A Review of MILF Teacher’s Hot Favor by Reed James

MILF Teacher's Hot Favor by Reed James

MILF Teacher’s Hot Favor by Reed James

A review today of the eleventh work in the Succubus’s Naughty Romp series by Reed James. There’s a point where erotic series tend to fall into being a bit too repetitive. The main character does the same thing over and over again, the story stalls and just really doesn’t go anywhere. It’s a shame especially when there are plot threads that could be explored, and they aren’t.

Sex alone isn’t really interesting, not even for a succubus. If the characters aren’t evolving, or the story doesn’t move towards the series climax, shouldn’t it do so?

  • Title: MILF Teacher’s Hot Favor
  • Author: Reed James
  • Published By: Naughty Ladies Publications
  • Length: 33 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B0B92Y47F2
  • Publishing Date: August 7, 2022
  • This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com

The work tells of:

No longer a shy nerd, Trevor has a harem of naughty women thanks to Jezebel. The wanton succubus has shaped him into a stud that the ladies want. Including his busty teacher, Mrs. Smith. She has one hot favor she needs his help with before she can teach her class. The married MILF has an itch only the stud can scratch. And Trevor is more than eager to give his hot teacher what she needs. But as he’s enjoying his fun, an angel has arrived to put an end to the succubus’s naughty romp. Will the angel succeed?

Trent continues to have his way with Jezebel looking on and encouraging him. He might be getting all he desires but there is a cost brewing too. Sometimes getting what you want means someone else doesn’t and you never know what they might do.

As in the previous parts of the series, the story picks up immediately where the last part closed and continues onwards with Trent progressively becoming more dominant and controlling over his harem. Jezebel for the most part watches, encourages, and becomes involved in the erotic moments. The main focus is in the erotica which, unfortunately, lacks heat much of the time.

The tone of the characters, the dialogue they use, and how things are described, felt very repetitive despite the situations being different. Overall, the story became boring, and my interest wandered more often that I wanted it to.

Jezebel’s arc didn’t move very much overall as well. She acted as a means for Trent to get what he wanted, she teased others at times, but there wasn’t a lot else that happened. The threat to her plans, which still aren’t explored, made herself a bit more known, the means to oppose her is a bit clearer. But there wasn’t much for her to do that interested me. There is a lot of character arc in Jezebel that isn’t being exploited towards making this work more than the ongoing number of erotic scenes. I don’t think that is doing the story or characters any good overall.

At some point the story needs to move towards Jezebel revealing her plan or taking things into her hands to get what she wants. A mention in passing of what her goal is doesn’t explore her character and how evil she really might be. I’d like to just have more time spent in telling Jezebel’s story than continually returning to Trent and his next sexual conquest.

Two and a half out of five pitchforks.

The story is turning very much in the same direction that a number of works by this author with a succubus theme have gone. I’ll hope that the story takes Jezebel towards something different than the others have ended up at. Certainly, turning towards more character development as happened in this part of the series will help, but there’s still a lot of story to tell beyond the tepid heat of the erotica.

Tera

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