Oct 15 2013

Desires 99

What is known, isn’t always what is the truth… not always…


Desires – Beginnings

By BStyles and Tera S

Part Thirty-Five


“Mmm…” Martin murmured softly, his halo pulsing with soft golden light as her lips touched his forehead. He snuggled in closer, body trembling a little as he came down slowly from that sexual high. “I’ve heard less than you might think…” He said, absently. The soft curve of her breast before his eyes, he stretched out and kissed it.

“I’ve heard your name bandied around, here and there….I’ve heard tell of the first Union of our kind with the Infernal…but never were the two used together…”

His own white wing folded over her black one, making a strange Angelic sort of handshake. His eyes fluttered closed for a moment, as he enjoyed the phyisical and spiritual connection between himself and her. “You are something precious to everyone…”


The love of an angel is special.. The love shared is more so…




Oct 14 2013

Acceptance – Part V By TeraS

And the other shoe drops before things might go too far…



Acceptance – Part V

By TeraS


Joseph was still wrapped in the blanket as he held her wrist. He did not hurt her, but there was an air of disappointment in his voice: “What do you mean that it is what he expects?”

“Exactly what I said.”

He shook his head slightly then let go, his hand moving back underneath the blankets again. “I put my trust in you.”

She took hold of one of the blankets, drawing it around herself, trying to overcome the chill of the air around them: “I know. I put mine in you.”

There was a long moment, she couldn’t quite see his expression in the darkness, but she could feel the tension in him.

“Why did you give yourself up? It isn’t what she wanted.”

“She wanted you home. We both do. This was the only way, in the end, to make that possible.”

She placed her free hand over the bracelet that he wore. As her fingers touched it she felt the marks of where someone, or something, had tried to remove it. “What have they done to you?”

“Not important. I want to know why you have abandoned her.”

She patted his wrist twice: “It is what he expects.”

“You keep saying that.”

“Yes … Yes I do.”

A moment passed, he unsure of what she meant, she trying to control herself. Then she pulled back some of the blankets to reveal him fully. The gasp was heartfelt when she saw the marks on his body, felt the hurt that had been done to him.

“What … did … he … do?”

He sighed: “He wants … everything. He wants me to abandon her, to do what he wants. Then, he thinks, he will have her as well.”

“That is not an answer, Joseph. Tell me what he did.”

“I’ll survive. He didn’t break me. But now he has you, and he’ll use you to get to me … and to her. You never should have come here.”

She wrapped the blankets around them both: “There is no place I would rather be.”

“Are you sure?”

“It is …”

“… what he expects?”


He didn’t press the issue, even though the questions he had weren’t answered as they huddled there in the cold, waiting for the morning to arrive. When the light of day came, it didn’t help illuminate their prison very much. In spite of this, he woke to see her standing at the gate to their cage, looking off into the distance, her bareness quite evident to him. “Did he always make you dress like that?”

She turned and nodded, “All of the time, really.”

He pushed the blankets off himself and then walked over to her: “He’s not a kind man, you know.”

“No, he is not.”

She seemed to pause, as if considering something, then continued: “Joseph, whatever happens, promise you will not interfere.”

“Even if he …”

“Especially if he does. I am expecting he will.”

“Why did you come here? Did she tell you to?”

A short chuckle, “Oh, no … She gave me the idea but she did not make me do anything.”

They heard the steel door open and he entered with several of his henchmen. Joseph moved to place himself in front of her, but a touch of her hand on his arm stopped him, leaving her next to the cage door, he behind her.

“Did you enjoy your night?”

“It was fine, sir.”

“I did not address you. Remember your place.”

Her reply was to drop to her knees and look at the floor in silence.

“Again, did you enjoy your night?”

Joseph’s reply was to say … nothing.

“You will answer or she will suffer because of you.”

It was a short, blunt answer: “No.”

“Your stubbornness is impressive, but it won’t help you. She won’t help you. She has no idea where you are.”

She spoke, still looking at the floor, “Will you keep your word, sir? Please let him go. You have what you want.”

“I have some of what I want. I have you. I have him. Next I will break you both to obey, and then she will be mine as well.”

At those words one of the thugs opened the gate and they were taken from their prison forcibly. She did not resist, he did a bit, but not as much as he had in the past, for her sake. As they were taken to the entranceway, once again, unnoticed, she looked at the markings on the wall until they turned away from the steel door that opened to the outside world and into a smaller chamber off to the side.

She was dumped without ceremony to the side of a steel chair that was bolted to the floor. As she watched, Joseph was none too gently thrown onto the chair and then strapped into it.

Getting to her knees, she continued to look downwards, seeing only the shoes of the men in the room as they hustled about her.

“Now then, Joseph, you will call me Master and you will obey me. Or …”

The threat was clear, he didn’t need to say the words to get his point across.

“She is yours now. You have her.”

“That I do.”

She heard him walk over to her, place a hand into her hair and forced her to look at him: “You always were a good fucktoy. Play with him.”

“Yes, sir.”

She stood up and walked towards Joseph, her hands tracing over her body lightly. Their eyes met and she could plainly see that he didn’t want her. There was but one in his thoughts whom he loved … and knowing that made it easier for her …

As she traced her fingertips over her thighs, her nails turned pink, unnoticed by any in the room. She stopped in front of him, straddling his legs, looking into his eyes. Joseph started to ask her to stop, tell her that he would take whatever punishment they doled out, but she placed a fingertip over his lips and shook her head slightly.

Then she was bent over at her waist, one hand wrapped around his length and stroking him … slowly … lovingly … familiarly …

She had positioned herself between Joseph and the others in the room, her long boots drawing their eyes towards her heart shaped rear, one hand playing between her thighs, teasing at her sex and holding their attention, the flashing of her pink nails hypnotic as they danced there.

Her pink tongue darted out and stroked against the tender part of him and he stifled a moan. He looked down towards her, meaning again to beg her to stop for both of their sakes, but then she looked into his eyes and, as he watched …

… her lips turned a familiar shade of pink.

It couldn’t be … But the smile from those lips and then the feeling of her lips tightly wrapped around his shaft in that one way that only she could do convinced him … and he shuddered in relief.

Her hips moved from side to side in a rhythmic motion, holding the attention of those in the room as Joseph moaned and whimpered in need. Her touch long missed, her desire for him and he for her being rekindled from embers into a roaring fire once more. As they both spiraled upwards in their desires, her own powers built and grew, flooding the room with her scent … bubblegum. It seeped into all in the room, into everyone, her control over them all ensnaring their thoughts and pulling from them their desires and wants.

Each, save for Joseph, had their way with the naked brunette in their minds, doing things that were their fantasies … But Joseph tilted back in the chair, shuddering as she pulled from his length leaving a pink lipstick ring around his shaft … the same colour as the bracelet that he wore—and which was now gleamingly pink and perfect as the day he first gladly gave her the honour …

She looked up with pink eyes that he knew so well, “Cum for me Joseph … Cum for me …”

As he came, one word escaped his lips: “Mistress …”

The others in the room were still frozen, entranced with what had happened, off in their own little fantasies that she had planted in each of their minds, and they were far too slow to react to what happened next … exactly as she had hoped.

She spun around as she came to her feet, her hair turning pink, a pair of pink horns and a heart-tipped tail rising into the air behind her, the collar around her throat vanishing in a puff of smoke, along with the boots he had given her, her body shimmering for an instant, Celeste’s shape giving way to Sheryl’s form … Her eyes glowed bright pink as she stared at the two henchman and purred, “Thanks for cumming, boys … Nite nite …” The henchmen fell to the floor drained, their energy spent and taken from them, no longer a threat to her—not that they ever truly were, but she couldn’t take the chance with Joseph there.

He, however, was standing there frozen, staring at her in disbelief, his fantasy of her being his, controlled by him … gone.

She smiled almost wolfishly as she approached him … “Not what you expected?”

He didn’t answer as she closed the distance between them, rolling her hips as she placed one foot perfectly in front of the other, her powers enveloping him further. His thoughts slowing … emptying … leaving only the thought of looking into her eyes and listening to her words …

She paused, for a moment, then snapped her fingers and he was stripped bare to her … mind, body and soul.

“You’ve had your fun for long enough. Now let me show you what power really is …”

Oct 13 2013

A Review of Broken Dolls by B. R. Kingsolver

Broken Dolls by B. R. Kingsolver

Broken Dolls by B. R. Kingsolver

I follow, quite closely actually, a series about Succubi and their families by the author B. R. Kingsolver. I have reviewed the first, second and third book in that series before on the Tale and I am simply thrilled to see a new work in this universe has been published.

Within this series there has been hints of a rather major problem, one that has a real world mirror. This new chapter in the series touches upon things that happened in the background or tangentially to the other stories in this series. It adds quite a lot to the universe as a whole, but as well it brings in another view of things that the main characters really never had. That is interesting to follow when you have read the other works in the series and even if not, this work stands on its own quite well I think.

The work tells the story of:

Private investigator RB Kendrick makes her living nailing cheating spouses, digging up other dirt to help in a divorce, finding long-lost relatives, and occasionally sniffing out criminal activity and fraud.

When she takes a job to find a missing girl, she has no idea she is headed for the most dangerous case of her career. Usually, her ability to read minds gives her an edge. But when the people she’s hunting are also telepaths, that advantage is limited.

The search takes her into the dark underbelly of telepathic society, where anything, and anyone, is for sale. She discovers that telepathic women and girls are being trafficked as the ultimate sex slaves.

With people trying to kill her, she’s on the run, not knowing who she can trust. Will she find the missing girl, or become a victim herself?

One of the things that has brought me much joy in this series is that there are connections. There are connections in events, between people, families, and more. It is not that one thing happens in isolation with another but that they are all joined together into a larger story. Perhaps the one thing that stands out most of all is the importance of family.

RB is not quite like anyone that has appeared in this universe so far. Her best trait is that she cannot let go of something once she is involved and that draws her into something that shows her part of her world that she never knew before. It is in that discovery that her true nature comes out. She has a goal and woe to anyone that gets in her way. But beyond that, she’s funny, intelligent and whole within herself in spite of some of her past that haunts her in this story.

Overcoming that is part of her story here, but also it is the drive in her. To take a chance, to push into places and look where others would not. It really drives the story forwards and into directions that aren’t expected from the beginning of the story. I also loved seeing her own family, her mother and grandmother. Grandmother especially was a joy and I loved her quirks and thoughts through the work when RB needed her.

The work does draw some of its plot points from previous works in the series, but it is not necessary to know the backstory to follow along with what is going on. But knowing that story, RB’s reactions to the events and where that takes her makes connecting the plots quite interesting. Looking at the events that are mentioned from RB’s perspective gives a new understanding of what was going on that the main characters in the series were sometimes a little too close to.

There are Succubi of course in this work, actually quite a number of them, all with their own personalities and histories. There are some twists that are neatly hidden until the right moment as well. There is even mention of an Incubus here in a situation that is tragic in its own right. But the core of the story is as troubling as it first was when it appeared in the main series. Succubi connect to that obviously, and the scenes that involve what happens to them are troubling in their own way, as they should be.

There are appearances from several characters I’ve come to know and love here, but they are not made the centre of the story when they do. They support RB in her quest, but they do not take over or control the way things proceed forwards. RB holds her own among them and in doing so I think becomes in her own right as important as they are. She might not be the core of the series, but she is an important tangent to it. Her history, her future, both do make for some very interesting thoughts. She isn’t Brianna, not by far, but she is in her own right as much as presence.

The work is tightly written with little in the way of respites for the characters, especially RB. It is quite simply a page turner that keeps you immersed in this world from start to finish… And wanting more still. While some threads are closed by the climax of the work, there are many new paths opened to take the series forwards and I cannot wait for the this series to continue.

I’m giving this work five of five pitchforks.

As with the other works in this series, I can only say that it is well worth your time and then some.

Many lovely questions answered, but so many new questions brought to the fore. I really hope that we will see more of RB in the main series as her story is far from finished. The universe grows, the tapestry becomes more powerful and enthralling… Everything I could have asked for and more.



Oct 12 2013

Twin Succubi Art in Progress YouTube

I discovered a lovely piece of art on DeviantArt of a pair of Succubi and that led me towards YouTube where I found a work in progress YouTube that the artist had uploaded…

And if you cannot see it here on the Tale:


And, in case the video vanishes, the art itself…

In Our Opinion of Life by Bloodymizz

In Our Opinion of Life by Bloodymizz

This is called In Our Opinion of Life by Bloodymizz and you can see the completed art here on the DeviantArt page I discovered it on, and the artist’s page is here on DeviantArt as well…

I just think the two of them are very cute, the tail is a sneaky looking one, but It is the expressions they have that make me smile…

And it’s always good to smile isn’t it?



Oct 11 2013

A Review of Gender Bender Succubus 3 by Maxine Albedo

Gender Bender Succubus 3 by Maxine Albedo

Gender Bender Succubus 3 by Maxine Albedo

For the last two weeks I’ve reviewed works from an author that involved someone becoming a Succubus and that needing them to have a gender change. You can find that first review here. And the second book can be found here as well reviewed on the Tale. At some point in the series I expected that there would be a permanent change. It only made sense from all of the references that have been in the works so far.

It was also clear that, like the saying goes, what’s good for the goose is good for the gander. In this story both of the main characters are tricked and transformed. Lilith does, after all, like to be amused…

  • Title: Gender Bender Succubus 3
  • Author: Maxine Albedo
  • Publishing Date: March 20, 2013
  • Length: 5,900 Words
  • This work at Amazon

The work is about:

Two months ago Dean learned his girlfriend Emma’s secret: She works as a succubus! When she is too sick to go to work Dean offers to go in her place, and is magically transformed into a shapely succubus and sent out into the night. His performance was so exceptional that Lilith, Queen of the Succubi, offers him a job, to become a succubus and work for her, and embrace all his desires.

Now after two months of employment his demonic boss offers Dean and Emma permanent jobs as succubi. But when they move to hell they discover the truth to the demons offer: Emma must become a male demon, an incubus, and impregnate Dean to produce new demons! Can Dean go through with the offer and become a succubus permanently? And how will he handle to gender reversal, especially when it means he will be bred by his girlfriend?

Dean has been a Succubus part time for a while now and he’s discovered a few things. One of them is that when he isn’t a Succubus he craves it almost like an addiction. When he and his girlfriend are offered to become succubi all the time, he had little choice and agrees to it.

There is of course a catch and that catch is revealed by Lilith after they agree of course and that leads to Emma becoming Eric and Dean becoming Jasmine. I really wasn’t surprised when this happened as the entire story seemed to be going in this direction from the beginning.

The thing that saves this story for me at least is that there is more about the world of the Succubi and Incubi. The little peeks were interesting to me and I would have liked to have known more than we did. There was also a bit more about Lilith told, but nothing that really told more about her save that one part of her myth was noted in passing.

The erotic scenes are, I regret to say, becoming very repetitive over the three works and especially this time. There is a lot of oral sex and while it makes sense, seeing the same thing repeated over and over again gets stale. The heat seems to be also getting less with each work in the series which doesn’t help much either.

The way this story ended seems to indicate that this series may well be over, or at least it seems so. At this point the arc from the beginning for both of the main characters seems to be done with. Unless of course we leave Jasmine behind and Eric is the focus of the story. Considering that so far there hasn’t been much told about Incubi, save for their need to have the Succubi kneel in front of them and pleasure them, it might be a good change for the series.

As for Jasmine, she’s been written into a corner as it were and that’s a shame. I think there could have been a lot better things done than just putting her in a situation just when she has become a Succubus and has left her past life behind.

From my point of view this is both the weakest of the series and at the same time offered a lot of promise. The thing is that what might have been there is pushed aside for a few quick sex scenes and a bit of exposition. This could have been better and I expected more of it.

I’m giving this work three of five pitchforks.

Not a bad continuation to the story, but short chapters over and over again bother me and I’ll probably stop purchasing this author’s works at this rate. I expect there to be a collection of this story at some point at the rate it is going…



Oct 10 2013

Succubi Image of the Week 301

Something of a slightly different Morrigan Aensland work of art this week. There’s something about this style of art and Morrigan that just looks… right.

Morrigan Aensland by soyig

Morrigan Aensland by soyig

This art of Morrigan is by an artist on Pixiv named Soyig. You can find the original page I found this art here.

I’ve often said that I like Morrigan more when she is drawn with a more realistic body shape, but I also like her in a more Manga-ish form as well. In this case, I think she really looks quite stunning. She has a beautiful, wonderful mane of hair that just flows perfectly over her form. It’s kind of the focus of the entire work in that it frames her face, the look in her eyes is classic Morrigan, and just holds you really well. I like the sharp edges of her wings, there’s a difference  there in that they seem sharper and more dangerous than how I have seen them in other art.

While the art looks a bit rough, there is so much detail to be seen that I really wonder what this would look like as a completed and coloured work… I hope it is sometime.



Oct 09 2013

This costume is not a Hottie…

Once again, and it is I know getting ridiculous, I’ve found yet another costume that has somehow crawl out of some trash bin somewhere and managed to get itself on the costume market… When will it happen that some good costumes appear?

It won’t be this week anyway…

Devil Hottie Costume

This is called the Devil Hottie costume and it comes with the dress, the overskirt and devil wings. The stockings are not included, nor are the armlets and it does not come with a set of horns and it has no tail either.

It sells for $60 US.

No. Just no.

This is supposed to be hot? Supposed to be sexy? They must be kidding as I just can’t see anything here save for a really tacky outfit with wings that look like they are home-made from a picnic tablecloth.

I have looked at a lot of tacky and, surprisingly, this is a new level of tacky that I have never reached… or rather stooped to now that I think about it.

There is nothing in this that I like, there is nothing that could be done to improve it, save for leaving it on the shelf and passing it up that is.

I really do wonder what it is about designing Devil Girl costumes that is so difficult in the first place. I realize that creating a Succubus costume is several steps above that and doing so is just about impossible… but…

They just have to do better than this.

Yet another zero out of five pitchforks…

Next week won’t be any better I can promise you…