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Orgy of the Succubi (eBook)
|Orgy of the Succubi|
Orgy of the Succubi Cover, written by Indy McDaniel
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||May 29, 2013|
Orgy of the Succubi is an eBook written by Indy McDaniel. In this work the characters Mara and Yuki are Succubi and intend to transform Caitlin into a Succubus as well.
- Title: Orgy of the Succubi
- Author: Indy McDaniel
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 11 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00D3L1DB8
- Publishing Date: May 29, 2013
Mara and Yuki are working to bring Caitlin into their demonic ranks as a fellow succubus. Collin and Zeke are just the two hapless young men being manipulated by the pheromones filling the air. Not that anyone's complaining.
The following review was originally published on Tera's Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 14, 2014
Caitlin once was an ordinary girl until two Succubi, Yuki and Mara noticed her and decided to turn her into a Succubus as well. What follows is the three using their powers, including mind control, to make two friends of Catlin’s do their bidding.
There are some erotic moments, including f/f And m/m scenes. In fact the entire work is short sex scenes connected with a few thoughts from one or two characters before it continues. The problem I have is that the story begins in the middle. There is no explanation of just how Catlin is now a Succubus. The display of her powers and that of the other Succubi is very quick and undersized in nature. We don’t even know if any of them have horns or a tail for that matter.
Overall, the story would work if the Succubi were not. Removing the mention of Succubi just turns the story into a teenage sex story with a bit of spice to it. It isn’t so much the story of Succubi as it is the story of three girls making two boys perform for them, the reward being that they can have sex with the girls.
A bit too juvenile for my taste, though based on the names of the Succubi sisters if felt like an episode of a Japanese manga series. That’s not a bad thing, but given that so much of the story was about Catlin learning to use her powers as a succubus, it would have been nice to see the beginning of this story.
By the same point, the story ends too soon, leaves questions unanswered and really could have been much longer and involved than it is. A hot flash alone isn’t everything. It is adding the spie to the characters in their lives that makes it so much more.
Two and a half pitchfork out of five.
More story to match all of the sex scenes and I would like this much more than I do honestly…