Nov 15 2011

Desires 5

The Queen of the Succubi looks after her toys… Or are they really that? Only she knows for sure…


Desires – Beach Oasis

By MacroLass and Tera S

Part Five


The beauteous barbie nodded slowly, quite literally putty in the succubi’s hands. “…nothing to do…except listen….obey…..” Her body had become one giant errogenous zone that throbbed to Tera’s beat.

Flexi surrendered utterly, her sense of self retreating farther and farther into the depths of her subconscious under the relentless insistence of her new mistress. “…I want….I neeeeeed…must….rest…relax…go away….”

“Someone new….to cum and play…” The blonde felt Tera’s thoughts overwhelming hers but did not resist. She was so in love now that she’d do anything to please the demonic seductress.

“I…imagine…” The blonde husk began to morph, taking its cue completely from Tera. The Flexi body was only a physical vehicle…the changes were all Tera’s will.

“Miliani…is cumming to play….” As she changed, sensation poured back along the link to Tera. She felt the shapeshifter’s body as an extension of her own…no organs, no bones, just a homogenous hunk of plastic that burned with sensation as a single human sized G spot.

“Your perfect Polynesian toy.” Within moment’s her new slave had conformed exactly to her wishes. The blonde beauty was no more and in her place was a wanton Filipino fuckslave, ready and eager to obey.

Miliani keened in delight as she came, gushing liberally all over Tera’s hand as the new persona was cemented in her mind.

“MMMMM Mistress,” she purred luxuriantly in an islander accent, lying back and parting her legs wide to give Tera better access. “How may your slave Miliani please you this day?”


Tera smiled as Miliani came wildly. She rubbed her fingers in a slow lazy circle around Miliani’s pussy making her gasp and moan in pleasure.

Tera moved her soaking fingers away from Miliani’s sopping pussy, and then slowly began to run her long pink tongue over her own fingers licking them clean. She looked at her with a sultry smile and whispered, “mmmmmmm…. You always please me my love… You taste sooooo divine….”

With a lustful look, Tera moved onto her tummy and lay between Miliani’s tender thighs. She took a breath and then blew across her wet folds sending spasms of pleasure throughout her body. Tera’s hands trailed up and down Miliani’s thighs making goosebumps erupt across her tanned legs. As Miliani watched, Tera’s long tail rose into the air and began to move like a long red metronome behind her. Tera’s smooth tanned bum rocked slowly in time with her tail catching Miliani’s attention.

Tera looked up for a moment and said softly, “Are you soooo hot and wet my love? Is your pussy in so much need for me? Tera moved her fingers back to Miliani’s pussy and teased at her clit gently before she gave her a wink and began to suck and nibble at Miliani’s clit making her world the pleasure that Tera was giving her…


Miliani basked in the pleasure that Mistress gave, content knowing that her sole reason for existing was to amuse the ravishing demoness before her. She longed to show her devition in a more aggressive fashion but it seemed that for now Tera wished to use her body as an erotic playground.

She could live with that.

“I am always ready to serve,” the ensorcelled woman declared as her still green pupilled eyes met the succubi’s. “I need you as I need the sun and the sand. As the air that gives me breath and the waters that quench my thirst…so do I need you.”

She laid back on the beach, moaning softly as she accepted the gift of Mistress’ love. Her hands reached down and softly stroked her hair, moving to thumb the horns that peeked forth from her raven locks.


As Miliani’s fingers stroked across Tera’s horns, she shivered and gave a little moan at the pleasure. She slipped her tongue into Miliani’s slit for a moment sending a strong pulse of pleasure through her entire body. Tera slowly… Ever so slowly lifted her head and removed her tongue from Miliani’s pussy with a little pop as she slipped free.

Tera looked at her and whispered, “Your happiness is so important to me… Your service is cherished by me… You are special in ways that cannot be described in words my love…”

Tera moved onto her hands and knees and then placed her lips just above Miliani’s clit. She began to kiss her way up her firm tanned tummy until she reached her bellybutton. She slowly swirled her tongue around the outside of it gently rimming around and around until she licked into the centre of it sending goosebumps across Miliani’s tummy and making her quiver. Tera pressed her lips against the skin and then sucked softly and passionately for a moment humming slightly as she did.

She crawled a little further up Miliani’s body kissing her way slowly between her breasts and then up her chest sucking the skin into her mouth as she did. Soon Tera had placed herself over Miliani’s body, their nipples rubbing together gently, their lips brushing and teasing at each other until Tera was looking into Miliani’s eyes.

She smiled and gave her a long deep kiss that held her attention for a moment. Just a moment. And then Tera’s tail slipped between her and Miliani’s legs. And then as Tera kissed her, Miliani felt the touch of Tera’s tail trailing against her thighs and then the length of it slowly rubbed against her folds making her buck slightly at the touch.

Tera whispered to her, “Are you ready to please me my love?”



Isn’t pleasure something best shared?



Nov 14 2011

Storm Clouds 144 – An ongoing Succubi Story

This is the continuing story of the Succubi called Storm Clouds…

If you want to read previous chapters, please click the link in the Tale header at the top of the page marked Storm Clouds or click here...

And so we return to Storm Clouds again… Nothing added from the last time save editing by my heart to whom I am, as always, grateful…


Storm Clouds 144

Chapter 21

By TeraS


The thing about the Dark was that it was too confident. It thought that it had all of the answers and that no one could oppose it.

That was almost true.

She could, and did . . . regularly.

It had become almost an obsession for her now. There were so few who would challenge the Dark when it appeared, and so it fell to her to do so. It wasn’t a chore or an imposition; it had to be done, and she had seen enough of the Dark and what it was capable of to know that the best thing to do was what she did: drive it mad with anger and make it stop thinking.

Losing the one portal did that. Then letting it stew in its anger had made it get involved intimately with mortals and their world. She wondered if, this time, it would actually learn something from the experience or not.

Making the portal vanish was child’s play for a being like her. If the Dark ever figured out just how powerful she was, it might actually pause to think twice about the plans it had against Tera and her kind.


The thought did make her smile as the portal showing the severed tail reappeared among all of the Dark’s other ones. She stood there for a time, tapping a single pink fingernail against the surface and trying to decide what would be the most unpleasant thing she might do.

She could destroy this portal—the thought had been there before—but she had her own plans, and, for those, this one portal needed to remain, at least for the moment, in spite of what it showed.

The tapping stopped as she placed that hand against the surface and whispered to the awful image that it showed, “It will not be long. Promise.”

And, unlike some beings, she kept her promises.

She turned away, coming to the decision that, for once, just this once, she was going to make the Dark know what it was to lose something valuable.

What followed was the sound of fingernails raking across portal after portal, each of which turned white against the darkness, throwing light into a place which despised it. She didn’t ruin every single one of them, but, when she was done, she had left the Dark but three portals.

She thought that she just might be able to hear the scream of anger from it from three universes away when it returned to see what she had done here, and that thought made her smile slightly.

She glanced once more at the portals that remained, satisfied that this would be a problem for it, that it would have to spend effort and time repairing the damage if it could, and that, thankfully, might give the others needed time to figure out what was happening and where.

As much as she wanted to, she couldn’t actually get involved in the battle or make choices for those involved. It was, after all, necessary that all beings make their own choices, no matter how wrong or ill-advised they might well be.

Still, she had one thing that the Dark didn’t have: trust. Trust in others, trust that they would make good choices, but, most of all, trust in that one person that saved her life so long ago and, in doing so, changed her own universe for the better.

She would always owe that person for that gift.

She passed into the ether, on her way to where she needed to be. If the Dark could get involved with mortals, she could as well … to a point. But first she needed to talk to someone who needed to understand that some paths were not worth following.

Following the path of one who owed the succubi—and Tera, in particular—her life … that was the most foolish thing that it had ever done.

And it would soon learn.

As for the Dark, possessing one of its pawns was distasteful. But there was little choice. That damnable creature had cost it its watch over the tail. The one thing that would, if its plans went to completion, cause the barriers to fall before it and thus have what it wanted most.

But having to deal with a corporal form? That was something that it did not enjoy in the slightest. Emotions, thoughts, images from this pawn were getting caught between its own thoughts and, as well, it knew that its own thoughts would be mixing the other way.

But the important thoughts, the ones that it needed for itself, those it kept under lock and key, or so the Dark would believe. The problem was, as it always was, that nothing is ever completely closed off when beings merge, even if only for a short time.

Fingerprints leave smudges, after all …

It took the Dark some time to return to where the tail was kept. The wards around the place made it impossible for someone to appear there without seeing the place first and entering at one specific spot. From the outside there were traps and obstacles that it knew would stop any magic user from getting close.

But this pawn was tuned to the place, and the wards would fall before it. Even so, the time … the time was taking far too long for the Dark’s liking.

And so time passed, the Dark fumed, and the universe turned …



Storm Clouds

Chapter 22

By TeraS


“I think I am.”

Tom looked behind him expecting to see Camilla there, and she was … sort of.

It was Camilla, but her tail and horns were grey instead of black and her hair had changed color from blonde to purple. Tom couldn’t stop the words that came out: “I liked the blonde and black better, Camilla.”

She smirked.

And Tom paused. He was pretty sure that Camilla didn’t smirk.

“It’s a long story, Tom, and right now we haven’t got the time.”

And that was wrong, as well. Camilla never called him Tom. Mary Ann tried to get away again, and Tom was forced into flipping her over, straddling her, and then locking her wrists together with handcuffs before sitting on her legs. Having some control of the situation, he looked at Camilla and said, “We’ve got the time. You want to let me in on why the style change? Got tired of your hair color or something?”

She ran her left hand through her hair, pulling on it slightly, “Okay, short version: I’m Camilla’s bad side; I’m a bitch; I’m nothing like her, and you don’t want to screw with me. That good enough for you?”

“I’m never going to understand this, am I?”

She smirked again, “Oh, I dunno … You’d make an interesting Incubi … I can put in a good word for you if you’re up for it.”

Tom shook his head: “Thanks, but I have enough issues with my life as it is. The universe isn’t what I knew it was, there are people—like you—who are legends, and I am supposed to deal with that. Oh yes, and I am acting under the command of the Queen of a race of beings that exist on sex and pleasure and I have no idea why I should be, but I’m doing it anyway.”

She nodded, “Tera does have her ways, doesn’t she? At least she isn’t using that pitchfork of hers on you. Mind you, some like that sort of thing…”

“So what do I call you? ‘Not Camilla’ or ‘Punkie Brewster’ or what?”

She leaned down so that they looked into each other’s eyes: “You really want to know who I am?”

Tom didn’t finch: “I trust Camilla. She’s proven herself. I don’t trust you.”

She nodded: “Good; backbone and will. I can see why Tera wants your help. You may call me Nina.”

“All right; ‘Nina’ it is. Tell me something, seriously: does every one of you have an ‘a’ at the end of your name?”

She laughed, “No … Just some of us do. Congratulations, Tom; you just endeared yourself to me. Camilla will be pleased to know that.  Make sure you tell her when you see her again.”

The smirk vanished and she looked past Tom to Mary Ann on the floor beneath him, “You mind getting off her? She and I have … a past.”

“Good or bad?”

“I won’t kill her, at least, not just yet.”

“If I don’t?”

“Then I’ll have to move you, Tom. You don’t want me to, I promise you.”

Tom got up and moved to the side. Nina reached down and pulled Mary Ann to her knees by the handcuffs before grasping her chin. “Hello, bitch. It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. How long has it been?

The fear in Mary Ann only allowed a quiet whisper of an answer, “Babylon.”

“That’s right. As I remember it, you came into my temple and tried to turn my followers, didn’t you? You corrupted them from the top down and, in the end, you were responsible for how many deaths?”

“I don’t know.”

“I do. I remember them very well. You watched as they fought, four hundred eighty-six of them falling to your promises of riches that were hidden from them. And when it was over, what did they find inside the walls?”



Mary Ann closed her eyes, “Because everything they gave you, you returned to them … and more. You … you cared about cattle and …”

Tom didn’t see Nina’s hand as it struck Mary Ann, sending her sprawling across the floor.

“They are not cattle, you worthless bitch! They are more than you will ever be or ever could be. You can’t understand that, can you?”

There was no answer, and Nina pulled her once again to her knees by the handcuffs: “Here’s the deal. You tell us what’s going on and who’s in charge, and I won’t kill you today. You lie to me, and I’ll start taking you apart one piece at a time …”

She extended her left hand and, to Tom’s shock, a silver sword appeared there, flames dancing along its blade. Tom thought he could hear the sword … growling?

She placed the edge against Mary Ann’s neck: “You know what this is. You know exactly what will happen if I strike you with it. Camilla wouldn’t; she follows the new ways.  But I don’t. So make up your mind, right now, and tell me why you are here and what you have done to Ginger.”

Tom coughed, “Nina … You said you wouldn’t kill her.”

She didn’t look at Tom: “Oh, this won’t kill her. It will, however, take away what makes her special. What she is, she won’t be anymore.”  A cruel smile appeared, “And since she is so enamored with being immortal …”

Mary Ann closed her eyes, “You are a fool. I serve powers greater than you. You’ll never leave this room alive if you harm me.”

“Oh I’ve already harmed you. Now I’ll cripple you …”

And she pulled the blade back and then swung it towards Mary Ann’s neck …

Nov 13 2011

A review of Lust Eaters by Jack Shadow

It’s interesting to see how other people see the concept of Succubi and Incubi. More so when they take their ideas and turn them into stories and novels. Occasionally I don’t agree with the ideas, but I do give them a chance to give me story that keeps my interest in spite of what the concepts might be.

And this time, this is one of those ideas that is tempting, interesting, but just falls short of give me enough of the world that I want to see…

Lust Eaters by Jack Shadow

Lust Eaters by Jack Shadow

Appearances are deceiving. Thinking he is rescuing a girl in distress, an accountant unwittingly brings home an ancient evil that enslaves his entire family. Anastasia has been walking the earth since the dawn of time feeding on the lust of men. Trent thought he was rescuing her, now his wife must rescue him and their son from clutches of a demon, but demons can only be destroyed by another demon. Book 1 of the Lust Eaters Series introduces readers to a hidden world where sex demons feed off the lust of mortals.

The story begins with Trent on his way home seeing a woman in trouble and rescuing her. It turns out that the woman, Anastasia, isn’t what she appears to be. She is a Succubus, and over the course of the story uses her powers to take control of Trent, his wife Nancy and their son Rick.

Her control is over the men and through them Nancy who does her best to try and find a way to overcome the control that Anastasia has over her family. But the cost of that might be more than she realizes it will be.

I won’t spoil the end of the story, nor anything else about the work, but suffice it to say that there is a battle between Anastasia and Nancy and what happens to her family changes their lives forever.

I have to say that the story didn’t quite work for me as well as I had hoped it would. There were a lot of sex scenes in the work, but the connections between them were not enough to hold my interest as I had hoped.

It strikes me that a story is not sex alone when it comes to Succubi and Incubi. There must be more than that for a work to take hold of me and make it worth my time to read.

This author came close to making this work here, but the sex seemed to be more important than the world that the Succubi and Incubi exist in and we get but a small taste of it which was truly disappointing to me.

I should note that there are moments of incest in the story, it’s not the focus of the work by far, but readers should be aware of it…

I’m giving this work 3 pitchforks out of five.

Too short, the universe of the Succubi and Incubi needed more exploration. I understand that it is the first book in a series, but really there should have been so much more background shared by far.



Nov 12 2011

Devil Girl by Christian Papaz

I found another Devil Girl or as I call them, Succubus, sticker on Cafepress this week… I do like art that is sort of old school in nature, like the Betty Boop or Betty Page works of the 1940s and 1950s…

And this piece of Succubus Art I think falls into that very well…

Devil Girl by Christian Papaz

Devil Girl by Christian Papaz

This is the work of an artist named Christian Papaz, who calls this Devil Girl. I found it originally as a sticker on sale at CafePress here, it also appears on various other items as usual there but you can also find more art by Christian Papaz, more accurately as Christian Papazoglakis, here at his website as well.

I like the combination of sexy and cute in this work quite a lot. The long latex-like boots are an interesting counterpoint to the skirt and top the Succubus is wearing. I like her hair, the style, shape and texture of it is lovely. Nice little horns and a lovely tail as well that she shows off really well too in her pose…

It strikes me that she is, in a way, showing off the barest hint of her sexuality, not quite enough to be gauche, but more than enough to attract attention and in doing so, capture the soul of the one she is looking towards…

Deliciously naughty and yet very classy which I really love…



Nov 11 2011

A moment of reflection on Remembrance Day

I have tried to post something on Remembrance Day every year that the Tale has existed and so this is what came to my thoughts on this day…



By TeraS


Another day arrives

and the world spins on

Life continues

as it is want to


The sun rises over

the green fields

The wind twirling

around the markers


Silence comes again

but not for long

Not this day

and only on this one


The hours pass

until the eleventh arrives

The fields once quiet

awakens to life


Families arrive

visit their own

Lovers arrive

visit their loves


Sons arrive

talk to their fathers

Daughter arrive

cry for their moms


Flowers are left

to show they were there

Mementos are kept

of the ones that remain


The moment comes

silence reigns once more

But with the ones

that remember making it more


In their thoughts

the passed are alive

In their minds

they speak again


Around them all

the markers stand

Unseen to the living

shadows of the past


Watching in hope

of those that remember

Their lives not wasted

for the lives they saved


The moment passes

and the shadows fade

Not their memories

they always shall remain


Please remember on this day.



Nov 11 2011

Cornerstones – A Story of the Realm by TeraS

I know full well that my heart doesn’t particularly like having a fuss made on his birthday. As much as I love him and his Beloved, I just can’t allow this day to pass by without giving him something in return for all that he has done for me…

It might not be much, but it is for him and him alone…


By TeraS



One of the most important, though he would never admit to it, persons in the Realm is the one that Tera calls her Heart. The story of how he came to be known by that name is a story passed into legend and story…

…and stories are, after all, what the Realm is all about.

A long time ago, Tera was at a cross-roads. Now that’s not to say she was considering changing her views on life, love and happiness. Nor was she thinking about the wonders that her Eternal had, and still does, share with her.

No, Tera was trying to solve one important problem that her Realm didn’t quite have figured out within it. You see, all beings, every single one, need something to believe in. That’s not simply words, but a meaning to life and all that it beings.

And Tera, well she was trying to find the one person that could, quite clearly, understand that there was more to them than the horns and tail that everyone saw. But that also was never going to be enough by itself. No, what Tera understood was that the right person had to have the wisdom to know, the knowledge to share, and the will to trust.

For in the end, trust was the hardest thing to have.

The search took some time, and Tera didn’t mind that as she found herself meeting, minus horns and tail of course, those that believed in higher powers and more so had the faith and mind to accept that which was in front of them. But the thing was that not one of them could see past the woman that asked questions of them that challenged their beliefs and values to what was hidden beneath.

It was a damp fall afternoon when she came upon a small town and noticed something different about the people that lived there. It wasn’t that they were special. Not that they were powerful. Not even that they had gifts that others didn’t.

No what caught Tera’s attention was that in each and every one of them their souls burned a little brighter than many she had seen before. And it wasn’t a glow that was caused by powers above. It was the glow of enlightenment and understanding given by one of their own that lived among them.

She stayed in the town for a while, talking to those that would speak to her and answer her seemingly odd questions, and there were many of those. She learned that the people in the town credited their joy in the world to a man that believed himself to be no one special, but did more than any person in the town did for those in need, those wanting to talk, and most of all, those that wanted to believe.

Tera found that she wanted to meet this man and know of him and so she found herself standing in front of a small three story home sitting quietly near the outskirts of the town, just across from a quaint white church that she could see, quite clearly, had the same glow it in that all in the town shared.

She was very sure to not look out of place when she found herself at the door, every lock of hair in place, a modest red dress that wasn’t quite as sexy as she normally wore, but did manage to look flattering nonetheless. In her hands she held a small tin box as a gift to give and then knocked on the door softly.

The door opened to reveal a middle aged man. He looked like the sort of man that you’d like to have as your uncle: a kind face; eyes that held the glimmer of mirth and joy he carried with him; the stature of years of listening, understanding, seeing and helping; a life filled with the joy of doing good work wherever he was needed to be.

And at that moment, he seemed to know that this was were he was meant to be.

The first words spoken were his and, as Tera would tell, the ones that settled everything for her: “Hello Dear One.”

What was more right to her was her reply that received a warm smile in return from him: “Hello my Heart. I… I would like to talk with you if I might… I brought cookies if you’d like to share?”

They spent the afternoon talking about things. Not the questions that Tera had asked before, as it seemed to her that they were not needed. No the questions were ones that they both seemed to have interests in.

“What is a soul?”

“Why does it matter?”

“Why is it that so few can see the value in it?”

Tera shared her cookies and he shared his tea with her. When his Beloved arrived, the glow from her was as bright as that from his soul. She had the look of contentment that all those that had their soulmate with them showed. A smile as warm as his, joy in her eyes that never faded from view. More so the understanding that when the calling came for their good works, she would forever support him and she knew full well that he would never see her work alone. When the two of them were together and their love shared in mind, body and soul, Tera could see how it was that the strength of all in this town came to be.

And it did bring tears to her eyes.

When they saw Tera wiping away her tears, they both asked what was wrong, how they could help, and more. It was when they embraced her and she slipped allowing her horns to appear and for them to see her tail hugging them both that Tera thought for a moment that they would reject her as had been done many a time before.

But that didn’t happen.

The words that came were, and Tera should have known from the beginning: “Your light is bright Dear One and horns and all that comes with them can show who are Angels too.”

Tera asked them to trust her to show them her home, and they came with her to the Realm for the first time. On the first day of their arrival there, it was with open eyes, open hearts and most of all, understanding that although the Realm was a wondrous place, there was something important missing with Tera or her Eternal explaining it to them.

Two cornerstones of the building were laid. One by Tera and her Eternal, the other by her Heart and his Beloved. There was nothing else there that first day, it would take some time Tera had said to build what needed to be created.

But on the next morning, when they all passed by the spot, to return back to the Earth her Heart and his Beloved, they were all surprised to see what had come to be.

There are places of light that are, simply, a means to show devotion to a belief. Walls to protect from the elements, materials made to last for centuries and more, the purpose to mark the place to come, share, and be loved. What had been created was more than that. It was made of the belief of the four of them.

The belief in love, understanding, devotion and trust.

Save for the two stones that stood there, all else was made of light. Shimmering golden light that warmed those both within the golden walls, but also warmed the souls of all of those that lived in the Realm. It seemed right that a place of devotion to doing good should have that belief build it’s structure, walls, windows and more. There was not one stick of wood to support it, not one window to block the light within from the light without. It was large, this was true, but them the Realm had many within it and, truly, all were welcome within. And a place like this should, always, welcome all without hesitation.
Her heart was embarrassed of course, it was too much by far, but the place alone wasn’t the end of what Tera had shared.

Tera gave, to them both, one of the Books of the Realm.

There were but three of those Books, and as much as he did protest and try to return the gift, Tera just smiled and pointed at her horns before explaining, “You are part of us and we of you my heart… both of you mean the world to us and so this world should be yours as well.”

That book remains with Tera’s heart to this day, the pages telling stories and tales of the world that he, with her and those that believe, make each and every day of their lives.

Eventually they did return to the town of light and Tera left a gift there, in the town for eternity. She placed a single stone from the Realm in one place that her Heart and his Beloved told her was the right place for it to be. A spot where light would touch it and it would know the love of her Heart and his Beloved evermore. A precious few would come upon the marker in ages to come and it would be reset again and again in places of light in the world, but none would match that of this first, perfect place.

But the most important reason for it being there was for her Heart and his Beloved to have a means to visit the Realm whenever they wished for as long as they wished to and thankfully, and forever more, they did so and in doing that made the Realm the place of light that it was meant to be.

Nov 11 2011

Would the Lost Girl’s life be better as a stripper?

The seventh episode of Lost Girl season two finally aired this week, and honestly it was mostly a lot of teasing in more than one way.

That’s not a bad thing as, in one way, they revealed an important plot point for the future, but didn’t explain it, leaving us a cliff hangar of an ending to deal with. The other reveal, and yes I am going there, was all of the strippers that appeared in the episode…

Episode twenty, and the season two seventh episode of the Lost Girl TV series, was this week. Kenzi gets hypnotized and hot under the collar for a stripper, Bo gets answers from Lauren, but doesn’t know what to do with them, Trick has a headache to deal with between the Light and Dark Fae, and Dyson is an ass in more than one way…

This is the seventh review of the second season of of Lost Girl. A summary of this episode has been added to the SuccuWiki, but won’t be adding my commentary to the articles there as that is what the Tale is for….

Bo discovers that when Fae become strippers then you have…

Fae Gone Wild

The episode begins with Bo (Anna Silk) and Kenzi (Ksenia Solo) sitting on their couch at Bo’s home. Sitting between them is the Morrigan’s gift to save Nadia, Lauren’s girlfriend, that Bo received in the previous episode It’s Better to Burn Out Than Fae Away. Kenzi demands that Bo opens the gift, but she refuses to do so, worried that it is a trap, or worse, according to Kenzi, send Lauren into the arms of Nadia. When Bo declares that it is not even hers to open, Kenzi then taunts her with the idea that they should get rid of it. Bo’s reply is to snatch the gift back, saying that would be underhanded and selfish to which Kenzi says she is not. Bo says she could be those things, but Kenzi just smiles and tells her it’s good to have dreams before touching Bo on the nose and getting off the couch.

The scene then moves to the police station that has appeared in many episodes before. A cop killer is chained to a desk by a police officer and then locked in a room alone. Moments later a trio of masked strippers appear and begin dancing for the police officers, all of their attention placed on them. The men appear to be tranced or at least hypnotized by them and, over time, the women disarm them and take their clothing and other items. While this happens, the cop killer watches from the locked room as if anticipating something.

Returning from the opening credits, Dyson (Kristen Holden-Ried) and Hale (K.C. Collins) walk into the station to discover the officers in the room disarmed, partially disrobed, and confused about what exactly had happened to them. As well, the cop killer is no longer in the locked room and appears to have escaped with the help of the strippers. Hale and Dyson check the surveillance cameras and discover that the cop killer, Zephyr (Robin Kasyanov), was indeed taken from the police station with the help of the strippers who it appears seem to know him. Dyson comes to the conclusion that the woman came into the station, seduce enough of the men to give up their clothing and then took Zephyr away. Hale comes to the conclusion that it has to be a group of Fae that did this. Dyson agrees, but he comments that the scent of Fae is very weak and he doesn’t know why.

Bo and Kenzi in the meantime are in a park with a Fae woman named Donna (Maria Del Mar). Kenzi reads from a newspaper article about the breakout at the station and Donna states that the girl in the pictures is her daughter, and that she, and her daughter, are simple tree folk and she doesn’t understand why her daughter would do this. Bo asks if Donna is sure that it is her daughter and she says she is sure even after ten years. It turns out, according to her, that they had a fight, her daughter left and she never heard from her again. Donna asks Bo to find her daughter Sheri (Cristina Rosato) as according to the other Fae in town, Bo is the best, and that since the police will believe that Sheri is with Zephyr that she has to do something. Bo then agrees to take on the case, find Sheri and help her if she can. After Donna leaves, Kenzi notes that the words “simple tree folk” were repeated over and over again and she thinks that they haven’t been told the truth. Bo agrees noting that the Fae have never been straight with them. Kenzi repeats Zephyr several times and after deciding that it must be Russian, makes a phone call to someone, speaking Russian as she does to try and get information on him. Bo is unhappy about the entire situation as she knows full well that she will have to be on Dyson’s turf and sneaking around him.

Hale is interrogating the officers that were involved in the stripper breakout and in each case the testimony comes down to the men being dazzled by the woman and not remembering much other than the cup sizes of them and not much else. Dyson then arrives and drags Hale off to the last known location of Zephyr. At that moment, Bo has arrived at that location to find a van parked inside of what looks like a warehouse. She finds on the floor one of the outfits that the women were wearing as well as one of the masks as well. She checks the van for clues, finding it empty, but takes some items from the glovebox that she discovers there when she hears a car pull up outside. She attempts to hide, but walks into the body of Zephyr hanging from the ceiling to her surprise. He is dead, hung from the neck and one of his hands are removed from his corpse. Dyson then calls out Bo’s name and she spins around with the words: “I’d like to report a murder.”

Returning from commercial, Bo attempts to deflect Dyson’s questions about what she is doing there, but in the end she tells him that she is investigating a missing persons case, but refuses to tell him anything more about it. Hale comes back in after looking at the can and comments that it is empty and the glovebox was cleaned out. Bo quickly makes her excuses to them and then leaves the scene as quickly as she can. Dyson is sure that Bo is holding out on him, but lets her go. The two decide that they need to take the body to Lauren for further examination and do so.

Bo finds Kenzi at The Dal Riata and the two of them examine what Bo was able to take from the van. They are in the middle of a conversation about the tree folk when Kenzi suddenly hides the evidence as someone approaches their table. That turns out to be Keira (Lina Roessler) who begins to talk to them both, but stops as Trick (Richard Howland) comes by and asks him for his most expensive bottle of scotch to celebrate a business deal she had made recently in Zurich which involves her investing in a medical research facility. When she walks away, and Trick passes by, Bo asks him if Keira is rich and Trick confirms that. Bo’s comment on that news is that “Dyson’s girlfriend is a billionaire and I live in a house without walls.” Kenzi then shows Bo a VIP membership card for a strip club called the Naughty Ladies Gentleman’s Club and putting two and two together, the pair leave to see if Sheri and the other girls involved are there or not.

Dyson and Hale are back at the station going over the evidence they have and Hale discovers that one of the officers, Boyd (Richard Chevolleau) had recently lost his keycard to the station. Dyson remembers something and shows Hale a picture of Boyd being very friendly with one of the strippers and they come to the conclusion that he must know this woman from somewhere. Bo and Kenzi meanwhile arrive in the strip club to find Sheri and all of the other women they are looking for dancing there. As they watch, Kenzi comments that she didn’t know that she liked “chicks” and Bo figures out that the women, all of them, must be Fae using their powers on the humans in the room to control them, and playing on the centre stage is Sheri.

After another commercial break, Bo and Kenzi are sitting at a table watching Sheri finish her set. Kenzi asks if Bo feels what they are doing to her and Bo says that yes, she is horny but not hypnotized. After Sheri is finished, Kenzi calls her over to their table and pays for Sheri to perform a lap dance for Bo. Bo attempts to talk to her, but Sheri refuses to talk at first and tries to use her powers on Bo, but when Bo resists her and then begins to question her, Sheri pulls away assuming that Bo is a cop. Kenzi then explains that Bo is looking for a job and Sheri shrugs that off saying that she needs to talk to Lewis (David Hemstead). He tells Bo that she could be a headliner at the strip club in no time, but would have to pay a price. Bo explains that she was thinking more about tending the bar and Lewis agrees to that idea as it would make his customers happy.

Bo and Kenzi return home and talk about what happened. Bo surprises Kenzi by telling her that she is going to take the bartender job there. Kenzi tries to get Bo to understand that they did their job, they found Sheri and at this point they should leave her to Dyson and Hale to deal with. Bo refuses saying that there is no one looking out for Sheri and Kenzi tells her that “that’s what makes you, you.”

Hale in the meantime is interrogating Boyd about what happened once again. He tells Boyd that they know his card was used by the strippers to gain access to the station and that makes him an accomplice to a cop killer. Boyd tries to explain that he is innocent of what happened and that it was possible that he had been at a strip club, met Sheri, told her that he would be involved in moving Zephyr, and she took his card. Hale then tells Boyd to write down the address of the club.

Elsewhere, Trick is standing over a map of the city which has many markers pinned to it. He is on the phone and repeats that a group of Light Fae Nuns attacked a group of Dark Fae customers at a charity clothing drive. After hanging up, he stares at the map with all of the incidents marked on it very concerned. Bo then enters the room but before she can see anything that he is looking at, he covers it up and asks how he can help her. Bo tells him that she has a human with one hand cut off, and a very bad haircut. Trick asks if there was body fat removed and Bo tells him that he was kind of filleted. Trick explains that someone is making something called The Hand of Glory. It turns out that it is a candle used as a talisman by thieves which allows anyone that lights it to break into anything that they wish to as long as the candle remains lit and the only thing that can douse the candle is milk. When Bo asks why everyone doesn’t own one, she is told that it is a grizzly affair to make and that the hand retains the personality of the person it was taken from.

At the same moment, Lauren is talking to Dyson and also explains about the Hand to him, including that the candle is the fat of the person, the wick is their hair and that the one killed must be a murderer. She also tells him that the more vicious the killer the more powerful the hand is. After getting the information Dyson asks her if she has talked to anyone else about this case and her answer is no. When he leaves, Lauren asks if she could stay in the room they are in for a while as she has an escort and this is one of the few times she feels free. Dyson tells her to take all the time she needs and then leaves the room. Lauren then calls Bo who is still at Trick’s when she answers the call. After talking about the Hand for a moment, Lauren then asks Bo if she has had any luck with the solution that the Morrigan had promised for her. Bo’s answer is that she only has more questions. Asking Lauren if there was anything else, the answer is no, and then she hangs up on Lauren abruptly. The next scene is of Bo at the strip club tending bar and trying to talk to Sheri. Bo asks why she doesn’t go to another club and Sheri tells her that she was planning to leave the business soon and do something on her own. Sheri is then called to the stage to perform her set and, just after she leaves, Dyson and Hale appear in the club and confront Bo.

Back from commercial and Dyson begins to grill Bo on what she is doing at the club. Dyson is not pleased with Bo getting in the way of his investigation and before she can make her excuses, Sheri appears on stage and Hale puts it all together commenting that their missing persons case is the same one as Bo’s. They go to arrest Sheri, but Bo pleads with them not to interfere and give her a chance to find out why Sheri made the Hand of Glory. When she tells Dyson that he needs her, he tells Bo that he’s not sure that he can trust her anymore. He does however relent and after telling Bo to be careful, the pair leaves. Afterwards, Bo notices that Lewis is leaving his office and she makes her way inside. She discovers that his office has a number of fishing trophies including sharks and other big-game fish. She searches the office and finds a save behind a poster from the club on a wall. When she attempts to touch the safe, she finds her hand passing through it as if it didn’t exist. After taking a picture of it and hiding the safe again, she is confronted by Lewis before she can leave. Bo makes the excuse that she was admiring his collection of trophies and Lewis preens among them telling Bo of some of the adventures he has had. When Lewis becomes to close for her liking, Bo takes a glass he was holding and then excuses herself to return to the bar once more.

Bo meets Dyson and Hale at The Dal Riata and tells them about the invisible safe and what else she has learned. They blow up the image of the safe that Bo took and Dyson explains that the safe was made by the Nibelung Dwarves, the best metal smiths in the world. The unique part of this safe is that they managed to make the metal exist in two different dimensions and that it cannot be broken into, except of course if you use the Hand of Glory. Dyson takes a phone call and also reveals that Lewis is a Dark Fae named Kobe Ah Ket and he is a Bunyip, a water spirit that abducts women. Hale suggests that they arrest Lewis immediately, but Bo pleads for more time for her to get Sheri what she needs in that safe. Dyson agrees but warns that she has until noon in order to do so as they will arrest him at that time.

Bo and Kenzi meet Donna at Bo’s house and demand that she tell them the truth about what is going on. Donna explains that she and Sheri are Selkie, or as Bo calls them, seal shifters. Donna explains that she gave away her pelt to be with a human and then had Sheri. Bo is confused and asks how it is possible when it is illegal for the Fae to have children with humans, Donna brushes that off explaining that Selkie are in a grey area and that rule does not apply to them. She also explains that she was pregnant with Sheri before she met the fisherman she loved. Donna also reveals that she never explained to Sheri that she was a Selkie either, and hid Sheri’s pelt from her. When Sheri turned fifteen she found her pelt and the breakup with her daughter happened. Bo asks what happens if a Selkie does not have her pelt and the answer is that they can never return to the sea.

Bo returns to the strip club to find it empty and Sheri working on something. Bo confronts her and reveals that she knows that Sheri is trying to get her pelt and that she is going to use the Hand of Glory to get it. Bo also tells her that Donna sent her to help and that she isn’t going to be the one to turn her in for Zephyr’s murder. Sheri explains that Zephyr had hurt one of the girls badly and that when they discovered he was a murderer, the rest just happened. She also reveals to Bo that all of the girls in the club are Selkie like her. She explains that Lewis tricked them into turning human and then took their pelts in exchange for the money the girls needed for their plans of building a beachside hotel. Lewis made them a deal of working for him for one year and then being released, but he never kept his end of the bargain. Sheri asks Bo what her intends to do, and Bo tells her that she will help her as Donna asked her to. The group of Selkie gather and prepare to light the Hand, with Sheri’s promise to Bo that she will see her mother immediately afterwards. Sheri attempts to light the Hand but is interrupted as Lewis enters the club, enraged at the damaged doors and wanting to know what is going on. Dyson and Hale arrive next and hold Lewis at gunpoint giving Bo and Sheri a chance to light the Hand. They do so and everyone in the room with them is frozen were they are, only Bo and Sheri able to move as they were touching the candle when it was lit, who rush off in the direction of Lewis’ office.

Back from commercial again finds Bo and Sheri in the office revealing the safe. Sheri attempts to touch the safe, but her hand passes through it. Bo suggests that maybe the hand knows what to do and after Sheri places it on a desk an ethereal hand of smoke rises from the candle, approaches the safe and opens it revealing the pelts within. As they remove then, the candle flashes and the hand reappears, flies across the room and begins to choke Sheri. Bo finds a container of milk and pours it over the candle putting an end to its powers and saving Sheri. On the main floor, everyone moves again and moments later Bo and Sheri appear with the pelts, all of the Sekie rushing over to them to retrieve what is theirs. Lewis attempts to stop them, but Hale arrests him and takes him away. Dyson then confronts Bo telling her that he has to arrest Sheri now for what she has done. Bo asks that he doesn’t that no one needs to know what Sheri and her sisters did. Dyson asks Bo if she wants him to conceal all that has happened from the Ash and she explains that what Sheri did was to free her and her sisters from slavery. Sheri then come over and asks if Dyson had ever had something special to him taken away. Dyson and Bo look at each other quietly for a moment, obviously in pain over what had happened to them before Dyson agrees to cover things up with Bo’s help.

The final scenes begin with Trick looking at a newspaper that has a headline on it that the death of Zephyr had been deemed a suicide and smiles. The phone then rings with another report that there has been another attack between the Light and Dark Fae in the city. Trick then makes a call to someone else telling them that he needs to talk to Lauren if the Ash will allow it.

Donna, Sheri and Bo are together on a beach, Donna reconciling with her daughter finally and healing if not all of the wounds between them at least making a start to do so. Cheri thanks Bo one more time for what she did for them all and after a last embrace with her mother, she returns to the sea transforming into a deal and disappearing into the surf.

Dyson and Keira are next seen at Dyson’s home being intimate together. Her phone rings and Dyson throws it away complaining that all of her calls are important to which she answers that she is a powerful woman. She then offhandedly mentions a painting she bought for herself, a rug she bought as well and tells Dyson that she might as well make herself at home since she seems to be there most of the time. They continue to embrace and have sex, but Dyson has a troubled look as they do that Keira never sees.

Lauren visits Trick, a watcher standing nearby to be sure that she does not escape. Trick tells her that over the past week there has been an increase in hostility between the Light and the Dark Fae, and always unprovoked. Trick asks if she has even seen something like this to which Lauren explains that nothing she knows of would trigger the blind rage that Trick describes the Fae being in. Before they can continue to talk about the problem, Bo arrives. Lauren’s watcher blocks Bo’s way to Lauren, but Trick offers the man a beer and Bo and Lauren have a chance to talk.

Bo tells Lauren that she owes her an apology, that she was angry with Lauren and that it was unfair but it was because Lauren was unfair to Bo. She then places the Morrigan’s gift on the table and tells Lauren that she knows about Nadia because the Morrigan told her. Lauren tells Bo she is relieved that she knows, that it had been killing her not to tell Bo about Nadia. Lauren explains that Nadia is lying in a coma for the past five years because of something that Lauren did. Lauren explains that she was in the Congo on a research grant, Nadia was with her taking pictures of refuges for a magazine. Five months into their excursion a disease attacked nearby villages and Lauren went to help. And that was when she discovered the Fae as they were the ones being killed by the disease. Nadia became the only human to be attacked by the disease The Old Ash was there and offered Lauren assistance in finding a cure for Nadia, but at the price of her complete servitude to him. Bo tells Lauren that they might have the cure in front of them, but that she hadn’t opened it because she felt that they should do that together.

The final scene of the episode has Bo open the gift box to reveal a slim grey rod of some unknown material resting on silver cloth. She lifts it from the box, looks at it and then offers it to Lauren. Bo asks what it is supposed to be and Lauren’s answer is that she has no idea as the episode ends.

Fade to black…

I think that this wasn’t a bad episode, it had its moments and it was worth watching, but in the overall scheme of things, it didn’t really move the plot arcs forwards all that much. The story was interesting and the appearance of the Selkie was a bonus, though there were a lot of questions left unanswered about them.

Kenzi, and the men in the station for that matter, said it was like they were hypnotized, and I would have liked to know how that was done. We know that Bo needs to touch someone to “control” them, but the Selkie don’t. It isn’t likely that they use their voice, so what exactly is it, other than their sexuality it seems, that does?

One other question I have is, what exactly happens to that candle? After Bo poured milk on it, it is now useless? It’s really an interesting myth to use and I thought that it was handled well, but it’s another powerful item in the Fae universe and I think we might be getting too many of them appearing “as we need them.” Not sure if that is a good idea overall…

On to the characters in the episode…

Bo… A little progress with Lauren, some strife with Dyson. Yet another reason for her to hate Keira, she’s rich, and they actually had her in a different outfit than she normally wears. Even if that was to be a bartender. Otherwise there wasn’t any real character development and once again, not a single moment of her actually being a Succubus.

Dyson. Honestly why is it that he has to be played more and more like an ass in the series? I get that he isn’t in love with Bo anymore, but do we need to have that rubbed in every time he appears? I still get the feeling that the actor playing the role is unhappy about having to play Dyson this way after the first season where he was a lot more interesting. I really hope that they resolve this plot point soon.

Kenzi… O have to admit I like her with long red hair like she wore at the strip club. But her reactions to the Selkie and, as well, her talks with Bo just were show stoppers. I have to say that I still think that Kenzi is what keeps Bo sane and, darn it all, let’s have more of her and soon.

Hale. The interrogation scene when he repeated what the officers had told him was a riot. Just too funny and it was good to see him with a larger role this week.

Lauren… At last she tells the truth to Bo about her girlfriend. In doing so she gains a lot of sympathy from us, which I think was the point. It also was interesting to see the lengths to which the Ash is keeping her under control now… I have the oddest thought that Bo is going to do a jailbreak sometime in the near future.

Trick. Another too short appearance to give information and, honestly, can’t the writers think of better things for him to do in an episode than “get asked a question, find book, talk, wish them luck?” There has better things for him to do and I hope that the new plot line of trouble between the Fae will accomplish that.

Kiera. Don’t care, didn’t care this week. Two short scenes that really were info dumps of her background and what she thinks of Dyson. Otherwise nothing useful in her appearance, but she is involved in a medical facility and that has to mean something in the future of the series I think.

Sheri. Cute, very cute and she was an interesting character with a background that Bo and Kenzi could relate to. It’s a shame that we’ll never see her again as there is more to do with her than a striptease and some sexy clothes.

Donna. Sheri’s mother was again used for info dumps and not much else. Her story was completed in the episode and again I doubt she will return again.

Lewis. Too easy to hate on and that was the point of the character. Very much one-dimensional I thought and as he’s off to be punished, not to return again.

The other characters were mostly there for the scenery, especially the other Selkie dancers. I didn’t really find myself caring about any of them, but then they didn’t really have much to do or say as the minor characters seem to do more and more in the series.

Still, not bad overall though more thought to the stories in the episode would be a good thing.

My rating of Fae Gone Wild

Keeping my interest – 4 Pitchforks

Portrayal of a Succubus – 1 Pitchforks

Overall look and feel – 3 Pitchforks

Storyline – 5 Pitchforks

Main Characters – 4 Pitchforks

Mythos – 4 Pitchforks

Overall Rating – 3.5 Pitchforks out of 5

There were a few things that I didn’t like in the episode, mostly that there was a lot, and I mean a lot of cheesecake in the episode and actually that brings me to something that has bothered me more than I thought it would as the series has gone on…

Why is it that every woman on the show has to have plunging necklines that show off as much of their chests as possible? It’s especially bad with Bo’s clothing, but Kenzi isn’t that far behind as of late and, really, it’s happening to more and more of the females on the show. Why? Why do this? Yes I know why they do it, and of course it’s to get the male audience watching, but really? Can’t you just have the stories support the show?

It was actually an interesting episode for the most part in spite of that nit of mine. I managed to pay attention to the entire episode, though I have to admit that I didn’t really need to have the music in the strip club just about drowning out the Kenzisms, which really were funny… I also thought that Kenzi’s reactions in the strip club were amusing as well… I have to say that the other point that I didn’t like was the phone call between Bo and Lauren which was the epitome of awkward. Still it was meant to be that and it really was.

Nothing really Succubus like in this episode, though the dress that Bo wore when bar-tending was interesting. Still there was no need for her powers to be used, and so they weren’t. Come to think of it she never mentioned to Sheri what she was, only that she was there to help her. There might have been a moment for Bo to use her powers on Lewis, but that didn’t happen either. I can’t really say much about Bo being resistant to the powers of the Selkie in the club either as honestly there wasn’t much in the way of her powers seen either.

I thought that the location for the club was a good one if it seemed slightly crowded. The police station scenes were, as always, well done, it actually looks like a working station as it always does as well. Overall the locations supported the story, but the beach at the end, and the picnic table meeting with Donna seemed wrong. Perhaps it was because it looked more like fall than summer really.

The storyline was a good one, if really oversexed in a lot of ways. While I understand that the characters did push that, there was more to it. I found the contrast between Sheri and her life versus what Bo’s life became did touch on a lot of points between the characters. I also thought that at the end when Sheri asked Dyson if he ever lost something of value to him was a point that will possibly push the Dyson/Bo relationship forwards. It also was good to see the Bo/Lauren relationship get out of the “You didn’t tell me” situation it was in for so long. Of course it didn’t solve everything, and that’s sort of the point, but we now have a key to solve the Nadia problem. But will it? Then there is the Fae attacks that are going on. Why is it that Dyson and Hale seem to know nothing of it? More, why is it that Trick hasn’t done anything to figure it out? It almost seems as an afterthought to the episode and that might mean they are interjecting the new episodes they shot after they got the new episode order.  That could case problems in the plot lines and I hope that it doesn’t.

Save for the reveal for Lauren in this episode to Bo and the possible solution for Nadia, the rest of the main cast didn’t have much to do in progressing their characters forwards. Yes there was a small, and I mean small, scene with Dyson and Kiera which tells us that she is getting him entwined with her and he’s having second thoughts about it. But other than those two points, nothing else really changed for anyone.

It was good to see some new Fae appear as it always is. The Morrigan’s gift is still a mystery and I had the oddest thought that it might be something connected to an Egyptian myth about the afterlife, which I will not spoil here. But if it is, then Bo and Lauren are going to have to sacrifice something in order for Nadia to be freed.

But honestly, please collect all of these plot lines and solve a few will you?

Next Week: Death Didn’t Become Her

An old friend of Trick’s asks for his help when his ballet dancer husband goes missing – or rather, his ballet dancer husband’s corpse does. Bo and Dyson track the dead ballet dancer with Lauren assisting them in their search.


Well, we have lesbian characters on Lost Girl already, so it’s about time that there was some mention of other gays characters on the show or at least that is what I get from that summary anyway.

Come to think about it, there was a Fae in an earlier episode that was able to inhabit dead bodies and perhaps this might be another one of them? It would be nice to have a little bit of a revisiting of past stories too… I would like to see some movement on the Lauren/Bo/Nadia front, but I think we all know that isn’t going to happen for a while as yet.

After all the series does need to leave us hanging for a while to come otherwise we’re going to be drowning in major plot lines and I’m not sure that is a good thing. Actually I am sure of that as there are enough hanging plot lines right now as it is.

The question about Fae attacking each other I think won’t be covered much either, but it would be nice to know more about it. Oh, and keep an eye out in the background of the episodes as I’ll bet that you didn’t notice that in this episode the young actress that plays the Nain Rouge, the harbringer of doom, was in the background.

Take a good look and you’ll see her…

And that plot line needs to get going soon too…