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Demonic Desires: A Lesbian Succubus Encounter (eBook)
Demonic Desires: A Lesbian Succubus Encounter is an eBook written by Atlas Prieto. In this work one of the main characters is a Succubus.
- Title: Demonic Desires: A Lesbian Succubus Encounter
- Author: Atlas Prieto
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 24 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B097F9NFFD
- Publishing Date: June 16, 2021
The thought of summoning a succubus fills Cara with a combination of fear and excitement, and she can't stop fantasizing about it. Will calling on a demon who knows all of her deepest, darkest desires reveal aspects of her sexuality she's not ready to confront? What will the demon do to her, if she offers up her body to use according to the demon's own whims? She casts a summoning spell to find out, and the BDSM-tinged encounter that follows answers all of her questions and more...
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on August 1, 2021
Cara has certain erotic fantasies and being a witch, she could, if she wanted to, make them real. A decision to call a succubus to fulfill those needs opens Cara to submitting to her desires and the succubus as well.
The work is a short hot flash piece of erotica which mainly focuses on Cara’s need to fulfill her fantasy and how the succubus she summons does so. There’s a clear need within Cara to submit to the succubus long before she appears and the story leading to that moment is well told and interesting.
The succubus of the work, who is never named, seems to be very aloof in her poise and attitude, there’s not really a lot of heat in her action or words overall. She is dominant, there’s no question about that, but there’s little emotion, really nothing that drives the story with heat and purpose for the erotica. That’s a shame because her shifting of physical form I thought worked really well and turned the story towards the heat it needed, but just didn’t quite get there.
The story is well written, Cara and the succubus aren’t two dimensional and there’s something good in the work overall. It’s the lack of heat, the monotone emotions of the succubus and, for the most part, the oddities in the BDSM scenes that gave me pause and I think made the story lose its way.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work needs more heat and more emotion. That really is the missing part. The story is interesting, the characters offer a lot, but it just doesn’t quite get as far as it could have both emotionally and in the character development. Perhaps a follow on work might draw Cara into the realm of the succubus and push the relationship, and needs, far further.