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Revenge Of The Succubus (eBook)
|Revenge Of The Succubus|
Revenge Of The Succubus eBook Cover,
written by Sylvia Parker
|Publisher||Erotica On Demand|
|Publication date||September 27, 2014|
|Preceded by||The Succubus Meets Her Match|
|Followed by||The Succubus Reborn|
Revenge Of The Succubus is an eBook written by Sylvia Parker. It is the second work in the Transformed series by this author. In this work the character Ubana is a Succubus.
- Title: Revenge Of The Succubus
- Author: Sylvia Parker
- Published By: Erotica On Demand
- Length: 18 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00NZM4LDW
- Publishing Date: September 27, 2014
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- The Succubus Meets Her Match
- The Succubus Reborn
- Return Of The Succubus
- Attack Of The Relentless Succubus
- Claimed By The Succubus
Assassin for hire Clive Hastings barely escapes with his life after a run-in with the infamous succubus Ubana. Transformed from the strange amulet on his chest, his powerful new form carries him straight to the house of his employer: a man who goes only by "Sink."
An incredulous Sink listens as Clive tells him the whole story: the fight with the old man, the strange amulet which transformed him, and his daring escape from the life-sucking demon woman. Once Clive is done telling his tale, an amused Sink offers him a cigar from a wooden box in celebration of a job well done.
But all is not as it seems as an acrid green mist sprays him full in the face - a nerve poison! Clive is knocked out cold.
When he comes to, a familiar female voice reaches his ears from the shadows. Ubana has found him again, and she is eager to claim what is rightfully hers in... Revenge Of The Succubus.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 12, 2015
As a whole the series strikes me as being very “superhero comic book” in theme, plots and characters. The events of the series are very over the top and at a certain point instead of reading, I began to skim and that is never a good sign.
The events of the series tend towards themes that one might find in a B-movie in a lot of ways. Stereotypical evil, plots, almost heroes, victims and so forth. It became hard to read when the storyline just created monster erotica for the sake of doing so. By the same token, the erotica itself was so much over the top, violent, and, as a whole, not at all interesting to me. I think that the main problem was a few good ideas tied together with a series of vignettes and they didn’t have the connectivity needed to make that work well.
As for the succubus of the series, Ubana, she is stereotypically evil and demonic with a need for sex that bordered on the silly. The few scenes she appeared in were means towards an end for several characters, quite literally. To try and understand her drive, what she wants, can be best said to be a need for violent sex with anyone and everyone. Latex not being optional for her at least.
The writing was a bit difficult to follow and I think major editing would be needed to bring this series to something approaching readability. Less cartoonish characterizations and events and more of a focus to the series would be a good thing. If I think about the story of the series and ignore the erotic aspects of it, it actually reads better in that the series turns into a mystery to be solved. Focus on the core story, give the characters a chance to be more than cardboard, and I think there is something good in this series. But as it is right now, I just didn’t enjoy it at all.
I give the series as a whole one and a half pitchforks out of five.
Difficult to read at times, the plot seemed lost from the beginning and with it much of any character development there might have been. While there was a hint of something interesting at the beginning, the series lost its way and me with it. I don’t think that needed to be, but it did and more the shame for that.