Jul 26 2010

Storm Clouds 83 – An ongoing Succubi Story

This is the continuing story of the Succubi called Storm Clouds…

If you want to read previous chapters, please click the link in the Tale header at the top of the page marked Storm Clouds or click here...

Chapter 14 needed more expansion in a few places, so that happened this week… Just seemed to me that there were things unsaid and mebby a different point of view on one part would make it better…


Storm Clouds 83

Chapter 14

By TeraS

After Camilla left, Tom spent the next thirty minutes grilling Bill over what he had done, what he was doing, and whether anyone in his company might have taken it upon themselves to attack Brent and his wife. He came to the decision that, while Bill wasn’t directly involved in what happened, Tom could not dismiss the possibility that someone who worked for Bill had done the deed … or that Bill was hiding something from him.

That bothered him.

It wasn’t that he didn’t believe what Bill had said; it was the sheer stupidity of Bill blowing up and going off on a tirade over the injustice that he perceived was done to him.

Tom didn’t enjoy pushing his old friend that way. Worse was trying to break all of his explanations and reasons why he wasn’t responsible for what had happened. Most of the reasons made sense—most of them—but one exchange just about pushed Bill over the edge, and that worried him.

Tom sighed and paced in front of the offices again.  He was sure that the workers inside were looking at him oddly, but he didn’t care: Bill was not quite cleared; that one piece of evidence would damn him in court if it came to that.

Tom hoped that it wouldn’t.

It wasn’t much evidence. But it was enough that fingers could be pointed, witnesses found, and, in the end, Bill could be sent to jail for a long time. But when you are seen threatening someone with death, and promising to harm his family … that is too much to ignore.

Bill had explained that he was madder than hell. That something had snapped inside of him when Brent was nearby. “Something ’bout that guy rubs me the wrong way. He’s just so damn smug, knows all of the secrets, stuff that you don’t want out. I dunno how he does it, but he knows where to be and what to look for. Damn frustratin’. He’d be a great spy. Wonder if he is one.”

Tom continued to pace around for a while. He didn’t know where Camilla had gone; he assumed she would return to the office when she was done talking to Billy. He assumed that she would, at least. She seemed like a responsible woman, if a bit irritating. It hit him, then, why Bill would be driven crazy by Brent.

Tom wondered if that was part of those people’s nature.

He watched Bill’s people run their errands in and out of the office, most of them ignoring his pacing as he waited for Camilla to return. In his mind he was putting together the questions that needed to be put to him next. He was, after all by his own admission, someone needing to be grilled for information.

Coming to the end of one of his walks down the corridor, he turned without looking and walked head on into someone. A short blonde Asian someone. She was standing there in front of him, a pile of files and papers surrounding her scattered on the floor. For a moment her dark brown eyes regarded him and then, a flush of embarrassment passed over her and she knelt to the floor beginning to gather what she had dropped moments before.

Tom moved to help her, “I’m sorry, please, let me help you.”

She didn’t reply to him, save for a slight nod, her focus on the mess around her for the moment rather than towards Tom beside her.

After a few minutes, Tom handed her the last file and as she finally looked at him again said, “I’m Thomas”

The blush was still there as she replied, “Tenshi. Please forgive my clumsiness.”

“It was my fault. Should have been paying attention instead of being a hazard to women.”

That made her smile just slightly, “I… thank you for the help.”

“Welcome. Have you been with Bill long?”

Clutching the files to her chest as she stood she managed, “A year now. Please excuse me. I must attend to my duties…”

She then rushed off again on whatever errand she was on, leaving Tom standing there alone again pondering what she had said to him. More importantly, why she was so shook up over what had happened.

Camilla came into view soon after, her heels clicking on the concrete floor of the warehouse. Tom noticed that Billy wasn’t there, and wasn’t too pleased about that. He had been intending to grill Billy next, thanks to his father’s admission, but would now have to hunt him down and corner him. Filing away the thoughts on his old friend, he called out to Camilla, “Where’s Billy? Have to talk to him.”

“No, you don’t. He’s not to blame for this: he nor his father.”

Tom rubbed his chin a moment, then said, “You got a feeling or something?”

She looked around, then nodded and explained, “Let’s just say that my … ‘feelings’ … are pretty accurate.”

Turning away, he replied, “You’ll have to explain that to me sometime. Soon would be great. You know, before I have to toss them both in jail.”

Camilla looked at him curiously, then followed behind. Tom seemed to be in a rush to get out of the warehouse, and she found herself running a bit to keep up with him. Then she asked, “Do you have something to charge them with?”

“Enough to charge Bill: making threats. He was foolish in front of a lot of people. That’s a big no-no in things like this.”

“Passions of the heart can make us all say silly things we don’t mean at the moment they are said.”

“Passions can and have killed in the past, you know.”

Camilla had finally caught up to him, and, as she walked beside, started to lecture Tom a bit, “Those are not passions. Those are misguided beliefs and desires that pull one away from what is important, pull one inward, toward oneself. It is easy to fall to darker desires and temptations than it is to hold onto the more important things within.”

“You know, I don’t understand all of that stuff. I’m just a simple man. I haven’t got the time to deal with theories and wishes. I deal with facts. Give me some of those and I’ll be able to deal with ‘em.”

“All right, then.  Fact: Bill said that he would never harm a lady. Fact: you agree that he would not either. Therefore, he cannot be the one to have done the deed nor order it done.”

“Okay; see, that’s not a fact.  That is conjecture.”

“Is it? I don’t think so. I have …”

“A feeling? You said that before. What does that mean?”

The pair exited the warehouse, but Camilla did not speak until she was quite sure that no one else would hear them talk.

“I … We … know people by their souls, Thomas. When I touched your hand, I knew that you were a good man. I also knew that you have a troubled past and that you have lost someone close to you.”

Tom’s look was a mix of shock and concern, but, before he could say anything, she continued:  “I did not look deeply into you. I did not look into your memories; I could have, but, because I respect you, and you did not give me permission, I did not. All I knew was that you cared about what happened to Patricia, for whatever reason you had, and so …”

“And so that was your lure to get me involved in this …”

“You did not have to.”

He stopped walking: “You know, I feel like I was pushed into this. That you and Tera conspired to get me involved and make me stay in it.”

“No. I did not. I gave you the card. I gave you the chance to walk away.  You decided that you needed to find out more and you came into our world. Do not confuse the sight of an open door with walking through it. You had the choice. You made it.”

Tom wanted to rant at her, but her logic was sound. He did poke his nose in, and he was deep in it now. With a sigh, he asked, “How much do you know about Bill and his son?”

“Enough to know that Bill has not killed anyone, ever. I can say the same for Billy, as well.”

“Okay, explain that … in simple words so that my mind doesn’t break.”

Camilla laced her hands together and explained, “If you are dark, or have been touched by the dark, if you have killed or done something that serves the dark and makes it gain power, you are marked, in your soul, with that. If I touch someone like that, I’ll know. The same is true of someone who has been touched by the light, but it is different.”

“Weird. Sort of sounds like you are a divining rod.”

She giggled a bit: “Divine I am not. Or at least I do not appear to be.”

Tom couldn’t help the smile, “Right. I forgot about that.’

“What most people, generally, are shades of grey. That’s normal, and what we expect. But there are always exceptions to that rule. If either of them had killed, they would not be grey; they would be dark. I don’t sense that in either of them.”

“So, you give them a pass?”

“I give them more than a pass: there is nothing in them that even hints they are involved. But …”

“But what?”

“I asked Billy for a favor.”

That stopped Tom in his tracks. Pinching the bridge of his nose, he asked, “What kind of favor?”

“I can’t say.”

“Oh come on. He’s a suspect in spite of your feelings about him.  You can’t just go and trust someone because …”

“I can and I did. In the end I gave him some comfort and, in response to that, he agreed to do something for me. He will. He’s as honourable as his father.”

“Did you tell him anything more than what Bill knows?”

“No. We did talk about his mother a while. He misses her. He does not want to lose his father as well.”

Tom stared off into space for a time before ending the conversation with, “We don’t have the evidence to clear Bill. Right now, he’s the only suspect we’ve got.”

“Then we should find more.”

Tom smiled again, “Right. Look Camilla, I know that you … work … differently then we do. I get that. But you have to see that we have rules and laws here and I have to enforce them. That means that without a piece of paper, a videotape, a confession … hell, anything at all that points me away from Bill, I’m going to arrest him real soon.”

“You will be wrong then.”

“I’ll have to live with that.”

“You will not be able to. I can see that.”

“I know. But that’s part of the job. Sometimes, I think that I sold my soul for the job.”

With that confession, Tom whistled for a cab. It didn’t take long for one to pull up to the curb. He opened the door and let her go in first. As she did so, Camilla told him, with a serious tone in her voice, “You cannot sell that which is held by another Thomas.”

He climbed into the cab, gave their destination and, as they drove away, Tom’s memories came back to haunt him again … as they always did.

As they drove away, Billy watched from one of the windows in the upper floor of the warehouse. He liked Camilla, liked her a lot. After they had left, he stood there by the window watching the traffic pass by and thought about what Camilla had asked him to do. He didn’t know why exactly he had agreed to it, maybe it was just wanting to do something when, so far, there was nothing he could do for his father.

With a sigh he rummaged in his pockets until he found his phone, opened it, and made a call.

“It’s me. Yah. No, no they didn’t arrest Dad. I… trust them. Have to trust someone don’t I? Anyway, I need somethin’ done. Today.”

Billy turned away from the window and walked off into the gloom around him, doing what he hoped would help his father in the end…

Jul 25 2010

Pitchfork Tights for a Succubi….

While looking around for Succubus costumes I came across something of an accessory really, but it made me smile and think of all sorts of evil things when I saw them…

It might be a little bit hard to see, but the seams of these tights have a pitchfork in them…

Now, maybe they aren’t something that I would wear to the office…

Okay with the right dress I’d be tempted to, but nonetheless, this really is a neat idea and I give points to the person that came up with this idea…

They are reasonably priced as well at $4 US per pair…

You can find them here if you are interested in them.

With the right costume, possibly the one from earlier this week, and the right accessories, they could work really well…

They would certainly give a new definition to following the red line wouldn’t they?

I’ll have to think about these for the costume from this past week on the Tale… It could be a good fit with those red Mary Janes…

Nonetheless, I’ll put them in my “to be pondered for evil use” file and see if I can work out a way to fit them into the right sort of costume…


Jul 24 2010

Speedpainting Succubus Temptation…

I love art that shows Succubi and Angels together in various scenes and this week I came across a speedpainting video of one of them, it’s called Devil’s Temptation…

And in case the embedding doesn’t work:


This is the creation of an artist named Ljmasquerade who also has a Deviantart site you can see here.

She says that the Angel’s name is Resuri and the Succubus, or Devil, is named X. That has soooo many naughty thoughts behind it don’t you think?

I know that it’s a little frantic at times, but the end result of this is a really cute and sexy work of a Succubus tempting an Angel with an apple…

Really a delicious work and you can see the final image in all of it’s yumminess here!


Jul 23 2010

Bruce Colero’s Naked ((Succubi)) Desire…

Today I am sharing the last of four posts I have made about Bruce Colero and the upcoming release of his new book of art called Naked Desires here on the Tale… And just over there to the right is Bruce himself from a promotional sheet from his new book that he sent me…

I’ve been looking, I have really, for signs of horns or a tail in that photo… I’m pretty sure they are there somewhere, but if not, that’s okay… I’ll put in a good word for him with the Succubi that I know just in case… I mean after all, you just never know what sort of inspiration would be helpful now do you?


Seriously though, Bruce is a wonderful person in so many ways… Not just artistically, which is amazing in itself, but as a person that cares a great deal about all of the things he is involved in… Especially his art…

I’m once again showing the cover to Bruce’s newest book here to the left, but on the right is the lovely art of an Angel which appears on the back cover of the book.

She’s just a gorgeous sexy Angel isn’t she? I like her wings very much but more so I like her expression. It’s a look that seems to be somewhere between surprise and amusement that she has been discovered… Of course the next question is I wonder who’s she looking at and if she did that on purpose?

Angels can be a little devilish too you know… I know one in particular who’s halo turns a nice shade of orange when…


Well, you’ll have to use your imaginations on that now won’t you?

Last Friday I shared an image of a Succubus that had been summoned by an unwary mage that Bruce had created. You can find that post here.

Bruce was kind enough to give me one other image from this book that he said I could share here, which I think is the pinnacle of his Succubi works, and I’m going to share that work with you all today…

There is lots to see in it, and this work by Bruce is called The Covenant

It really is such a very sensual and delicious work isn’t it? I love the Succubus’ eyes… The darkness that fills them but with the little shine of simmering sexuality and power that she holds within her… The shape and texture of her horns which, for a moment, almost look as if they are her hair flying up, but then the truth of what they are kind of sneaks up on you… And of course her tail… That one perfect tail that I do so much love to see in all of Bruce’s devilish works…

The pose of the two models in the work is very erotic and powerful in so many ways… There is a lot of body language in the Succubus that makes the fact she is in control quite noticeable, and her pet, and I think that she is a pet, so very submissive to her…

One of the things that I have been focused on as been the writings in the image… I can’t quite make out what the words are, perhaps that’s on purpose, but I am curious… Seeing that there is a book positioned on the floor in front of the Succubus and her pet, makes me think that this was a summoning, but I am not sure that it went wrong this time unlike the image I shared last week…

The scene makes me think that the Succubus was summoned by the woman in white, and she succumbed to the Succubus soon after… Now she is being corrupted into a plaything or toy of the Succubus… I see that because of the white skin she has and the look of submission upon her face… Really a hot, sexy, erotic work that Bruce has created here…

After that wonderful work I am sure that you’ll want to visit Bruce’s website and see more of the erotic fantasies that his vision brings to life…

I hope that you will click on this link and visit Bruce’s site at: colero.ca

And you can preorder his new book Naked Desire at: http://www.sqpinc.com/

Once again I want to thank Bruce so very much for his kindness in allowing me to share just a small fraction of the beauty and ecstasy that he has created in the art he has brought to life…

*love and huggles*


Jul 22 2010

Succubi Image of the Week 135

This week’s Succubi is the third of four images that all are by the artist Bruce Colero and, together, are my celebration of his work and a tease towards the release of his new book this summer called Naked Desire

Today’s Succubi is one of Bruce’s earliest images, and is actually the very first one that I discovered a long time ago when looking for images of Succubi…

And so, this is And Lead Us Into Temptation by Bruce Colero…

And lead us into Temptation by Bruce Colero

There is quite a lot I love about this image, one thing that I am unsure about, but I’ll get into that a bit later…

She’s really beautiful, her form and pose hints towards some of Bruce’s current works, especially in the way her pose and the fires burning around her act to give her a look that seems to say “If you want to see more it will cost you…”

Love her tail… Really more than I can explain… Well I can actually, just look at my manips and the header images in the Tale here and you can see it popping up from time to time… I think it’s the perfect shape for a Succubus…

The one thing that I have a problem with, and this is my particular bias coming into play, is her hair… You see, to me, a Succubi’s hair is dark in shades and an Angel’s hair is the lighter ones… That’s mostly because my own hair is raven and my Angel’s hair is blonde in colour…

I’m not saying that a darker shade would have been all that much better, but maybe it would have framed her face a bit better… It would have made the fires around her a bit more defined in certain places however…

Bruce’s art does show something that I had never really thought about before and that is the relationship of a Succubus to fire. She should, I would think, be able to control fire and flames to create the illusion of it clothing her form which, in the end, serves to add to her desirability to those that call for her, or summon her…

Bruce Colero’s work can be found at his website: http://www.colero.ca, or you can click the link to his site in my links on the right sidebar of the Tale…

His DevinatART site is at: http://colero.deviantart.com/

I want to thank Bruce once again for his kindness in allowing me to share his work with you all today…

Tomorrow I will be revealing a evilly delicious work from Bruce’s new book that I think is possibly at the pinnacle of his images of Succubi…

See you tomorrow!


Jul 21 2010

Another Bimbo Succubus Costume…

One of the things that bothers a lot about Devil Girl, or in my case, Succubus costumes is the amount of them that seem to bring out the bimbo in people that wear them and leave the seduction behind somewhere…

This is one of those…

This costume is called Daring Devil… Honestly I can’t see the daring in it over the level of bimbo, but that’s what it’s called…

The costume in made of nylon and spandex materials, and it comes with a skirt, panties, the two colour top, a collar, a pair of armlets in black with red fringe and the set of horns the model is wearing in the picture… The red stockings don’t come with it, nor the shoes which aren’t shown anyway…

The entire outfit sells for $35 US on various sites on the web…

I just don’t like this. It’s not really screaming Succubus as much as yelling Bimbo really… I am sure that some women can make this work, but for me? It’s just not what I am looking for…

It’s getting a half pitchfork out of five… There just isn’t anything that I like in it nor something that I can work with to make it better save for the horns perhaps, those aren’t too bad really, but I have seen and own better ones than those…

There are better, lots better…

That I hope will be seen with next week’s costume…


Jul 20 2010

Temptations 70

The Queen of the Succubi does have fears… Some of them are very real to her and she would do anything to make them go away… If she can…


Temptations 70

By TeraS and Legion & Alei

She had felt like she had grabbed hold of an emotional lightning bolt.  It shook her, filled her, consumed her.  She is not sure what is happening, her mind filled with images, thoughts, emotions… so different from what she had known.  It was as if someone was painting the world in totally new colors that she had never seen before.

She felt the stirrings of such love for the children, such passion… they were everything… of course they were.  What had she been thinking before?  She couldn’t remember… all she remembered was this feeling for her children… for her family.

Dimly she looked into Andrea’s eyes.  She was so beautiful… she could see how this woman had captured the Queen’s heart.  For one strong moment she wanted to pin Andrea down… have her way with her… the Queen didn’t matter… she was just so…

But the children… if she did that she could cause them harm… and she could never do that, but oh, how she longed to simply touch Andrea for a moment.

Maria rose in an almost blissful daze and said simply, “I have to go back to them.”

He had watched all this with great interest.  That the Queen’s consort could affect a Succubi so powerfully was indeed rare.  Maria looked like she had just finished with a night of very intense lovemaking and was too blissed out to even know what year she was in.

Absently he wondered if this woman could affect him, blocks or not.  It would be interesting to see her try.  But one thing at a time.

He shook his head in amusement, “Well done Andrea, it would seem that you have done a fine job on Maria.  She will now break every bone in her body for her children… and when her children are gone  she will break every bone in her body for you.”

He wondered if either the QUeen or her consort saw what he did.  They had gone on about having free will, the Queen had given Maria a choice, yet.. when she chose in a way they didn’t like they basically changed her so she would.  They had even had the nerve to go on about how no one could “fix” such a problem, but there was Andrea ‘fixing’ it with no trouble at all.

I guess it is all right just as long as THEY are the ones fixing and manipulating.  How interesting.

“Since I am the one who summoned Maria… I feel as if I am the one who should return her… If, of course, it is permitable to you my Queen.  But I don’t think in this state she should be away from the family too long.”

Tera didn’t say anything because she knew what Andrea had done and why… Legion’s words burned hot in her ears about Maria’s new attitude…

And still Tera said nothing…

She turned away from them all and just let whatever was going to be… Be. Opening the book to Maria’s page again, Tera looked upon her picture and the name below it… Turning the page over, she read the text of Maria’s life as it was and was becoming with something of a wistful smile… No one else in the room would be able to read the words written there in the language that the book only shared with the Queen…

She sighed a bit as a new line of text shimmered into existence on the page…

Thahnk is brath cala. Succubi Parmtal nee tass Lit. Un lfe nee brum teck qal aber na. Cee um albat teek wa a pass.

Tera closed the book and called to Maria, “Goodbye Maria… May you find what I couldn’t give…”

Then Tera walked out of the room and down a passageway leaving the others behind her for the moment…

Very good.  More and more this grows.

Takking the Queen’s comment as permission, Legion quietly waved his hand and Maria dissolved into mist back to where she had been plucked from.

Mind reading was not one of his abilities but he did wish it were.  The Queen had been mostly quiet, her wondered of her thoughts.  He had not come here to be seen as a monster, quite the opposite.  But the Queen’s consort had been… unanticipated and she had complicated things.  Now he was unsure if the Queen would simply oust him from her realm or if she would be willing to talk.

Despite everything he had told them was true, despite the fact he had followed their every request, and despite the fact he had broken a pac with someone (which would make future plans far more difficult for the intern) he was sure the Queen still viewed him sharply into the negative.

Gazing at both the Queen and her consort he said simply, “I apologize for causing such turmoil my Queen.  Though in the end my goal was simply to give Maria what she wished for.”

I smile a Legion for a moment.  “I believe you Legion.  But you do gain something in return for your gifts and perhaps you have never heard of the human expression, ‘buyer beware’.  In the end, you seem to be a salesman, offering something that is too good to be true.  Your hearts desires at no real costs to the buyer.  That and the fact that you won’t simply come out and say what it is you wish to buy and what you want to offer in return.”

“For me,” I continue, “It’s a matter of walking into this room and finding you attempting to tempt my fiancee … and as you might have noticed, I’m very protective of her.  She’s my life.  There’s a number of powers that might want to wish her harm … I’ve seen some of them and I’ll be honest with you, they frighten me.  Not for me … but for her.  I … would take it badly if … someone came here and found a way to take her away from me.  What I showed Maria is nothing less than I what I have for Terra.  I did not change her, I just gave her a way to understand what she needed to know.”

“You meant Maria no harm … nor do I think you mean harm to Tera … but I’ve learned … things are not always as they seem.  When you have something so very precious … you don’t risk it … you protect it.”

I concentrate and feel the part of Tera that is within me.  Love are you alright?  Did I do something wrong?


Never something wrong… But sometimes the book tells things that none realize are important until it is far too late…

The question is…

Is it?