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Lilith the Incubus (eBook)
|Lilith the Incubus|
Lilith the Incubus eBook Cover,
written by Charlotte Chase
|Series||Lilith the Demon|
|Publication date||May 13, 2015|
|Preceded by||Lilith the Succubus|
|Followed by||Lilith the Demon: Full Series|
Lilith the Incubus is an eBook written by Charlotte Chase. It is the second work in the Lilith the Demon series by this author. In this work the character Lilith is a Succubus.
- Title: Lilith the Incubus
- Author: Charlotte Chase
- Published By: Thompson-Corner Publications
- Length: 18 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00XM5N3IQ
- Publishing Date: May 13, 2015
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Lilith the demon has an ingeneous plan to bring about the birth of the Antichrist: obtain the seed of the Devil himself, then change into a man and find the most innocent woman on Earth to share it with.
Lilith's plan enters phase two. With Satan's seed boiling inside of her and an innocent, holy woman picked out, all she has to do is seduce the unseducable. But the poor young widow inflames Lilith's passions, and she can barely control herself as she takes her first female lover.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 19, 2015
Lilith is a scheming succubus with grand plans. Wishing to make “a name” for herself, she entwines herself with someone she shouldn’t have and after being used in every way possible, she returns to Earth to complete her plans.
And in reading that entire summary, you’ve pretty much read the entire series from beginning to end. There’s very little story as the majority of the series focuses on Lilith having sex and that’s about all.
Lilith herself is stereotypically evil, self-centred, completely dislikable, but most of all, in being all of these things and more, that only serves to leave not much else in the story as a whole. The erotica is, as well, really not much more than a hot flash, if barely. It’s over the top, bland at times, and just didn’t do anything to hold my interest in the work.
Even when the work moved towards telling a story, it felt half-hearted and uninspired. This could have been something better as a whole if there would have been more story to balance out all of the erotica. I would have liked more about the characters, the reasons for why the story went the way it did and so on.
Overall, the series felt like a typical porn movie in who the characters were and what they did. This is especially true in how the story ended, which was extremely rushed. I wonder if the author came to the climax and then gave up on the series as a whole. It seems like it, in a lot of ways.
Blandly written, uninteresting characters, a plot that was very thin and only existed to give a reason why Lilith acted as she did. Needs more story, more character development, but most of all, the erotica needs to be so much more than it is.
One out of five pitchforks.
I don’t expect a third work in the series for one thing, but I would have liked the author to try rewriting things a little bit and reissuing this series. Flesh out the characters, tell a story and build some heat.
There might be something then.