A Review of Claiming the Naughty Hot Wife by Reed James

Claiming the Naughty Hot Wife by Reed James

Claiming the Naughty Hot Wife by Reed James

A review today of the twelfth work in the Succubus’s Naughty Romp series by Reed James. I’m not sure of where the story really wants to go at this point overall. That’s not to say there isn’t a clear direction by the end however. It’s more that the story seems to be stuck in a circle waiting to get to the next point to be told. That’s a shame as again, there could have been time spent in telling more about Jezebel and that didn’t happen. There’s not enough story here to make the erotica more interesting than it is.

The focus on a harem story over telling a corruption or succubus one really tells here. It comes back to sex alone isn’t really erotica. When you start not to care about the characters, that’s a real problem to me.

  • Title: Claiming the Naughty Hot Wife
  • Author: Reed James
  • Published By: Naughty Ladies Publications
  • Length: 33 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B0BDXJG5ST
  • Publishing Date: September 10, 2022
  • This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

Trent just can’t resist the busty charms of Mrs. Smith. His hot MILF-professor boils his blood. So when he makes his move on her, she’s more than willing to be claimed. The naughty wife wants a real man! With the gorgeous, Black coed, Trent celebrates claiming the busty MILF! Mrs. Smith is ready to have a hot time with her stud and her cute student. Things are burning hot for Trent. But a sultry angel stalks the campus with plans of her own.

Trent seeks more women to add to his collection and while he does that, Jezebel seeks to get what she really wants. It might be Trent’s soul, it might be something far more devilish. Along the way they both may find they have angered someone they shouldn’t have.

Once more the story picks up immediately where the last closed and with Trent dominating his harem and having various kinds of sex with them. Jezebel does manage to get a bit more time in the story, mainly in what seems to be subtle corruption and then rushes off to snare another woman for Trent. Once again the main focus on the story is the erotica which, again, lacks heat overall, being too porn movie in the telling.

There was nothing that really pushed the story onwards for any of the characters and especially for Jezebel. The story just sort of drifted into the erotic, became boring, and wasn’t investing overall.

Jezebel became a tease once more, which is a shame. She’s a character that should grow somehow. Be that in a plot, or another plan she’s crafting in the background. Getting to see that beyond the sex she’s involved in really would be interesting. There is, again, a split second appearance of an angel to oppose her, but that’s fleeting and didn’t add anything to the story either.

While the focus is Trent, there needs to be a point where it’s less about him and more about Jezebel and what she wants. Is she creating more succubi? Is she setting up Trent for a fall? Does she know the angel is there and will try to stop her? That storytelling would add a lot more than the repetitive sex scenes.

Two out of five pitchforks.

Another pause in the story telling that focuses on sex that has no heat. Characters that don’t grow and seem fixated on the sex they can get. There’s more beyond this, Jezebel is a storyline that really isn’t being used as she could otherwise be. Hopefully the next part of the series will bring conflict that changes things to the better.

Tera

A lovely Morrigan Aensland bust artwork YouTube

I love simple works of Morrigan Aensland art, and this time on the Tale, a lovely work which I think displays Morrigan’s personality perfectly.

In the event you cannot see this video here on the Tale, please try this link.

As always, in the event the video disappears, here’s a screenshot.

Morrigan Aensland by Jakuson Z

Morrigan Aensland by Jakuson Z

I just adore Morrigan’s smile, it’s exactly as it should be in this work. I wonder why there isn’t that many works of Morrigan art where it’s just a bust of her and nothing more as it really is delightful. Something for me to ponder perhaps sometime.

Tera

A Review of Risk and Reward by Pen Ghost

Risk and Reward by Pen Ghost

Risk and Reward by Pen Ghost

A review of the fourth work In the Divine Sex Inc series this time on the Tale and it’s one that comes with some disappointment. It’s not enough to tell a story alone, it’s important to make sure the story can tell the story well.

Getting what you want isn’t the be all and end all. It’s more important to figure out what you can do and how to do that well.

  • Title: Risk and Reward
  • Author: Pen Ghost
  • Published By: Amazon Digital Services
  • Length: 9 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B0B75HQ7XZ
  • Publishing Date: July 19, 2022
  • This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

A modern man with a boring everyday life learns of his impending demise from his doctor. That small stirring in his chest turns out to be a huge problem after all. It has been decreed by the forces that be, that he will die without fulfilling his dreams. He does as any reasonable person would do in a situation like this, quit his job, acquire loans, and spend it all on booze and drugs. With no more worry in life, his deepest cravings which used to be bound up because of societal obligations, all come out to play. And play they did, such that what killed him at the end of the day wasn’t his heart condition but too much alcohol, drugs, and an epic orgasm. Well, maybe the heart condition had something to do with but it doesn’t matter anymore. All that matters is that he is dead now and on his terms.
But that isn’t the end for Ben Dover. He was reincarnated as an incubus. His new life as a demon of pleasure isn’t that different from his old life. There are demon capitalists and office jobs here too. He has been forced to work for a sex company to make a living. He didn’t have a choice in the matter because, unlike in his old world, the hierarchy in the society of demons is determined by strength. So either he works for them or stops living. Follow Ben Dover as he makes his way up the corporate ladder by using his modern knowledge of sex to his advantage. His adventures will lead him to acquire the strength of his own, a company of his own, and will be full of the naughty things he had to do to make it happen.

Ben’s managed to get out of his first test in one piece, but there’s a lot of questions left. What do they do with their collections? Who gains from this? The most important question however is why he’s so horny.

Following on from where the story ended in the last part, there’s really no erotica to speak of. This is something of an information dump which provides Ben with a better idea of what’s going on and what it all means to him. As such there’s little in the way of the story moving onwards. This is entirely a point to explain how things work.

The problem, however, is in how that is all told. It’s a very odd and rough narrative that needs a lot of editing to make things read better. There is several points where there seems to be words missing or a train of thought that get lost along the way.

The writing just didn’t flow well, which is a shame considering that there was a lot of information being revealed. It really needs a rewrite to tell the story better, to add some depth to the characters, and possibly add to Ben’s character more.

Two pitchforks out of five.

This was, however, the last part of the story which was published. It’s a challenge to write a story on a weekly basis and I hope the author decided to step back, think things over, and start again. Given the overall story idea and the characters, there’s a lot that could be done to make this a really good book overall. It just doesn’t help to force a story to make a deadline, which is what feels like happened here.

Tera

Succubi Image of the Week 773

There are certain modern looks for Succubi that just seem to work so very well for them, A cute piece of art for this week’s Image which is just so much fun…

Succubii by Penelopizz

Succubii by Penelopizz

This fun work is by the artist Penelopizz on DeviantArt and you can find the original page here.

Really cute style, the expression is delightfully naughty. Interesting horns and tail, her purple hair goes well with them both. The hot pants and just holding on top add that little bit extra and I think gives a really nice hint to how mischievous she is. It’s a very important thing Succubi need to be of course…

Tera

They really are sad looking tail and horns

Red:Black Devil Fancy Mini Dress Costume

It seems that the disappointment levels in costumes isn’t going to be falling anytime soon. Perhaps what’s really sad is how lousy the horns and tails are getting.

This is the Red/Black Devil Fancy Mini Dress Costume and it comes with the dress, the gloves, the lousy tail, horns and pitchfork that is destined to be going to the garbage can. It sells for $45 US on the few websites I have found it on.

Losing the horns and tail would be the first thing, they are both lousy and tacky. The dress is marginally better, but that really doesn’t mean a lot. The pitchfork is the typical sparkly tacky thing that I detest as well.

It seems to be an ongoing theme of late. A nice red dress and decent horns would look a lot better.

One pitchfork out of five.

I’m being very kind in that rating I know.

Tera

A Review of Dream Intervention by Pen Ghost

Dream Intervention by Pen Ghost

Dream Intervention by Pen Ghost

A review of the third work in the Divine Sex Inc series today and it’s one in which the story starts to get more involved with the universe and how things work as a whole. That’s a positive thing but skimming over details really doesn’t tell the story that should be.

One must learn to crawl before they can run. But being too sure of yourself might also mean you will be tripped up more than you know.

  • Title: Dream Intervention
  • Author: Pen Ghost
  • Published By: Amazon Digital Services
  • Length: 9 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B0B6TCVM56
  • Publishing Date: July 16, 2022
  • This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

A modern man with a boring everyday life learns of his impending demise from his doctor. That small stirring in his chest turns out to be a huge problem after all. It has been decreed by the forces that be, that he will die without fulfilling his dreams. He does as any reasonable person would do in a situation like this, quit his job, acquire loans, and spend it all on booze and drugs. With no more worry in life, his deepest cravings which used to be bound up because of societal obligations, all come out to play. And play they did, such that what killed him at the end of the day wasn’t his heart condition but too much alcohol, drugs, and an epic orgasm. Well, maybe the heart condition had something to do with but it doesn’t matter anymore. All that matters is that he is dead now and on his terms.
But that isn’t the end for Ben Dover. He was reincarnated as an incubus. His new life as a demon of pleasure isn’t that different from his old life. There are demon capitalists and office jobs here too. He has been forced to work for a sex company to make a living. He didn’t have a choice in the matter because, unlike in his old world, the hierarchy in the society of demons is determined by strength. So either he works for them or stops living. Follow Ben Dover as he makes his way up the corporate ladder by using his modern knowledge of sex to his advantage. His adventures will lead him to acquire the strength of his own, a company of his own, and will be full of the naughty things he had to do to make it happen.

Ben has made it through orientation, but now the biggest challenge is to survive his first dream encounter. Without a clue he has to leap before looking what awaits him. It couldn’t be a complete disaster if he’s very lucky. Or very horny.

The work continues from the prior one, Ben being tossed into the deep end and trying to survive the experience. While the overall balance of this part of the story once more falls into some rather over the top erotica, it’s the beginning where things are far more interesting.

Telling of Ben’s experiences with learning what he’s supposed to do opened up the story universe in some really unique ways. It is thin on depth and rushed towards getting to the erotica and that might have been better served by stretching out the lessons before tossing Ben to the wolves.

When the erotic story aspects come, they do so in a dream state that has some aspects of succubus, or more apt, incubus powers being used. Again, this is a point where the story just felt rushed overall. Slowing the story and building the universe needs to happen.

Three out of five pitchforks.

The descriptions of the dream world and how Ben interacts with it were well done. It’s a shame that some of the descriptions of things were rushed, but overall, this felt like the story was turning towards being more than what it had been to this point.

Tera

Miriam by TeraS

Miriam by Avioetca

Miriam by Avioetca

On December 1st the SuccuWiki will be having its 15th anniversary. Yesterday on the SuccuWiki I published the 8,000th article. On each thousandth mark I tell something about one of the Realm’s characters and for this milestone it’s Miriam.

Here’s her story…

  • Name: Miriam
  • Title(s): Yellow Tailed Librarian of the Realm
  • AngelKitty: Dewey
  • Age: Physically mid-20s, though she is almost a century in age
  • Gender: Female
  • Hair Colour: Strawberry Blonde
  • Eye Colour: Violet
  • Tail Colour: Yellow – The brightest yellow tail seen in a century
  • Personality: Kind with an air of innocence while oblivious to her sexual attractiveness
  • Strength(s): Highly intelligent with an inquisitive nature
  • Weakness(es): Odd things happen around her for… reasons
  • Favorite Place: The Library of the Realm
  • Home in the Realm: Etherial Hills
  • Alias: The Brightest of the Yellow Tails
  • Created By: JHB
  • Quote: 42 is all wrong… the answer is 44.

 

Miriam, better known as The Brightest Yellow Tail Seen In A Century, and the Realm’s Assistant Librarian to Tera, is a Collective Succubi, being known for the brightness of her tail colour and the odd events that occur around her, which are legendary. She is a yellow-tailed succubi; her AngelKitty is named Dewey and her boyfriend is Irving.

Best described as sweet and almost completely unaware of her initiate sexuality, Miriam’s main focus is being the best she can be as a librarian to repay Tera’s faith in her from the beginning of their relationship. The focus of unexpected events when she is nearby, as part of her nature as a yellow tail, is known throughout the Succubi Realm and beyond.

Physical Description

Miriam appears to be in her early twenties physically, having horns and tail of a gleaming yellow colour brighter than any yellow tail in the past hundred years and possibly the brightest yellow colour in Realm history, though historians still debate that point. Her normal scent is lemon, though in some circumstances she has taken on a slight cherry aroma when she is sexually aroused. She has medium-length strawberry-blonde hair which she ties up with red ribbons into curled ponytails over her shoulders. She normally wears red-framed oval glasses through which her lovely violet eyes can be seen. Both the red ribbons in her hair and the red rimmed glasses are nods to her mentor, Tera.

Miriam tends to appear somewhat shy in her personality and looks. While she is one of the succubi, her sexuality doesn’t drive her personality as it does others of the Realm. While outgoing and more than willing to be helpful. This reflects on her librarian role, although she is, nonetheless, still attractive to others. She usually appears in muted tones and colours which lend themselves to her librarian role. Preferring low heels, pencil skirts, and short-length bolero jackets over top of a yellow or white fitted top, she projects an air of cute sensuality of which she is largely unaware. She has a collection of costumes in her office in the library, which she chooses from on a weekly basis when she reads stories to the young tails of the Realm. Many of them are made of latex, likely being slightly influenced by Tera’s own preferences in that fashion choice.

Personality

Miriam has an openly cute and outgoing personality, which makes her an eager and attentive student willing to learn new things. While not overtly sexual or seductive, this does mean that, for the most part, others saw her as cute-but-weird, or maybe as a close friend but not necessarily sexy for some time before joining the Realm Library and coming under Tera’s mentorship. Occasionally unsure about herself when seeing the others of the Realm, she has learned about herself, what she likes, and—in the case of Irving, her boyfriend and co-worker at the Realm Library–whom she loves. Her adoration of Tera, along with Tera’s encouragement, helped to bring her from a young intern at the library into the confident assistant librarian she grew to be. But with all of her growth and abilities, she still sees herself as not being like the other succubi in their sexuality, even though her sexuality and seductiveness has blossomed over time.

Powers and Abilities

Miriam has all of the innate powers and abilities of the Succubi in the Realm. She can change her form if she wishes, though—much like her adored mentor, Tera–she does not do so. At most, she will use her powers to shift the clothing she wears into different looks and styles if needed, but her personality and nature tends to make such changes cute with an undercurrent of sexuality that she does not note. Being a yellow-tail, the greatest power she has could be described as being able to influence events in odd and unexpected ways. For example, she is probably best known for being the focus of an event whereby the entire Realm found themselves in physical contact with their TailSelves, something that was thought to be impossible, and then bring entwined with them and their loves, the event spiralling out of control until Miriam and her TallSelf Marilyn were able to find a solution and bring the Realm back from the whirlwind they had entered.

History

The only daughter of her mother, a teacher, and her father, a philosopher, Miriam spent her formative years being taught the whys and ways of the Realm by her attentive parents. Never without a question, and having at a very young age read all of the books in their home, Miriam was introduced to the Realm Library by her mother. This opened the door to her future. Though very shy and something of a bookworm in her younger years, she adored the Library, spending every moment possible exploring the treasures within, sometimes to the dismay of the staff, who worried about a yellow tail being let loose within the walls. Regardless, Miriam’s world revolved around the library and, when the time came for her to consider her future, she had only one goal. However, gaining an internship to the Library took three tries, the first two bring rejected due to her being a yellow tail and the staff’s concerns about the Library’s collections. On the third attempt, Tera intervened in the deliberations to gain Miriam’s acceptance.

What followed was Miriam growing from being shy and uncertain about herself and her worth, to blossoming into her true self, both as one of the Succubi and as the librarian she desired to be. While becoming the assistant librarian to Tera’s role as the head librarian, along the way Tera’s encouragement, along with that of her TailSelf, Marilyn, brought her to encounter Irving, a shy and unassuming member of the Incubi; they soon became a couple, looking after the library together. As time passed, Miriam had many adventures within and outside the Library, many of them being a direct result of the effects of her being the brightest of the yellow tails of the Realm. But, with all of her growth and experiences, Miriam still doesn’t quite see herself as being overtly sexual or seductive. While not a real problem for her, there’s an undercurrent of cute mixed with a hint of sensuality which is attractive to many and which Tera adores.

TailSelf

Marilyn is Miriam’s TailSelf, a silver-tailed Succubi with chestnut brown hair and very violet eyes of a deeper colour than Miriam’s own. Far more direct and open in her sexuality, Marilyn has a glamorous, predatory nature about her, in complete contrast to Miriam’s own shy and almost completely unaware realization of herself. It is Marilyn’s focus to get her librarian other-self to loosen up a bit and discover just how sensual she could be. Marilyn was responsible for Miriam painting her tail with rouge once before Halloween and turning Miriam into a red-tailed member of the Succubi, still having yellow horns, with long purple hair and an insatiable sexually dominant nature. In the aftermath, Marilyn decided that perhaps being a little gentler in her approach would be better, considering both how Miriam was the brightest yellow tail that had been seen in a century and all that occurred around her.

AngelKitty

Miriam has an AngelKitty called Dewey. She appears to be a dark brown Tabby cat with similarly coloured wings who is very outgoing, regularly seeking attention from visitors. Given that the association of cats with libraries is well known, Dewey’s association with Miriam and the Realm Library makes a great deal of sense. Her human form is that of a young woman in her early 20s, appearing to be younger than Miriam. Her physical form is somewhat gangly with brown eyes and light brunette hair in a pixie cut. Dewey’s relationship to Miriam is mainly as an assistant in the library, to help with the many of visitors who ask for help, befriend them, boost librarian morale, and inspire reading. Outside of the library, she tries to encourage Miriam to be a bit more adventurous and explore her sexual nature as it matures.

Trivia

  • Miriam modified the Pitchfork Decimal cataloguing system to work with almost every language—earthbound and not—represented in the Realm Library.
  • Miriam first came to the library with her mother—a teacher—as a little girl and fell in love with the place.
    Her application to intern at the Realm Library was rejected twice before Tera “encouraged” her acceptance, due to her being a yellow tail and the legends around them.
  • She is an exceedingly bright and a quick learner, having come to her role in the library with only a few minor odd incidents during her internship.
  • Regularly reads fairy tales to the youngest of the Realm while dressed up as a character in the story she reads to them.
  • Wears red-rimmed glasses and red ribbons to tie up her bangs as a nod to her mentor Tera and all she has learned.
  • Irving. Miriam’s boyfriend, has a Tailself named Ike, both of whom are smitten with Miriam as much as she is with them.

Miscellaneous

  • Miriam has appeared in many stories on Tera’s Blog; she is a major character in the Realm mythos. A list of stories in which she appears can be found here and here.
  • Miriam is one of the few Realm characters who has appeared in other story universes written by other authors.
  • Miriam has appeared in a comic book series as a minor character. She appeared in the fourth issue of Vampire Bloodlines to assist another character’s search for information.

Something different here on the Tale, someone my heart brought to life in his words and brings me no end of joy always…

Tera