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The Domain of the Incubus (eBook)
|The Domain of the Incubus|
The Domain of the Incubus eBook Cover,
written by Desiree Silver
|Series||Monster and Possession Erotica|
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||January 2, 2015|
|Followed by||The Domain of the Incubus 2|
The Domain of the Incubus is an eBook written by Desiree Silver. It is the first work in the Monster and Possession Erotica series by this author. In this work the character Evan is an Incubus.
- Title: The Domain of the Incubus
- Author: Desiree Silver
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 23 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00RQN2610
- Publishing Date: January 2, 2015
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
A young innocent woman attends a luxurious, fancy dinner party in the city. Little does she know that soon her life will be changed completely after she is utterly dominated by a seductive demon and his ominous friends.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 5, 2015
Alexia is invited to a club with her girlfriend. Seeing no harm in doing so, she goes to the club and finds that things aren’t exactly what she expected them to be. Meeting Evan, an incubus, and some other supernatural creative turns into something more than unexpected.
I honestly didn’t like this story very much for many reasons. The writing was awkward, uneven and had a lot of spelling mistakes as well. The dialog didn’t sound right, again was awkward, and read like the author didn’t understand English slang well. The erotica wasn’t really all that hot, didn’t add anything to the story and just left me cold as a whole.
Alexia herself is interesting, I liked her character and how she tries to deal with what happens to her, but there was so much strangeness in the storytelling that I couldn’t get past that. That’s a shame because at first I liked the story, but then as things progressed it all went downhill and I just wasn’t interested any more.
As for Evan, the incubus of the work, he is nothing more than a means to have a character dominate over Alexia, draw her towards the erotica and then force her into a series of situations with other supernatural beings that, again, did nothing for me. His dialog was stilted, read poorly, and just saying the words out loud told just how wrong they were.
The erotica is violent, uneven, had very little, if any, heat in it. It reads poorly as a domination story, tending towards saying that to be dominant over another you must do violence, be gruff, nasty, and care not all that much about the other person. Again, this, for me, isn’t what a D/s relationship is, and as such that made my enjoyment of the story fade the further the story went along.
Uneven writing, many spelling mistakes, characters that hold no interest, a plot that only serves to push the main character into a series of sexual encounters that really have no heat in them. All in all I expected more and didn’t see that.
I’ll give this work one pitchfork out of five.