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Luna: Succubus Fantasies (eBook)
|Luna: Succubus Fantasies|
Luna: Succubus Fantasies eBook Cover, written by Dark Ones
|Publisher||Dark Ones Publishing|
|Publication date||January 7, 2012|
Luna: Succubus Fantasies is an eBook written by Dark Ones. In this work, the main character of the story, Luna, is a Succubus.
- Title: Luna: Succubus Fantasies
- Author: Dark Ones
- Published By: Dark Ones Publishing
- Format: eBook
- Length: 10 Pages
- ASIN: B006UYEJFC
- ISBN: 9781301637904
- Publishing Date: January 7, 2012
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Luna is a succubus who must fulfill the monthly mission her heat cycle demands. While on the hunt, Luna meets a handsome stranger who succumbs to her sexy succubi ways. As they mate, Luna is not surprised to see they are spied upon by an eager young couple. Will a handsome police officer spoil the group's fun with his discovery of them or will Luna be able to fulfill her mission to the patient Incubus that awaits her?
The following review was originaly published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 12th, 2013
I think that the saddest part of this story to me was the summary at the beginning which told of what Succubi are and do, and what Incubi are and do in this series. The part that I sighed over was that the numbers of both Succubi and Incubi are diminishing over time and that, for the most part, children of the Succubi die before they are born.
Just a really sad way to start a story I thought.
Luna is very much the seductress Succubus, but we see no horns or tail when she is described. But otherwise, she is every bit a Succubus with the powers to match. She uses them to entrap several men and one woman in a tryst in the woods, commands them with her powers to perform all sorts of sex with her and at her direction, and then collects from the men what she desires.
The story overall is a hot flash with the barest hint of a storyline to it. However the story is pushed aside for the sex which sometimes has odd things happen in the middle of things. There are a few dislocated and disjointed moments as well, especially at the conclusion of the story which didn’t make a lot of sense. As well, there were several points in the sex scenes where the action was… off. It didn’t ring true to me and that was mainly because I don’t think it is possible to have a conversation, or even speak a word, when Luna was having her way with the men or the woman in this story.
I would have liked to see this be a longer story, I would have liked to know more about Luna and her world, and I hoped that the next work in the series would manage that.
Three out of five pitchforks.
Wasn’t that interested in the end, wanted more story and less sex but didn’t.