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Succubus Predator (eBook)
Succubus Predator eBook Cover, written by Juliette Lubach
Amazon Digital Services
|Publication date||November 26, 2013|
|Preceded by||Succubus Initiation|
|Followed by||Succubus Redemption|
Succubus Predator is an eBook written by Juliette Lubach. It is the second work in the Succubus Trilogy by this author. In this work the character Haley Vance works towards being a Succubus through her actions in the course of the story.
- Title: Succubus Predator
- Author: Juliette Lubach
- Published By: Smashwords and Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 38 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00GXU3B8O
- IBSN: 9781311364067
- Publishing Date: November 26, 2013
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Haley Vance has passed her initiation. After a little 'negotiation' of her contract, she's ready to begin her work. Her first target is Chris Henson, a middle aged businessman with a suitcase full of secrets, some he even keeps from himself. Haley awakens the man he really is, but decides to follow him home and take on his gold digging wife Tracy, too.
Causing the downfall of a woman is only slightly more challenging. By the time she's done with them, Tracy's victims are slaves to sins of the flesh.
Are Haley's methods too extreme, even for the Prince of Darkness?
The following review was originally published on Tera's Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 28, 2014
Haley is selfish and self-centered to put it mildly, but what really makes her unlikeable is that she wants to be a Succubus because then she can have all kinds of sex and be something more than an ordinary girl. After summoning a demon and making a deal with them, Haley seduces three individuals towards her goal of being a Succubus. But that’s the thing, she isn’t a Succubus in this story, not in the slightest.
The story really only uses the idea of Haley needing to accomplish some tasks to get her placed in several situations where she has sex towards her goal. It is entirely possible to remove the connection to Succubi in this work and have absolutely no change to the story as a whole.
It is, for the most part, a series of hot flashes interspersed with Haley gloating and then being told what her next assignment is. As such, there really is no story to speak of, the characters are there only to be used in a sex scene and then forgotten about. As well, Haley’s attitude, her total lack of emotion other than having orgasms after each conquest, and her seeming lack of care about anything she does really bothered me.
I do understand that is how she was written and is presented, but as such I had no interest in her, what she did, the other characters in the story or anything else. More so, as there was no Succubi in the story, Haley wasn’t one, and the end only suggested what was to come did connect to the title of the work, I cannot say that it was Succubus story.
It was really a “want to be” or perhaps more accurately a “use the word Succubus to sell books” release and that connected with the total lack of interest that I felt after the first four pages just left me cold…
I’ll give this work one pitchfork out of five.
Really not anything more than hot flash after hot flash and in the end that doesn’t make for the best of stories…