Sep 14 2014

A Review of Orgy of the Succubi by Indy McDaniel

Orgy of the Succubi by Indy McDaniel

Orgy of the Succubi by Indy McDaniel

I dislike stories that begin in the middle. What I mean by that is writing a story where something has happened in the past, something critical to the characters of the story is glossed over. What follows is then a story that is missing something.

The why, how, and who is important and really does need to appear in the story somewhere. However, in the case of much erotica there is the suggestion of something important happening, but the reader never gets to see what it was, only guess at it.

Hot scenes are important, but so is a reason for what happens as well from time to time…

  • Title: Orgy of the Succubi
  • Author: Indy McDaniel
  • Publishing Date: May 29, 2013
  • Length: 11 Pages
  • ASIN: B00D3L1DB8
  • This work at

The story tells of:

Mara and Yuki are working to bring Caitlin into their demonic ranks as a fellow succubus. Collin and Zeke are just the two hapless young men being manipulated by the pheromones filling the air. Not that anyone’s complaining.

Caitlin once was an ordinary girl until two Succubi, Yuki and Mara noticed her and decided to turn her into a Succubus as well. What follows is the three using their powers, including mind control, to make two friends of Catlin’s do their bidding.

There are some erotic moments, including f/f And m/m scenes. In fact the entire work is short sex scenes connected with a few thoughts from one or two characters before it continues. The problem I have is that the story begins in the middle. There is no explanation of just how Catlin is now a Succubus. The display of her powers and that of the other Succubi is very quick and undersized in nature. We don’t even know if any of them have horns or a tail for that matter.

Overall, the story would work if the Succubi were not. Removing the mention of Succubi just turns the story into a teenage sex story with a bit of spice to it. It isn’t so much the story of Succubi as it is the story of three girls making two boys perform for them, the reward being that they can have sex with the girls.

A bit too juvenile for my taste, though based on the names of the Succubi sisters if felt like an episode of a Japanese manga series. That’s not a bad thing, but given that so much of the story was about Catlin learning to use her powers as a succubus, it would have been nice to see the beginning of this story.

By the same point, the story ends too soon, leaves questions unanswered and really could have been much longer and involved than it is. A hot flash alone isn’t everything. It is adding the spie to the characters in their lives that makes it so much more.

Two and a half pitchfork out of five.

More story to match all of the sex scenes and I would like this much more than I do honestly…



Sep 13 2014

A Morrigan Pop Culture Shock YouTube… Review?

There is a model, or rather figurine, of Morrigan Aensland made by Pop Culture Shock, that has been on the market for quite some time now… I found a YouTube video that shows some of the detail in the figurine, and it really is impressive I think how much there is…

And if you cannot see the video here on the Tale, try this link:

The video claims to be a review, but it isn’t really. It’s more of a lot of video shots of the figurine from various angles set to music. I would have been interested to hear what they actually thought of the figurine. From what i have read about it, the majority of the reviews are quite positive in nature and it would have been interesting to know what this person thought…

Personally, I think it is the best of the large scale Morrigan figurines, but that’s just my thoughts about it… Mind you, for the roughly $200 it cost when it came on sale, I expect it to be…



Sep 12 2014

A Review of Sex with a Succubus by Olivia Birch

Sex with a Succubus by Olivia Birch

Sex with a Succubus by Olivia Birch

Most of the time any story that has a Succubus or Incubus in it will go the route of them being horrific in some way. How much so depends on the author themselves in how that think such beings should act. Most of the time the actual horror is overt and strikingly so. The problem appears when the story is all about the horror and not a lot else until it is far too late…

It tells the story of:

With only hours left until daybreak, the beautiful but quick to anger succubus Meridiana must hurry if she is to make her boss’s deadline. Unfortunately for Meridiana, when it comes to collect her last specimen for the night, she comes to find out that she may have chosen a man too much for her to handle.

There are a few things wrong with the book summary for this work I think. One is that the actual part of the story that is told about is at the end of this work. For the most part the story is of Meridiana doing some horrific things. She is violent, what she does is truly horrific and really amounts to nothing more than a somewhat stereotypical view of a being of horror doing some horror for the shock of horror.

Past that there really isn’t anything about Meridiana that I care about, want to see more about or understand. She’s not seductive, not at all. She’s nothing more that a monster and a crudely acting one at that. The story is more focused on the abuses she acts upon others, the imagery of what she does to them and nothing else of substance.

Even when she isn’t doing evil there isn’t much in the way of explaining way she does what she does, for who or why she has to. There are many incomplete threads in the story that are literally mentioned in one sentence and then the story moves on to the next bit of horror to describe.

The writing is somewhat crass in nature both in speaking of whatever sex is happening and the thoughts of those involved. There isn’t any kind of character or personality save for the sex and the horror. That’s something that doesn’t make me want to continue to read, but as this is only seven pages, I at least managed to do so.

The ending is not satisfying, it lead towards what one would assume would be a second story, but that I haven’t seen published as of the time of this review. I cannot say that  would read the next work in the series from what I read in this one.

I just haven’t the desire or interest to find out what happens to Meridiana next.

One and a half out of five pitchforks.

Really did not enjoy this story at all. The ending wasn’t a bad idea, but it didn’t amount to anything save wanting the reader to buy the next book. The problem is that there isn’t one.



Sep 11 2014

Succubi Image of the Week 348

I love cute Succubi. Really to me that’s the most important thing they can be… Looking evil or being evil really doesn’t become them and I admit that gives me a certain bias towards them… However, it seems that a lot of artists agree with my thoughts that cute is important for Succubi…

Succubi by cold-angle

Succubi by cold-angle

This work is simply called Succubi and is by an artist on DeviantArt called Cold-angle. You can find the original page with this art here and this artist’s page on DeviantArt can be found here as well.

While there is a little hint of danger in both of these Succubi, really I just love the style they both have. Sexy-cute is always a good thing and their hair styles, the look in their eyes, the really perfect clothing and boots combine to make a pair of Succubi that are both powerful in their abilities but also have a look of desire and attraction that makes them quite a bit more dangerous I think for the unwary… or wary… Really either way someone is in trouble don’t you think?

To me at least, they could be sisters, one a bit more outgoing than the other, but together a force to be reckoned with… I wonder about their names and backgrounds too… That would be an interesting story to tell…



Sep 10 2014

The description does not match the costume…

Red Devil CostumeIt amazes me at times how some costumes are described… I think that some of the people that write the ad copy have to be some of the most imaginative people there are… It is a shame that that same imagination isn’t put into the costumes…

This is called simply the Red Devil Dress and it comes with… the dress. That’s all. The wig, the pitchfork and the shoes are not included and it sells for $40 US but can be found for a lot less quite easily…

Awful dress, the entire ensemble is a disaster, no tail and overall I shudder to look at it.

Here’s the thing that really gets me however. Read the ad copy and if you can make it to the end without laughing you are better than I am by far…

“Do you want to be the superstar during the halloween party?  If do, this costume will be your best choice. Wearing this, you will be the most horrible, insane, and the king/queen of scare. You can wear it on parties, masquerades, birthday parties and wedding occasions. Wear this Costume and feel the fun. It is suitable for girls.”

Okay. Where do I begin… Superstar? Really? I will give points for the correct use of the words horrible and insane though. I also came to a screeching halt when it was suggested that this would be something to wear to a… wedding. Seriously? Who writes this stuff anyway?

The entire ad copy sounds like someone translated two other ads from another language, copy pasted it and moved on… Mind you, considering the costume I can understand why one would get past it as quickly as possible…

Zero pitchforks out of five.

Nothing to save here and nothing to remember should you decide to wear it… I won’t be…



Sep 09 2014

A Review of Banshee Charmer by Tiffany Allee

Banshee Charmer by Tiffany Allee

Banshee Charmer by Tiffany Allee

I do like detective stories, but one of the things that I have to have is a strong main character. If that isn’t there then, for me, the story falls apart quickly. Now, having a lead that’s a bit on the tough side and then having her to deal with a series of murders that hit very close to home… That’s a real page turner.

Add to that a universe where Succubi and Incubi exist and that’s something that will keep my attention from beginning to end.

  • Title: Banshee Charmer
  • Author: Tiffany Allee
  • Length: 114 Pages
  • ASIN: B0070J7IEK
  • IBSN: 978-1-937044-99-2
  • Publishing Date: January 21, 2012
  • This work at

The work tells the story of:

When she’s sent to a crime scene and finds her second dead woman in as many weeks, half-banshee detective Kiera “Mac” McLoughlin is convinced a serial killer is on the loose. Incubi are extinct, her boss insists. But what else can kill a woman in the throes of pleasure? When her partner is murdered after using witchcraft to locate the killer and Mac is thrown off the case, her frustration turns to desperation.

Certain the killer is an incubus, Mac works behind her department’s back to chase down slim, sometimes perilous leads. While the killer eludes her, she does discover handsome Aidan Byrne, an investigative counterpart from the enigmatic Otherworld Enforcement Agency. Mac typically runs her investigations fast and hard, but with Aidan at her side, she’s running this one “hot” as well. But Aiden knows more than he’s letting on—something that could shatter their blazing romance and add Mac to the killer’s growing body count…

Mac, and no one calls her Kiera, has a problem. She’s called into a murder case that is… odd. Then things get odder when the suspects are narrowed down to being either a Succubus or an Incubus. Now all she has to do is manage to keep her head on straight, not get killed, and solve the case… All the while a mysterious man adds to the fun and games… in more than one way.

Keira really is one of the best detective characters that I’ve read in some time. She smart, tough, and very strong willed. More than anything through the course of the story I liked seeing how she thought and put the pieces together about what was really going on around her. When she suffers a loss, and honestly it’s a huge one, she doesn’t fall apart like some stereotypical heroine and go running away from danger. She faces it head-on. This of course makes things more complicated and dangerous for her. but then she’s not exactly all human.

There’s actually a lot of background mixed into this work, but it isn’t an info dump which I appreciated. I liked that Keira had a history, a well thought out one, that matched who is she, why she is, and where she is. That’s important and I’m glad the author did this.

Aiden is… a mystery. Now, when Keira asks what kind of supernatural he is, his answer of “sex god” told me that he was an Incubus, which in this universe are supposedly extinct. As a whole the tease of what Aiden is really wasn’t hidden all that well for me at least and even if I didn’t have so much of a focus on Succubi and Incubi I think that it’s clearly obvious what the killer is, but not who.

That question does tear at Keira as the story unfolds and in the end it’s a lack of communication that makes the story go in the direction it does. That does add to a sense of danger and it really does work well as a whole… But I wonder if not coming out with the truth a little sooner might not have been better.

There are Succubi in this work, two of them and that was really a bit of a revelation for me in several ways. The main one being that in this universe Succubi do not kill those they are intimate with. I liked that one Succubus said that they need to eat just like a normal human being. That for me really spoke well of them as a whole. The one Succubus detective herself had the right “look” and personality, but in private she was a lot more and that I really did enjoy.

As for the Incubi, they are described as being not seen for centuries, which I thought was interesting considering that the Succubi seemed to be well blended into society overall. Further, the idea that when they find a match for themselves they take a small part of them into themselves and thus become connected intimately with them was a twist that means a lot in this work as well.

The work has a very film noir feel to it, you can imagine the look of the city, the people that live in it very clearly. Every one of the characters has a lovely voice to them that stands out very well I thought. There isn’t much in the way of erotica in this work, really only two scenes. But they are central to the story as a whole and they aren’t just tossed into the work without a thought. They matter to the main characters and worked well I thought. A tight plot, well told and with purpose. All in all a really good page turned of a mystery.

The only thing that didn’t quite work for me was the number of red herrings that cropped up the work. They are there to push the story along I realize, but, I’m not sure that they were needed all that much. Taking them out of the story didn’t hurt it at all and in that why they are there is questionable. The core story itself was more than enough to hold my interest, it wasn’t necessary to divert attention away from that overall for how strong it was.

Four out of five pitchforks.

I’ll be reviewing the second work in this series Succubus Lost next Tuesday and I’m hoping for the same wonderful tale being told as it was in this work. I do need to add one final comment, and this is about the cover. The cover I am using in this review is the original one when the work first came out. It’s been replaced, as has the rest of the books in this series, by new covers. To me, the old cover had more of a detective story feel to it than the new cover does. But I suppose that flash sells and the new cover has that. But it does turn me off nonetheless.



Sep 08 2014

Storm Clouds 207 by TeraS

Continuing Chapter 36 this week on the Tale … Filling out a bit of the Queen’s latest appearance, and continuing her conversation with someone about some things that bother her …

For those that would like to read Storm Clouds from the beginning, you can click this link, and it will take you to the page where all of the previous chapters can be found.


Storm Clouds 207
Chapter 36
By TeraS


Time passed ever so slowly in the room. Someone who concentrated might be able to follow the dust motes as they floated here and there among the bookcases, tables, and chairs. Someone not so inclined to watch them might be held by the image of a woman straddling a man on one of the chairs, her fingers laced into his hair and their lips crushed together in a deep kiss.

One might also notice that neither of them were moving. But there was one other in the room who was. She was stalking back and forth, her long, red, heart-tipped tail swaying pensively as she walked, her eyes scanning intently from the carpet below her to the two intertwined and then back again as she paced.

Out of what some might mistake for frustration or impatience, she would tuck a wayward lock of hair back behind one of her ears from time to time. In fact, it was neither of those emotions, but rather her pondering over what she knew and understood …

… and when Tera, the Queen of the Succubi, put a puzzle together and the pieces fit? That spelt issues for someone.

Her thoughts were interrupted by a familiar presence entering the apartment building, so her pacing came to a stop and a warm smile played upon her lips. She had been wondering when he was going to appear, and it seemed that this moment was the one that mattered.

His timing, as always, was impeccable. But then, he was especially attuned to her.

Counting to twelve, Tera walked over to the apartment door and then waited another three beats before opening the door and looking out into the hallway. The elevator dinged, the doors opened and she waved to the one standing there, his hands quite full. “Coming! Just a moment, my heart!”

The man in the elevator, who Thomas would recognize as the pastor from the funeral he attended not so long ago, nodded his head in lieu of a wave: “All fine, Dear One. I’ll manage.”

Quickly making her way down the hall, Tera replied: “Manners will not allow that, you know. At least allow me to be of some use?”

He chuckled: “We’ve talked about this before, Dear One. You sell yourself short. You are more than useful and, one of these days, you’ll see that.”

She scrunched up her nose as she took a small bag from under his arm: “Family trait, you know.”

He nodded once: “Yes … quite so.”

Moving to walk beside him, she slipped her arm with his and they moved towards John’s apartment. As they walked, they slipped into the banter they always shared.

“I’m sorry for being late.”

“Not late. You are exactly on time, as always.”

“How are you managing, Dear One?”

“Oh … managing, my heart.” Of course, she didn’t want to worry him.

“I see.” Of course, he saw right through that.

The next words that passed between them were ones that each knew didn’t need to be said, for they had known each other, it seemed, forever. Tera’s heart would always be so, as would she for him as his Dear One. That was just how things were, and nothing in the universes could change that fact. After they entered John’s apartment, he handed her one of the styrofoam cups he held. As he closed the door he asked: “And where is your Eternal, Dear One?”

Tera smiled as she traced a fingertip around the rim of the styrofoam cup: “Oh, he’s off and about looking after something.” She looked at him and nodded once: “But he is with me and I am with him.”

The look he gave her was somewhere between understanding and concern: “Of course. That was not my concern.”

Her finger stopped moving as she tilted her head to the left: “But you are concerned.”

He nodded, taking the lid off his tea: “I am concerned about you, Dear One. You are troubled, have been for some time. I can see it in your eyes … your Eternal and I are the only ones that possibly could have seen it, of course, but it is there.”

Tera was silent for a time, then admitted: “I think the Dark has been messing with things it should not. So I am … hoping … to fix that damage.”

“I see. And the two over there?”

“They are the thing that needs to be made right once more.”

He took a sip of his tea: “Playing matchmaker, Dear One?”

She took the lid off her own tea: “Oh those two are matched, my heart. I’m just trying to set things right once more.”

“Dear One, are you sure you are doing the right thing, or are you possibly … inadvertently … just maybe … doing the Dark’s own work for it?”

Tera paused, her tea almost to her lips: “Memories have been changed, my heart. The reason for that I do not know. Yet the Dark has altered the memories of some of the succubi. It has also changed the memories of innocents. It is trying to set something up to Its benefit. Jane is one of them. John, the dear man she is with at the moment, is the other.”

“Are you sure?”

Tera’s tail moved slowly behind her: “I know Eternals when I see them, my heart. In that I am sure. What happens after that is in their hands.”

“Which means we wait.”

“You need not have to my heart. I’ll wait.”

He winked: “And have you talking to yourself? I shudder to think what your dear Tail will have to say about that.”

Tera smiled a warm, knowing smile: “You are, of course, quite right, my heart.”

He walked over to the couch and settled in: “What would you like to talk about while we wait?”

Tera took a spot on the other end of the couch, curling her legs underneath her as she did: “I have a theory … more of a thought, perhaps.”

He looked at his tea: “Why do I have the feeling, Dear One, that we’ll need more tea?”

She laughed: “Because that is how it always works when we chat, my heart. And, next time, I will bring the pie to share.”

He tipped his cup towards her: “So. Tell me what’s bothering you.”

She tilted her head to the right: “There is quite a lot that is bothering me. To be truthful, there has been for some time. I think that the time which the Dark has spent in trying to get into the Realm has made it desperate for some kind of success.”

He furrowed his brow: “It is a persistent thing; that much is obvious. And yes, your … resistance … has been a thorn in its side.” The innocent look she gave in reply just made him chuckle as he sipped his tea, waiting for her to continue.

She considered the cup she held, then continued: “To be honest, it’s been a bother to me as well, in more ways than one, but we won’t dwell on that part of the story, as we’ll come back to that a bit later to try and tie the threads together.”

“Which means we start with … ?”

“We start with the question of what, exactly, is it intending to do with the tail that is missing.”

“You assume she is being held?”

“I know she is being held. I am just not sure exactly where she is at this moment. I know that She is nearby … somewhere … but otherwise I am not sure where. I sense she is trapped or bound in some way. That means It must have a plan for her. Whether by influencing her, forcing something upon her, or other means, It has but one goal, and having a Tail would give It something It never had before.”

He nodded: “A key.”

“Yes. There are only a few means into the Realm for those not …” She paused here, considering her next words, worrying that “like us” would sound more than a bit conceited, but he finished the thought for her.

“… like you, Dear One. I know better—we know better—and you need to keep that in mind.”

She nodded in reply: “Of course. Like us, my heart. There are some with that key. Some others, like you, are offered a pass to the Realm, at the right time for the right reason. But all of us, even myself, have to pass by the gates, all of them, before stepping foot in the Realm.”

He smiled: “And, of course, that final gate, the one that none shall pass without permission is the last bastion.”

She sighed, wistfully: “Yes. But we won’t dwell on that point, my heart. Let’s try and keep focus on our missing tail for the moment.”

He gave a sidelong look at the pair on the chair as he wondered: “Can I assume that they are both part of the story?”

“Quite so. She is the sister of the one who’s tail is held, obviously. He is, I am sure, her Eternal. When we had the funeral, it struck me that she was there, but he was not. The question then was … “Why?” Speaking with her afterwards, it was clear that the Dark did something to her, and, I think, vice versa.”

“So, you have two souls no longer connected together.”

“Yes, but that’s just where it begins. She, our dear Jane, is impulsive, quick to anger, and more importantly, would do anything to have revenge for her sister’s passing. What would she do if she believed that her only family, the only one she loved, was gone?”

He shook his head: “Oh, I have a good idea. There was something wrong about her; I had chalked it up to grief and did not push her. I should have.”

She set her cup down on a small side table, some worry in her eyes as she looked at him: “No guilt, my heart—not for either of us. There was enough grief to go around for everyone. We both missed it, but we are now both aware.”

He allowed those words but replied: “Then I expect you not to have guilt, either. It is not becoming of you. Queen or not, it is not becoming of you or your soul, and I will not allow it.”

She laced her fingers together, placing them in her lap: “The guilt I think I have dealt with. It was slowly turning into anger … or it was until Jane came back and I saw she had a problem. That problem made it clear that there was a … discrepancy that needed to be repaired.”

He considered his tea: “Now that your anger is gone, Dear One, you need to keep it away … the Dark is counting on using it against you.”

She looked towards Jane and John: “Something happened in the two weeks that she was out of touch. When she came back, she claimed to have been overseas for some time, but that made little sense as they were inseparable. There was something missing in Jane. Again, it seemed like the loss of her sister was the answer, but it goes further than that. He was missing. They were missing.”

“So, that’s when you put Tom and Camilla onto things?”

She nodded and picked up her tea again, taking a sip: “There was something that happened in the world here, driven by forces bound to rules that apply here. Something else happened outside of this world, where other rules apply. Having the two of them dealing with this would give me a new perspective on what It wants.”

He chuckled: “There’s something more, Dear One.”

She smiled over the rim of her cup: “Perhaps … perhaps not. We shall see.”

He raised his cup in reply: “Yes. We shall. But the story isn’t over yet. You are holding back a few things. I can tell.”

She paused, just before taking a sip: “Two things: All four of them are connected to what happened. Two of them are what It has focused upon.”

He frowned: “So they are all at risk. But which two are the ones It has focused on?”

Tera’s tail pointed at Jane: “She is one, obviously. I believe that Thomas is the other. They both have suffered great losses. They can both be influenced by It making an appeal to their darker emotions.”

“What happens when one … or the other … or both … is freed?”

“That, my heart, is what I am intending to find out with Jane.”

“And Tom?”

She sighed: “I am trusting that his belief in doing good is strong. Camilla will help in that. So will Nina … assuming that Thomas will let them in to help.”

He considered her words, then asked: “But what about our missing tail? How does she fit into this?”

Tera looked into her cup as if reading tea leaves, though there were none: “What would one do if one could bring a lost love back? What would one give up? What would happen when the truth was revealed?”