Aug 02 2013

A Review of Mommy’s Little Succubus by Katie Blu

Mommy's Little Succubus by Katie Blu

Mommy’s Little Succubus by Katie Blu

One of the things that isn’t really touched on in most works about Succubi, or Incubi for that matter is, who are, if they have them, their parents? It’s actually important, at least to me, because that gives a lot of insight to the Succubus or incubus themselves. Now, for the most part, it’s something that most authors ignore or gloss over… But what if there was a bit more to learn and think about?

Would it explain why a Succubus was good or tried to be? Would it open your eyes to understanding why they were evil or cruel or something similar?

What if, in a way, they where adopted by someone, and that someone they decided to call… Mother? And what would that person do in order to help a young Succubus to get her wings?

It’s an interesting concept if you think about it…

The work tells of:

Mommy, an immortal mother-thug, only wants to help when wayward paranormals wander into her diner…

Succubus Liza needs to earn her wings. But what’s a klutzy, bespectacled girl to do when she’s born without the seductress gene—and that’s the only way she can earn her demon wings?

Fortunately for Liza, Mommy has a solution, and he’s chained up in her dungeon.

Liza is a Succubus. Well, not quite fully as yet. She needs to seduce a man, take his soul and then, finally, she’ll have her wings as a Succubus and be complete. There’s a way that Mommy, her guardian, has put together to make that happen. Question is if Liza can overcome herself and succeed.

I have to admit that when I was reading this work I had thoughts in my mind that Liza was very much like Chloe from the Eerie Cuties online comic series. They both don’t believe themselves to be “good” Succubi, they don’t have the self-confidence or will to be more than they think they can be as well. But most of all, it’s the complete lack of coordination when trying to be sexy that just merges the two characters together in my mind.

That said, the way Liza acts in this work just struck me as a teenager. A very young one without a clue about herself and what she was capable of. The way she haltingly makes her way through the scenes is both cute and somehow… off. I think the problem is that the way she is described makes her faults more central than her abilities. That said, when she finally gets past the point of not being sure, of not knowing… She’s a lot more interesting.

The same can be said of Peyton, who is the man that Liza finds chained in the basement. I won’t spoil who he is exactly, but when he explains himself… I kind of expected it. What I didn’t expect was that the attraction between himself and Liza would be so complete so quickly in the  story. Now, it is a hot flash, so it has to be that way, but really I would have liked some more about him too.

Mommy is an enigma. This work is part of a larger series in which the characters work at a diner that Mommy owns and all of them are supernatural beings of one kind or another. That brings the question of who, or what, Mommy is. That isn’t explained in the work, but, she does know so much more than she reveals… in a lot of ways. I would have liked to know more about her too.

The erotic moments between Liza and Payton are hot, some S&M slash dungeon sex comes into the scenes, but it wasn’t something that turned me off. There was no pain or abuse and that made everything a lot more enjoyable for me. It is a little fast how the scenes happen for me as a whole however. I would have liked those parts of the work to be dragged out a bit further as it felt like something had been removed or glossed over.

There was really nothing in the writing that took me out of it, but as always with works that are short and come to an end just when things are getting interesting… this one does. I could have seen this being at least another eight pages long to tie up things well and bring it all to a conclusion… But instead we leave as things get just that much more interesting as a whole…

I’ll give this work three pitchforks out of five.

Much too short, would have liked to learn more about Liza, Mommy and Payton. I also would have liked to see what changes within Liza afterwards if anything really did…



Aug 01 2013

Succubi Image of the Week 291

This week’s Succubi Image has quite a lot of things I love about it. It is a commissioned work and perhaps someday I’ll be able to have this artist do something for me as well…

Commission : Kurai Kaminari by Jadenkaiba

Commission : Kurai Kaminari by Jadenkaiba

This work is called Commission : Kurai Kaminari and is by an artist on DeviantArt named Jadenkaiba. You can see the original page with this work here and the artist’s page is here as well.

Wonderfully sexy Succubus, the dress I really do like a bunch. The interesting thing to me is how her look, her body shape, eyes, horns, really all of her just looks right to me. Adding that she’s in a library, which is one of my favourite settings, just makes this just about perfect.

The only thing that bothers me, a little bit, is that her black tail is almost invisible and I’m so-so on her wings. Kind of Morrigan Aenslandish in a way, but they really do work for her at least and that’s the important thing.

I hope to be able to write a story that this work inspired…

Please visit this artist’s page, there are some really wonderful pieces of art there to enjoy…



Jul 31 2013

A Pair of Horns does not a Succubus Costume Make…

It strikes me that some costume designers believe that adding a pair of horns to any costume makes it more Succubus like, or at the minimum, more Devil Girl like. Now I do not subscribe to that belief, I never have. This week’s costume is a prime example of why their concept does not make it in my eyes…

Masked Devil Costume

This is called theMasked Ball Devil Costume and it comes with a black and red bustier top dress with a bodice, a devil eye mask and a devil horn headband.

The shoes and stockings are not included, there is no tail, and the costume sells for $50 US at various sites on the web.

I’ll be honest and say that if this was a costume alone without the horns, I would not think it to be that awful. It has some style to it, and it could be an interesting steampunk costume… but it isn’t a succubus and it is barely a Devil Girl as well.

The horns are lousy and they are the only thing here that even barely suggests what you are attempting to be. As such they should stand out a bit more, and there should be a tail as well, but neither of these things happens and so… this is really nothing special.

I don’t think there is any real way to improve this either, none of my good pairs of horns could add to this with all of the visual clutter that this costume comes with.

But, as I have said, I kind of like this in a non-succubus, non-Devil Girl way. I actually know someone that is going to be going to the Halloween party this year as a Steampunk chorus-line dancer and I will be sending her this to think about…


I’ll give this one pitchfork out of five.

For a Succubus or a Devil Girl, you can pass…



Jul 30 2013

Desires 88

To be the first is special… Between immortals, that is even more so…


Desires – Beginnings

By BStyles and Tera S

Part Twenty-Four


Tera’s lips quivered a little at his admission that she was the first. In a husky voice she answered, “Then we will have to make unforgettable won’t we?” When he admitted to being a bit lost in the moment she smiled and said, “That’s fine Martin… We’ll just go step by step then…”

She slipped a hand between their bodies and gently rubbed her hand along his waist. Slowly she moved along his hips with her fingers making him shift slightly and then her hand cupped softly to cover his rod, beginning to massage him slowly.

As she did so, her lips moved to kiss and suck on the skin of his chest adding to the sensations she was giving him. She moved back slightly to whisper to him, “First we need to build the warmth we are sharing into a flame of love and contentment. Not lust, for that would be unfair to you….”

Her breasts pressed against him, the hardness of their nipples making little shocks of pleasure pass into both of their bodies as she rubbed them against him. She rubbed her pussy against his thigh a little harder, the heat from her passing into him. But she was so very careful as she did all of this. In her mind she knew where the line was for them both. She wouldn’t pull him from the light into the darkness. That would never do. This wasn’t about the dark side of passion and lust… This was about the beauty of a moment shared in love and caring.

That was the most important thing to her…. Always….


Love is, in the end, something that all beings do understand…




Jul 29 2013

Pondering by TeraS

One of the things that the Succubi Queen is famous for is her pondering. She considers many, many things that most would never expect her to…

And from that comes this little story, such as it is…




By TeraS

The library of the Realm is known for all of the knowledge that it contains. Not just the important things, mind you, such as the wing on seduction, or the one on sexual positions, both of which are required reading for all in the Realm—which explains why it takes centuries for those who become part of the Realm to pass their challenges … But that’s … another story …

No, this story is about one specific book in one specific place in the library which only a few have ever seen, know about, or, more importantly, understand.

No library card would ever give you access to it. No person could tell you exactly where you might find it. It isn’t listed in any card catalog or computer index in all of the universes. But it does exist, and only Tera alone knows where it is.

It stands alone in a room with green carpet and jet-black walls, a single light coming, it seems, out of nowhere illuminates the place where it awaits. Stepping into the room, one encounters perfect silence. You find that you do not wish to do anything to break the silence, to disturb it, for there is the overwhelming feeling that, if you did, something fundamental would change …

The book rests upon an ornate stand like no other you might have ever seen. Two figures kneel underneath the light, their forms shimmering gold, then silver, then mixing the two before returning to gold once more. Look once, and one is male, the other female. Look again, and they are both male or both female. In the next their forms are both and then neither. But while their forms change, one thing does not. Their arms reach above their heads, fingers laced together, palms turned upwards, and there rests … the book.

It is a slim tomb, perhaps only a half-inch thick. The cover is torn on the edges, worn, the title not quite readable—though perhaps a letter or two might be visible upon it should your look long enough to see them. A single piece of string, tied once, holds the book closed as if to keep what dwells within it held away for safekeeping.

And in this place, this odd place, if you could find it, you might see Tera standing there, every now and again … pondering. A finger occasionally tracing over her lips, or a swishing of her tail as she … ponders. Her thoughts might be going over what she had done that day … week … month … year, what she had seen that decade … century … eon, all of the lives that she had met … touched … held.

But all of that comes only after a memory that is as clear and visceral to her as if it had happened only a moment before …

A long time ago, Tera was shown this place and this book by her mother, who was the Queen before her. The words they shared always come back and make her smile, warmly and wistfully, as she remembers her mother’s voice … her smile … her love.

“What’s that?”

“Something to ponder.”


“Just because, Daughter. You’ll understand why someday.”


“When the time is right, you’ll know.”

Every time that Tera returns to this place, this hidden spot that only she knows of now, that conversation returns to her thoughts as she stands there and … ponders.

What is inside the book? What does it say? Who wrote it? Why?

She reaches out and takes hold of one of the loose ends of the string and pulls on it gently …

Was it time? Would she know the answers at last? Would she finally understand?

You might see her pull on the string and find that the knot did not loosen.

You might see her pull on the string and find the knot unravel and the book open to her.

You might … or rather could … but there is a third possibility.

You would see her release the string in the next moment, deciding that perhaps it wasn’t the right time. Perhaps the point of the book lay not in knowing what was within its pages, but instead in pondering over what might be within them.

She would pat the book’s cover once, with her left hand, then turn and walk from the room. Not knowing the answer but still …

… pondering.

Pondering … for it is not in the reading but in the remembering that this book connects Tera with all that is important.

Pondering … for it is in the pondering that the book most helps Tera.

Pondering … for it is in this connection with those who were queens before her that her mother gave her the greatest gift.

Pondering … for that is what Tera will always do.

Jul 28 2013

A Review of Dirty Demon by B.B. Roman

Dirty Demon by B.B. Roman

Dirty Demon by B.B. Roman

Time for a review of another story that has an Incubus in it… It is a hot flash, which is disappointing once again… I really don’t enjoy that when it happens, I’ve said that a lot I know, but honestly why start what could be really interesting and then allow it to fall apart?

The story tells of:

Millie is 23 and struggling to find a boyfriend. When her friend Shandra offers to summon a sex demon to help keep her busy in the bedroom, she agrees, thinking it’s just a joke. But when Millie’s alone in bed that night, she quickly learns that she’s not really alone. There’s something in her bed—and it won’t stop until she has the orgasm of a lifetime!

Millie and her best friend Shandra get drunk and Millie is given an Incubus to have fun with for one week. In short, that is what this hot flash is all about. However, we don;t get to see the week’s worth of fun and games, only the very first night in which Mille is taken in just about every possible way by her Incubus.

One of the things that I thought was a new slant on Incubi was that he didn’t appear as himself. Until the moment that Millie thought of the man she wanted to be with, he was invisible and used his powers to pleasure her. Once she had thought of the form she wanted him to be, then the story moved into one very long sex scene that built its way towards its climax in more ways than one.

And here, again, is the problem I have with these short stories. Very little background, a quick introduction, then to the sex, and a quick closure of the story leading to… Well, we never know what it leads to. There is a core of a story here, even if it only was to show Millie’s week with this Incubus. Even if that was all that the longer work would be, there are warnings in the story to Millie that would have made for some conflicts to be told.

One of the main ones being that while Millie is with the Incubus, she should never have sex with any man for the Incubus would be jealous. As well, her friend’s promise that if she liked this Incubus… she could have another one.

I wonder what that would result in? Jealous Incubi fighting over her? Or something more than that? All of these are questions that the author could have weaved into a much longer and interesting story than the hot flash that is given here.

Still, all I can do is wonder about what could have been…

The erotica is hot, I enjoyed the physical aspects of it very much. I also liked that there was a nice use of power by the Incubus to hold Millie and then tease and caress her until her wishes were granted and she came wonderfully.

I am, however, not thrilled by the ending, I wanted more than was given here. As I said, there are so many open thoughts, possible plots, and moments that could have easily transformed this from a hot flash into a novella that it’s a shame that the author didn’t go forward with them all.

Perhaps they will? It’s something to hope for at least…

I’ll give this work three and a half pitchforks out of five.

Hot flash yes, but it could be so much more…


Jul 27 2013

A very nice Succubus WIP YouTube…

I found a really lovely work in progress YouTube that, by the end of it, reveals a Succubus that I think is really something special…

And if you cannot see it here on the Tale:

And, of course in case the video disappears, the completed piece of art:

Succubus by CatKicka

Succubus by CatKicka

This art is by an artist on YouTube called CatKicka, who’s page you can find here. This particular piece of art is their tenth day of creations in a series of Monster Girls they made last year and is one of my favourites from their series.

I like the underlying hint of sexuality in this art quite a lot. It isn’t overwhelming, and I like that concept. Her wings being torn I don’t care much for, but then she is a Succubus, a evil one probably, and so that appearance is a given really.

I’m also pleased that she has normal legs and feet, hooves wouldn’t have looked nice, I do wonder a little about the size of her horns and the jewelry in her hair though…

Could be a story in that mebby…