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Succubus: Taken by my Boyfriend's Present (eBook)
|Succubus: Taken by my Boyfriend's Present|
Succubus: Taken by my Boyfriend's Present eBook Cover, written by Sinn Lee
Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||November 20, 2014|
|Followed by||Hungry for the Dickgirl Demoness|
Succubus: Taken by my Boyfriend's Present is an eBook written by Sinn Lee. The work was reissued in 2016 as Hungry for the Dickgirl Demoness under another author's name. In this work the character Sandra is a Succubus.
- Title: Succubus: Taken by my Boyfriend's Present
- Author: Sinn Lee
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services & Smashwords
- Length: 14 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00PYZ0PYW
- Publishing Date: November 20, 2014
Sandra has kept her succubus blood a secret from everyone. It’s never been a problem, until her boyfriend binds a powerful futanari demoness named Azel, and sends her home as a bodyguard for Sandra. Her boyfriend has no idea about Sandra’s succubus blood, or the fact that Sandra won’t be able to control or subdue the demoness Azel. Sandra will be powerless to the demoness’s naughty intentions for her, as her succubus blood is gradually awoken.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on October 18, 2015
Sandra is, at least, partly a succubus, but she’s managed to keep that hidden from the world and more importantly her boyfriend. Unfortunately Greg, meaning to protect her, binds Azel, a demoness to her. The problem is that the spell is meant for a human… and Sandra isn’t.
Sandra,while having some part of her being a succubus, isn’t really one as a whole. She’s really more human and as such, she has no horns, tail or other succubus features to her. However, over the course of the story her sexual drives are ramped up and as such her needs become very succubus-like. Sandra is, for all intents, ensnared in a trap that Azal springs on her and really there wasn’t a way for her to avoid having her succubus side awakened.
As this happens, it is clear that Sandra had a very submissive personality which Azal, the demoness of the story, plays upon. Once Sandra is transformed, it isn’t just that she undergoes a physical and sexual change, it’s that her personality, her willpower, really a lot of who she is gets buried under a submissive nature that overwhelms everything else she is, or remembers.
Azal isn’t quite a stereotypical demoness and, in a way, she’s more of a succubus than Sandra is in the story. It’s clear that Azal wants Sandra, is willing to use whatever means she needs to in order to make that happen, and if that takes a bit more than Sandra would expect from her, then that’s exactly what she does. Azal is futanari in nature, which means that Sandra’s succubus nature is drawn to both sides of her physical form. But somehow Azal’s dominant nature I think was a bigger draw to capture Sandra and the playing of that theme in the work was really well done.
The work is a hot flash, quite a good one in that it isn’t violent or has a lack of passion in it. There is a need, really in both characters, that is fulfilled in the story and that’s nice to see here. The buildup to the erotica lays out a really interesting back story for Sandra and that isn’t forgotten as the erotica takes over the story, which I thought made it better. Once past the climax and some of the aftermath was told, there still was a hint of things working out in the end for everyone in some shape or form which was nice as well.
There is one very minor mistake in the story where Azel is referred to as being “he” in one sentence, but it’s the only error that tripped me up in the work. Otherwise it is a well written hot flash, but, as is often with this author, the story really reads like the first chapter in a longer story. It would be nice to see this author write something more involved and longer as their worlds and characters are really well done.
Four pitchforks out of five.
An interesting story about dominance and submission and all of the things that go wrong and right. Just wish there was more story than this little flash gave.