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Return Of The Succubus (eBook)
|Return Of The Succubus|
Return Of The Succubus eBook Cover,
written by Sylvia Parker
|Publisher||Erotica On Demand|
|Publication date||October 1, 2014|
|Preceded by||The Succubus Reborn|
|Followed by||Attack Of The Relentless Succubus|
Return Of The Succubus is an eBook written by Sylvia Parker. It is the fourth work in the Transformed series by this author. In this work the character Ubana is a Succubus.
- Title: Return Of The Succubus
- Author: Sylvia Parker
- Published By: Erotica On Demand
- Length: 25 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00O3XC6RU
- Publishing Date: October 1, 2014
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- The Succubus Meets Her Match
- Revenge Of The Succubus
- The Succubus Reborn
- Attack Of The Relentless Succubus
- Claimed By The Succubus
Hot on the heels of his next target, assassin for hire Clive Hastings lies in wait in the shadows of the Carmel Market. But before he has a chance to meet his mark, his cover is blown by Spurian soldiers who suspect he is a criminal.
His huge bat wings lifting him into the air, the glistening demon soars above the screaming throngs of people in search of one person: Anyah, a lady of the night. She holds the key to the next piece of the puzzle for Clive and his associates.
He pulls her into the air, whisking her off on a terrifying journey that can only end with one possible conclusion. She begs for her life, telling the barbaric creature of the underworld that she will do anything for him if he spares her life.
The dark beast has one thing in mind as he talks to his associates through a transmitter in his ear. But their master plan is interrupted as an old friend - thought long dead - makes her appearance in the... Return Of The Succubus.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 12, 2015
As a whole the series strikes me as being very “superhero comic book” in theme, plots and characters. The events of the series are very over the top and at a certain point instead of reading, I began to skim and that is never a good sign.
The events of the series tend towards themes that one might find in a B-movie in a lot of ways. Stereotypical evil, plots, almost heroes, victims and so forth. It became hard to read when the storyline just created monster erotica for the sake of doing so. By the same token, the erotica itself was so much over the top, violent, and, as a whole, not at all interesting to me. I think that the main problem was a few good ideas tied together with a series of vignettes and they didn’t have the connectivity needed to make that work well.
As for the succubus of the series, Ubana, she is stereotypically evil and demonic with a need for sex that bordered on the silly. The few scenes she appeared in were means towards an end for several characters, quite literally. To try and understand her drive, what she wants, can be best said to be a need for violent sex with anyone and everyone. Latex not being optional for her at least.
The writing was a bit difficult to follow and I think major editing would be needed to bring this series to something approaching readability. Less cartoonish characterizations and events and more of a focus to the series would be a good thing. If I think about the story of the series and ignore the erotic aspects of it, it actually reads better in that the series turns into a mystery to be solved. Focus on the core story, give the characters a chance to be more than cardboard, and I think there is something good in this series. But as it is right now, I just didn’t enjoy it at all.
I give the series as a whole one and a half pitchforks out of five.
Difficult to read at times, the plot seemed lost from the beginning and with it much of any character development there might have been. While there was a hint of something interesting at the beginning, the series lost its way and me with it. I don’t think that needed to be, but it did and more the shame for that.