On May 4, 2016, the 3,900th article was added to the SuccuWiki!

Sorority Shaming (eBook)

From SuccuWiki - The Wiki of the Succubi
Jump to: navigation, search
Sorority Shaming
Sorority Shaming eBook Cover, written by Monique Reyer
Sorority Shaming eBook Cover,
written by Monique Reyer
Author(s) Monique Reyer
Series Succubus Journals
Publisher Amazon Digital Services
Publication date April 22, 2015
Media type eBook
Length 29 Pages
ASIN B00WL1IUYO
Preceded by Sorority Shenanigans
Followed by Partying with the Frat

For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).


Sorority Shaming is an eBook written by Monique Reyer. It is the third work in the Succubus Journals series by this author. In this work the character Leisha is a Succubus.


Overview

  • Title: Sorority Shaming
  • Author: Monique Reyer
  • Published By: Amazon Digital Services
  • Length: 29 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B00WL1IUYO
  • Publishing Date: April 22, 2015


Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki


Plot Summary

Hey there. I'm Leisha and, just so you know, I'm a succubus -- a literal demonic incarnation of sex and lust. I work for the most powerful warlock on the planet and earlier tonight he sent me to wreck a sorority Yeah, well, the people in this sorority, they went for me like Eve for the apple. I mean, wow. That was just...whoo. Man, I haven't had that much fun in a while.

Anyway, I did the first four, showed them a really good time, made 'em reeeaaaally happy, nudge nudge wink wink. Hooked two of them up for their first lesbian experience. Gave Hentai Girl some hot tentacle action. Ms. Boring just wanted celebrity beefcake so, sure, whatever.

Anyway, that was all earlier tonight. Now it's time for the last member of the sorority. This one though...yeah, I'm not out to make her happy. Nope, she needs a good shot of shaming to make her lose that snotty attitude. I'll get the other four together downstairs, help them have an amazing time...probably invite some fraternity guys in from up the street. Little Ms Snooty can suffer while she sits and watches.

On the other hand, once she does lose that snotty attitude, I'm betting there's gonna be a wild little sex kitten underneath. And I am so very much looking forward to letting that kitten play with my ball o'yarn, if you know what I mean.


Book Review

The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on June 2, 2015


The summaries are told in the voice of the main character of the series, a succubus named Leisha who has one of the most odd personalities for a succubus that I have read in some time. Beyond that, some of her powers aren’t what are usually seen in succubi, and that makes her a unique character.

I liked her more when she was telling her story, pieces of her past, who summoned her and so on, more than when she was having her way with various students at a college campus. Some of the flashes are, to be honest, rather repetitive, rushed, and sometimes there isn’t much in the way of story to hold those parts of the series together.

Leisha isn’t stereotypically evil, not by any means, and there are several points in the series where she cares about others, what happens to them. She teaches lessons to some, gives others some needed boosts in their self-image and, most interesting of all, she doesn’t want to do others harm. She’d rather have fun, be fun, and enjoy sex for the sake of it than in doing something evil through sex.

There is a lot of internal monologue as Leisha learns about those she is sent to teach lessons to, how she relates to the one that summoned her, and, as well, one specific mortal that she has a particular like for. It makes her a much more interesting and better character and in being so makes the series that much better.

The problem comes through the dialog, which reads a bit odd, some of the actions taken by others in the work, which just makes them look foolish, stupid and most of all, stereotypes the male characters into thinking about sex for the most part and then takes the female characters and twists them in different ways before the series is done.

By the end of the series, there really isn’t anything in the way of a conclusion to speak of, there’s quite a few plots left unfinished, actions left to play out, and in some cases, the results of what Leisha did could lead to more problems. Still, none of this really is played out to the end.

The focus of the series is all of the erotica that revolves around Leisha of all kinds. Just about anything goes with her, and usually does. But having most of the series being focused on that, the short moments when some character development begins, some questions are answered, isn’t told as well as if could be in the rush to get to the next piece of erotica.

The series could do with some editing, there are a number of word errors and some dialog just sounds wrong. A bit more focus on Leisha herself, to tell more of her story, where she came from, why she is there, and so on would have made this a lot more enjoyable for me.

I’ll give the series as a whole three out of five pitchforks.

There’s promise in Leisha to be sure. The problem is that being drowned by the erotica. A better balance, a little more care and some focus would have made this series more than it came to be.


External Links