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Taken by Her Mechanic (eBook)
|Taken by Her Mechanic|
Taken by Her Mechanic eBook Cover,
written by Tori Kiss
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||April 3, 2013|
|Preceded by||Her Mechanic - A Supernatural Seduction|
Taken by Her Mechanic is an eBook written by Tori Kiss. In this work the character Agjalel is a Succubus.The work is a reissue of Her Mechanic - A Supernatural Seduction which was published under another author name.
- Title: Taken by Her Mechanic
- Author: Tori Kiss
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 15 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00C6QF0RO
- Publishing Date: April 3, 2013
She's a succubus who needs her fix. Only a man can fill her with the power she needs.
She finds him. He's a mechanic. Or... is he something more? This succubus is about to find out.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 7, 2015
When reading this version of the original story, there isn’t any changes to the plot, the characters or anything substantial. I will note that the author did edit a lot of the errors in spelling and grammar that I noticed, which does improve the story.
As I noted in my original review, there is story to be savoured, there are two characters that play off each other so very well that the attraction between them is perfectly written. The situation is a little forced at the beginning, but once the faltering start is past then the real story and the heat arrive.
Agjalel, the Succubus of this story, amazingly enough, has a tail. It’s not exactly what I expected it to be, but I did find it a rather unique take on the Succubi. I also thought that the mythos around her was well done and I wanted to know more about Lovers and the world they live in. While that was what caught me and held me in the story, it also was how perfectly Succubus-like Agjalel acted, what she discovered about herself and then Vincent added much more to that pleasure.
We really don’t learn a lot about Vincent, and to me that’s a shame because so many ideas, hints, and suggestions about who and what he is appear in the work. When the climax of the story comes, for both of them, what could have happened, and I expected the ending to be a sad one for all that was hinted at, thankfully did not. But the ending came too soon.
The writing is wonderful, emotional, and draws you into the story. I found myself wanting the hopes of Agjalel about Vincent to be true, But it wasn’t only that. What really made this story work for me is that there is the connection between the two, the choice that Agjalel must make, and what that really means. But then the story ends and… and I was left wanting for more. Regretfully that never came from this author, only this reissue of the story and that, honestly, is a sad thing.
I’ll give this work four out of five pitchforks.
There is more to tell about Agjalel and Vincent. A lot more. It is a shame that promise, that heat, ends where it does.
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available