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Naamah: A Succubus Tale
Naamah: A Succubus Tale, is a novel written by Mahogany SilverRain.
- Title: Naamah: A Succubus Tale
- Author: Mahogany SilverRain
- Format: eNovel
- Publisher: Lulu.com
- Length: 58 Pages
- Language: English
- ISBN-13: 978-0-557-11188-6
- Release Date: 2009
Naamah is the first of the Succubi and Incubi. Being the first child of Lilith and Lucifer brings with it both advantages and problems. A human has caught her interest, and the question for Naamah is, are the risks worth the price?
The following is a review by TeraS
This novel is about the first of the Succubi, Naamah. She meets a human named Eli and finds herself falling into love with him. The novel follows her growing relationship with Eli, the problems that creates for her, and for him as well. Eli is reincarnated over and over, Naamah always finding him given time. Eventually she is given a chance to be human by Eli, but in doing so she faces both Heaven and Hell in a battle she never expected to be involved in.
While the author's writing is good, the characters well defined and the events play out as they must, I found that at times the story seemed rushed. It was as if the author wanted to get from event to event as quickly as possible. Any encounter between Naamah and Eli, with the exception of the first one, is too short. It would have ben nice to see more about their relationship developing, more of the lives that Eli experienced, and the trials that Naamah faced.
Perhaps the author's next novel will have more of this in it...