A work that references succubi in the title should have them appear more than fleetingly within the pages. It’s not a question of anything else but expectation after all.
A review then of a story in which one character might be a succubus, another becomes one, and one already is, but overall there’s very little in the way of succubus themes to be found.
- Title: He Attended An All Girl’s Academy And Became Their Succubus Bimbo
- Author: Grace Morgan
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 17 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B086ZX6JTS (Original), B08PFZ4LZR (Reissue)
- Publishing Date: April 10, 2020 (Original), December 1, 2020 (Reissue)
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com
The work tells of:
When Yuri Takemoto becomes the exchange student at his university, he soon finds himself at a mansion in the English countryside. Within minutes of his arrival, he learns that the mansion houses an all girl’s academy, which presents a problem for him. He quickly discovers that it’s not just a normal academy, but also a coven of witches. He is then transformed into a woman and finds himself flooded with new desires that he never could have before imagined.
Yuri arrives at a new school as an exchange student. The problem is that the school is girls only and he’s a guy. But Mistress Lilith can take care of that minor issue, and when she’s done, Yuri might have a different view of things.
The work is mainly a gender transformation story with a very hentai feeling to the erotica and story. As such the story is about Yuri being drawn into the world of Mistress Lilith and discovering what the school is about. Over time he is gender transformed, becoming rather bimbo in character soon after. It’s the last few pages where there is a bit of succubus transformation and then it ends.
There is some question as to if Lilith is a succubus in some way, but likely not. The revelations about how Yuri came to the school and the reasons as to why he was transformed are cute in their way.
The writing reads very much in an anime tone, the plot is mainly centred around that. The dialogue is missing emotion, and at times there’s no heat in the erotica or seemingly the story wanders aimlessly. Still there is a story to be found, I just don’t think its all that much succubus in nature.
Two out of five pitchforks.
Lilith may or may not be a succubus, Yuri by the end of the work is one. Otherwise there’s little to be found in the way of succubi characters or themes. Mainly a gender transformation work with a lot of hentai erotica, there’s little else to be found.