eBook
• ASIN: B0BCQTK2KG
• Publishing Date: August 31, 2022
• This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com – No Longer Available

The work tells of:

Michael’s girlfriend, Samantha, is a witch. On his twenty-first birthday, she has promised him one magical wish. But when Michael has difficulty on deciding what he wants, Samantha suggests spicing up their sex life. How? By turning Michael into a woman. When that happens, their life is completely changed forever.

Micheal knows his girlfriend is a witch and when offered a gift, he’s unsure of what he wants, but Samantha is. The gift opens their lives and love to something they didn’t expect, but if it’s what they both want, that’s all that matters isn’t it?

The work is mainly a gender transformation story with some mind control aspects at the core. The story focuses on both main characters, what happens to them along the way, and the result of their choices. It’s a bit rushed at times, the erotica is somewhat tepid overall. While there are transformations told, the actual succubus and incubus transformations are very fleeting.

Both Samantha and Micheal are gender transformed into being a succubus and an incubus which also brings personality changes and they aren’t the same characters when the transformations are complete. But this isn’t all that important to the story overall as this happens in the last few pages.

While the prior transformations in the story made sense, these last ones really didn’t add a lot. The last transformation could have been as easily to being pets to their Mistress without the succubus and incubus aspects. Both of the main characters were that anyway at that point. As such, the story really didn’t interest me very much and by the time the theme changed to something I am interested in, there wasn’t much that was done with it either in a character development or plot expansion.

Two pitchforks out of five.

There was really very little Succubus or Incubus themes to be found in this work save for the last handful of pages. The focus was more on gender transformations and a bit of mind control around the edges. The story did have its moments overall, but it really wasn’t anything like a Succubus or Incubus story save in passing. It’s no longer published on Amazon as of the time of this review, but I have reviewed other works by this author that do have Succubus or Incubus themes that were far more interesting.

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Beloved Demon by Luke Thunder

However, the unraveling of a mystery, in all of its forms, along with the tale told well of the main character finding their purpose and meaning, keeps me involved. A succubus that is trying to figure out herself while the world turns around her, or tries to take her, leaves much to be explored after all.

• Title: Beloved Demon
• Author: Luke Thunder
• Published By: Amazon Digital Services
• Length: 226 Pages
• Format: eBook
• ASIN: B0B9644H7C
• Publishing Date: August 9, 2022
• This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

“Demons” occur in many different variants in the literature. The most popular at the moment are of course the sex demons, which are traditionally called “succubus” and “incubus”. “Succubus” — from the Latin “succubare” = to lie beneath — is the female form, supernaturally beautiful, desirable and irresistible. In this form, the demon collects male sperm in order to then pass it on to unsuspecting women in the male form “Incubus” – of course also supernaturally beautiful, desirable and irresistible – and thereby reproduce itself. If you’re thinking of “Rosemary’s Baby” here, you’re pretty much right.

Angela doesn’t care for mysteries, it’s part of her being who she is and what she deals with everyday. But there’s a single mystery that has been lurking in the shadows waiting for her. The truth will come out, the past will return with a vengeance. But then Angela isn’t exactly without her own mysteries that not even the past expected from her.

The work is really a very complex interweaving of mystery, action and tales of erotic moments that gives rise to a very unique mythos that surrounds Angela. The mystery of why her life has turned out as it has remains throughout, holding some untold aspects to the very end and beyond which work well to keep one engrossed in the storytelling.

It’s not entirely focused on the erotica, those scenes and moments are well done overall. The story sets itself to dig into her mystery, tell of how things came to be, and then what happens when the darker side demands its pound of flesh from Angela. The supernatural theme, focused on the creation of the mythos between good and evil, the revelations about both demons and angels are thoughtfully done and unique. The story holds itself to carrying Angela through the strife around her and gives her character the chance to grow and evolve.

Angela, the main character and succubus of the work, is something of a mixture of myths which explains her personality. While her succubus aspects are at the fore the story, she doesn’t become consumed by them. There are moments when things turn in unexpected directions, she reveals a new aspect of her being. This all makes her wonderfully complex and delightfully interesting.

There are other characters who are, or can be, described as being succubi or incubi as well. Some are fleetingly in the story, a bare handful remain with Angela to one level or another. Much like Angela herself, they aren’t really stereotypical in their nature as a whole. There is one character however that was really so very much expected in what he did and while it made sense, I’d hoped for a bit more depth in him than what came to pass.

Written well, the story’s strength is the mythos created by far. There’s so much depth and threads created to tie everything together. The work does wander on occasion, there could have been a better resolution told between Angela and her mother than it was. That’s more of a fond wish for all Angela went through by the end of the story. It’s a really well told work of succubus fiction that kept my interest throughout.

Four out of five pitchforks.

The ending of the work feels a bit rushed as a whole. There are some left over threads touched on, there’s hints of further growth for Angela which just makes her that little bit more a delightful and unique succubus. Perhaps the author will continue this to a follow-on story, perhaps not. Nonetheless the mythos created and the story told was really well done.

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