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Fertile Mistresses (eBook)
Fertile Mistresses eBook Cover,
written by A. Vivian Vane
|Author(s)||A. Vivian Vane|
|Publisher||A. Vivian Vane|
|Publication date||November 9, 2013|
Fertile Mistresses is an eBook written by A. Vivian Vane. In this work the characters Azzria and Mahina can be described as being Succubi.
- Title: Fertile Mistresses
- Author: A. Vivian Vane
- Published By: A. Vivian Vane
- Length: 50 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00GL6870C
- IBSN: 9781310450525
- Publishing Date: November 9, 2013
When two demonic shemales meet, the only question is who will be the breeder...and who will be bred!
Worlds collide at the Cum-At-Yer-Own-Risk tavern -- literally. Situated at the nexus of multiple mystic planes, the ramshackle inn has become a gathering place for horny lust-demons and the women that adore them.
Well-hung and curvaceous, Azzria rules her harem of pregnant breeder-bitches with a velvet fist. She loves them and they love her, whether they want to or not. But when a fellow demoness takes an interest in the fertile wombs of the "ol' Cummer" tavern, will Azzria be forced to fight for her position? Or can she and this new rival come to a more...mutually beneficial...compromise?
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on August 12, 2016
Azzria owns a particular tavern where universes cross and she, being a meridi, has her pick of those who travel by and catch her attention. Along comes Mahina, and things start to become hard… in more than one way.
The concept of the main characters is interesting as Azzria and Mahina are meridi, hermaphrodites that have quite a lot of succubus-like appearance to them. As well, the two have the desire to create more of their kind and so the constant arrivals makes that quite possible. They aren’t quite succubi, though there is a hint of that within them. While the beginning of the story offers some background and an idea of what things are like, the story quickly devolves into a series of almost constant sexual encounters.
Those encounters are over the top, sometimes very much so, and there comes a point in the story where the repetitiveness just took away my interest in the story. There’s only so many times one can read about Azzria and Mahina having their way with everyone around them before it loses all interest.
That’s the largest problem in this work. The story is there in the beginning, there’s a lot that could be explored, but in the next instant the story turns towards hot flashes of erotica that really don’t have the heat they could have. Much of that simply comes to how Azzria and Mahina treat those around them. They are dominate, but beyond that they simply see those around them as something to poke into and then go onto the next encounter.
The writing can be crude at times, but that is a reflection of the characters, their attitude and how they see things. There’s really little development in Azzria and Mahina as so much time is spent with their sexual encounters. The heat in the story really doesn’t develop well and I think that comes from the push throughout to move on from moment to moment, leaving no time for reflection or narrative.
When the conclusion comes, that is a twist ending which makes some sense all things considered, but didn’t add anything to the story itself. From the characters’ perspective, to explain why things happened in the story, it gave the suggestion of an explanation. But how that was revealed, the speed at which the shoe was dropped and then the work came to a sudden stop didn’t appeal to me very much.
Being that this work is mainly the erotica, I think the author might have spent more time telling of the past, offering more about Azzria and Mahina than is told. That would help I think to give something to build on.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
I don’t feel like the twist ending was needed by far, it didn’t add much of anything to the events of the story which didn’t really use what the opening suggested. What came was not so much erotica as it was porn and over the top porn at that. Still, there is something here that was interesting, it’s just a shame that wasn’t followed through on.