Oct 28 2011

A Review of Demon In Vegas by Kit Lang

It’s a rare story that I find about Succubi where I read the story and think… Darn she seems ffamiliar… Now by that I mean that it seems, in a lot of ways, that the Succubus of the story is, at least partly, acting or seems to have some of my Succubi-self’s personality. When I discover a work like that, I can’t help but adore it. But in this case, that comes not with the character of Charity, but the story, the world they are in, and most of all, the questions about Charity that we are left with at the end of the story…

Demon In Vegas by Kit Lang
Demon In Vegas by Kit Lang

The story is about:

Charity is the sexiest exotic dancer in Las Vegas. She’s also a supernatural being who devours souls. After centuries in the shadows, she’s recruited to work for the forces of good by a handsome secret service agent and his vampire companion. An artefact of rare power is about to go up for auction, and all the cults in Vegas want a piece of it.

As Charity gets to know her new partners, there’s paranormal romance, BDSM, dom-sub play, fetish gear and pool parties in the sky, as well as monsters, flaming hell maws and sword and sorcery action.

Charity is the hottest, dirtiest action babe ever to cast a spell or drop her thong in the name of law and order. Come and enjoy her first adventure into deadly sin.

Demon In Vegas by Kit Lang - Alternative Cover

Demon In Vegas by Kit Lang - Alternative Cover

I like strong characters. Charity is definitely that by far. Oh she seems not to be too interesting when we first meet her, but there is a moment that is more telling, at least to me, than just about any other story with a Succubus in it that I have read  in sometime. It’s right at the beginning of the story and it’s in the previews so I am not spoiling the story much, but she claims the soul of an old woman that has been with her for a very long time, and when it is over, the pain she shows in doing so was heart breaking.

It wasn’t just what happened, but in the description of it, you got the sense that Charity was something more than she seemed to be. As the story progresses, that becomes more and more clear. She begins to find herself again, her true self that she has kept under wraps for ages now. We never learn exactly who is she, there are a hint or two in the story and I have my thoughts about who she is that I will not share here. But if I am right, I think that it is possibly the most interesting transformation that I have read…

One more thing about Charity, I thought that the explanation of what happens to the souls she has claimed is a fascinating idea. I really wish that I had thought of it, it makes sense and it allows for so much of who Charity is to come to the fore. I found myself crying a bit when we see the woman that Charity claimed at the beginning of the story appear… That was just so well done and I give the author lots of credit for giving that to us… Yes, I know that I am being vague, but I don’t want to spoil what is, really, a terrific plot device and resolution to that problem that Succubi have.

The story is quite surprising really in how it takes what we would expect of our world and mixes in quite a lot of supernatural beings and powers. Oh there are a couple of moments where the action is so far over the top it becomes a little too much, the BDSM party is one, though Charity “at work” during it was riveting, the attack that happens at the same time was confusing for me. I also had a small problem when the big reveal occurred just before the climax of the story. I understood why the author went the route they did, but looking over the book afterwards the hint that they claimed was the clue that Charity needed was much too vague and it was overwhelmed by a lot of other things that happened in the middle of the book.

Regardless of that little nit, the writing is solid, I didn’t stop reading this until the end, and then I took a few more reads through it to catch a lot of the subtle things that the author added to the story. She writes really well and I enjoyed every moment of Charity and her, if not friends, then partners, that we saw.

I really hope that another book is coming soon, there are a lot of questions I want answered about Charity and her world. I’ll definitely be purchasing the next story and every other one that comes from this author… Highly recommended for lovers of Succubi…

I’m giving this work five pitchforks out of five.

So very, very good, just wish that I knew if there was more to come…



Oct 27 2011

Succubi Image of the Week 200

And so we arrive at a milestone this week on the Tale… This will be the 200th Succubi Image of the Week and I decided to share something that was drawn for me with you all… Yes it might be a little bit self-serving, but it is one of my favourite works and as such I think it is a good choice for this milestone…

Succubus Picnic by ewgraphics

Succubus Picnic by ewgraphics

This work is called Succubus Picnic, and is by ewgraphics, better known to me as Eryck Webb. This was part of a series of works that I commissioned from him through his DeviantArt page which you can find here, back in 2009.

I have always loved this work, and he did two others for me as well as part of the commission, you can find them here and here if you would like to see them. But this one is my personal favourite for a few reasons…

First is that it is sexy, but the sexy doesn’t overpower the work. The outfit, especially the thigh-high latex-like boots is perfect for a Succubi, and the shine on them makes them ever so much so that… The pose is seductive but allows for her form to be shown off to its best I think. The hair is lovely, messy and so well textured in contrast to her skin tones and clothing that it balances them quite well…

Her tail, or rather, my tail, is sensuous and lovely, the red of it is shaded just right to give it a wonderful  shape and form. Her look of unconcerned waiting I think is a nice reflection of my Succubi-self’s attitude and it ties the entire work together perfectly…

I do want to thank Eryck again for his kindness in taking this commission from me once again and I hope that readers of the Tale will visit his site and see more of the art that he creates!

*huggles and love*



Oct 26 2011

Slightly sexy as a Succubus costume goes…

If all else fails, sometimes you have to, or are pointed in the direction of, finding a Succubus costume for Halloween that you pick because you have to walk a tightrope. You either go a little too sexy, and have to deal with the somewhat tipsy people at the office party…

Yes, I have, thanks for asking…

Or you go with something that you cringe inside knowing that you would rather take a lighter to the costume than wear it…

So, since this year Halloween is on a weekday, and we’re not going to have that much of a party this year, I’ve decided one this costume for this year…

Sexy Devil DreamGirlDon’t worry there are a lot of changes that I made to it…

This is called the Sexy Devil DreamGirl costume and comes with the horns, tail, boa abd dress but not the heels.

I found it for $26, which was reasonable enough.

So, what did I change in it?

The boa was tossed, the tail went too. The horns were too tacky and so they were in the trash moments after getting this home…


The dress I thought looked nice, and so that stayed, otherwise there wouldn’t be anything of it left to use of course…

I used one of my better horn sets and added a tail that I had from about three Halloweens ago that looked a lot better than the short thing they provided with this one.

I decided on black heels instead of red, that matched the dress better I thought and otherwise I had my custom-made pitchfork as my accessory for this…

The six-foot silver one with a red now tied onto it below the spines of the pitchfork…

The one advantage to this costume I find is that you have just a bit of sexy to capture attention, but not so much that you would get other more… crass things happening at the party…

But we will see if I am right soon won’t we?

I’m giving this costume overall two pitchforks out of five.

But as a “out in public” costume, once the more tacky items are removed, I think it is slightly better than that…



Oct 25 2011

Desires 2

If a trap awaits… Is it a trap? Or is it something more? That’s an interesting question when you are dealing with a Succubi…


Desires – Beach Oasis

By MacroLass and Tera S

Part Two


Tera lifted herself onto her elbows as Flexi approached. She casually raised a hand to her sunglasses and moved them down just enough that her green eyes peered over the top of them. She took a long look at Flexi and with a smile replied, “Hello Flexi…. Welcome to my beach… I am Tera…”

Tera’s tail slowly rose into the air behind her as she remained laying on her towel. It shimmered and glinted in the sunlight as it rose into the air. It twisted and moved sinuously in that air for a moment and then the tip almost seemed to be looking at her…

She smiled and then snapped her fingers. A moment later and then the portal vanished into nothingness…


**Wow, it’s hot out here,** the plastic woman thought as the sun beat down on her. **Definitely…hot…**, she added as an aroused afternote as her eyes were drawn to the wellformed ass and its enticing tail.

She blinked and forced her thoughts back to more mundane matters. Ummm, yes…Tera. Hi,” she coughed, waving as she tried to avert her eyes from the sexy succubus…and failed utterly. “Your beach. Nice…beach…”

The disappearance of the portal was a bit more effective in taking her mind off matters erotic. “Excuse me,” she asked, again trying her best to be polite, “but I’ll need that green circle thingie to get back to where I came from. I think.”


Tera smiled and casually said, “Oh…. Don’t worry… I’m sure that we can cum to have it reappear eventually….”

She turned onto her side and looked at Flexi. A sultry smile tugged at her lips for a moment, and then she slowly ran her tongue over her rose coloured lips making them shiny and wet. She said in a soft sultry voice to Flexi, “Aren’t you just soooooo hot in that outfit?


The blonde blinked. Did she really say…nah, she must have misheard it. “Weeelll, okay,” she replied dubiously.

She unconsciously licked her own lips after Tera moistened hers, obviously aroused as her eyes ran over that perfect female form. “Aaa…actually,” she stammered in reply. “The outfit’s part of my body…a piece of me. But I am…feeling…kinda…warm…” She slowly sank to her knees in front of the sunbather.



Oh where ever will the story turn now?

That’s next time…



Oct 24 2011

Storm Clouds 143 – An ongoing Succubi Story

This is the continuing story of the Succubi called Storm Clouds…

If you want to read previous chapters, please click the link in the Tale header at the top of the page marked Storm Clouds or click here...

Took a try at continuing the story, Chapter 22 beings though I think that I need to work more on 21… Been a while since I’ve written and so let’s see if I still can manage it…


Storm Clouds 143

Chapter 21

By TeraS


The thing about the Dark was that it was too confident. It thought that it had all of the answers and that no one could oppose it.

That was almost true.

She could, and did . . . regularly.

It had become almost an obsession for her now. There were so few who would challenge the Dark when it appeared, and so it fell to her to do so. It wasn’t a chore or an imposition; it had to be done, and she had seen enough of the Dark and what it was capable of to know that the best thing to do was what she did: drive it mad with anger and make it stop thinking.

Losing the one portal did that. Then letting it stew in its anger had made it get involved intimately with mortals and their world. She wondered if, this time, it would actually learn something from the experience or not.

Making the portal vanish was child’s play for a being like her. If the Dark ever figured out just how powerful she was, it might actually pause to think twice about the plans it had against Tera and her kind.


The thought did make her smile as the portal showing the severed tail reappeared among all of the Dark’s other ones. She stood there for a time, tapping a single pink fingernail against the surface and trying to decide what would be the most unpleasant thing she might do.

She could destroy this portal—the thought had been there before—but she had her own plans, and, for those, this one portal needed to remain, at least for the moment, in spite of what it showed.

The tapping stopped as she placed that hand against the surface and whispered to the awful image that it showed, “It will not be long. Promise.”

And, unlike some beings, she kept her promises.

She turned away, coming to the decision that, for once, just this once, she was going to make the Dark know what it was to lose something valuable.

What followed was the sound of fingernails raking across portal after portal, each of which turned white against the darkness, throwing light into a place which despised it. She didn’t ruin every single one of them, but, when she was done, she had left the Dark but three portals.

She thought that she just might be able to hear the scream of anger from it from three universes away when it returned to see what she had done here, and that thought made her smile slightly.

She glanced once more at the portals that remained, satisfied that this would be a problem for it, that it would have to spend effort and time repairing the damage if it could, and that, thankfully, might give the others needed time to figure out what was happening and where.

As much as she wanted to, she couldn’t actually get involved in the battle or make choices for those involved. It was, after all, necessary that all beings make their own choices, no matter how wrong or ill-advised they might well be.

Still, she had one thing that the Dark didn’t have: trust. Trust in others, trust that they would make good choices, but, most of all, trust in that one person that saved her life so long ago and, in doing so, changed her own universe for the better.

She would always owe that person for that gift.

She passed into the ether, on her way to where she needed to be. If the Dark could get involved with mortals, she could as well … to a point. But first she needed to talk to someone who needed to understand that some paths were not worth following.

Following the path of one who owed the succubi—and Tera, in particular—her life … that was the most foolish thing that it had ever done.

And it would soon learn.

As for the Dark, possessing one of its pawns was distasteful. But there was little choice. That damnable creature had cost him his watch over the tail. The one thing that would, if its plans went to completion, cause the barriers to fall before it and thus have what it wanted most.

But having to deal with a corporal form? That was something that it did not enjoy in the slightest. Emotions, thoughts, images from this pawn were getting caught between its own thoughts and, as well, it knew that its own thoughts would be mixing the other way.

But the important thoughts, the ones that it needed for itself, those it kept under lock and key, or so the Dark would believe. The problem was, as it always was, that nothing is ever completely closed off when beings merge, even if only for a short time.

Fingerprints leave smudges, after all …

It took the Dark some time to return to where the tail was kept. The wards around the place made it impossible for someone to appear there without seeing the place first and entering at one specific spot. From the outside there were traps and obstacles that it knew would stop any magic user from getting close.

But this pawn was tuned to the place and the wards would fall before it. Even so,   the time … the time was taking far too long for the Dark’s liking.

And so time passed, the Dark fumed, and the universe turned …


Storm Clouds

Chapter 22

By TeraS

“I think I am?”

Tom looked behind him expecting to see Camilla there, and she was… sort of.

It was Camilla, but her tail and horns were grey instead of black and her hair had turned color from blonde to purple. Tom couldn’t stop the words that came out, “I liked the blonde and black better Camilla.”

She smirked.

And Tom paused. He was pretty sure that Camilla didn’t smirk.

“It’s a long story Tom and right now we haven’t got the time.”

And that was wrong as well. Camilla never called him Tom. Mary Ann tried to get away again and Tom was forced into flipping her over, straddling her, and then locking her wrists together with handcuffs before sitting on her legs. Having some control of the situation, he looked at Camilla and said, “We’ve got the time. You want to let me in on why the style change? Got tired of your hair color or something?”

She ran her left hand through her hair, pulling on it slightly, “Okay, short version: I’m Camilla’s bad side, I’m a bitch, I’m nothing like her, and you don’t want to screw with me. That good enough for you?”

“I’m never going to understand this am I?”

She smirked again, “Oh I dunno… You’d make an interesting Incubi… I can put in a good word for you if you’re up for it?”

Tom shook his head, “Thanks but I have enough issues with my life as it is. The universe isn’t what I knew it was, there are people, like you, that are legends and I am supposed to deal with that. Oh yes, and I am acting under the command of a Queen of a race of beings that exist on sex and pleasure and I have no idea why I should be, but I’m doing it anyway.”

She nodded, “Tera does have her ways doesn’t she? At least she isn’t using that pitchfork of hers on you. Mind you, some like that sort of thing…”

“So what do I call you? Not Camilla or Punkie Brewster or what?”

She leaned down so that they looked into each other’s eyes, “You really want to know who I am?”

Tom didn’t finch, “I trust Camilla. She’s proven herself. I don’t trust you.”

She nodded, “Good. Backbone and will. I can see why Tera wants your help. You can call me Nina.”

“All right. Nina it is. Tell me something, seriously, does every one of you have an ‘a’ at the end of your name?”

She laughed, “No… Just some of us do. Congratulations Tom, you just endeared yourself to me. Camilla will be pleased to know that, make sure you tell her when you see her again.”

The smirk vanished and she looked past Tom to Mary Ann on the floor beneath him, “You mind getting off her? She and I have… a past.”

“Good or bad?”

“I won’t kill her. At least not just yet.”

“If I don’t?”

“Then I’ll have to move you Tom. You don’t want me to I promise you.”

Tom got up and moved to the side. Nina reached down and pulled Mary Ann to her knees by the hand cuffs before grasping her chin. “Hello bitch. It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. How long has it been?

The fear in Mary Ann only allowed a quiet whisper of an answer to come, “Babylon.”

“That’s right. As I remember it, you came into my temple and tried to turn my followers didn’t you? You corrupted them from the top down and in the end you were responsible for how many deaths?”

“I don’t know.”

“I do. I remember them very well. You watched as they fought, hundreds of them falling to your promises of riches that were hidden from them. And when it was over, what did they find inside the walls?”



Mary Ann closed her eyes, “Because everything they gave you, you returned to them… and more. You… you cared about cattle and…”

Tom didn’t see Nina’s hand as it struck Mary Ann sending her sprawling across the floor.

“They are not cattle you worthless bitch. They are more than you will ever be and ever can be. You can’t understand that can you?”

There was no answer and Nina pulled her once again to her knees by the handcuffs, “Here’s the deal. You tell us what’s going on and who’s in charge and i won’t kill you today. You lie to me, and I’ll start taking you apart one piece at a time…”

She extended her left hand and to Tom’s shock a silver sword appeared in her hand, flames dancing alone the blade. Tom thought he could heard the sword… growling?

She placed the edge against Mary Ann’s neck, “You know what this is. You know exactly what will happen if I strike you with it. Camilla wouldn’t, she follows the new ways, but I don’t. So make up your mind, right now. and tell me why you are here, and what you have done to Ginger.”

Tom coughed, “Nina… You said you wouldn’t kill her.”

She didn’t look at Tom, “Oh this won’t kill her. It will however take away what makes her special. What she is, she won’t be anymore.”

A cruel smile appeared, “And since she is so enamored with being immortal…”

Mary Ann closed her eyes, “You are a fool. I serve powers greater than you. You’ll never leave this room alive if you harm me.”

“Oh I’ve already harmed you. Now I’ll cripple you…”

And she pulled the blade back and then swung it towards Mary Ann’s neck…

Oct 23 2011

Is this a Succubus themed shirt or not?

Some of the things I find are Succubus in nature. They have horns or tails or something else about them that just says to me yes, that is a Succubus… And sometimes it’s not quite so clean cut a choice to make…

Like this image on a T-shirt I found recently…

This art is by an artist named Summer Rae, and is the image that you find on a T-shirt that you can find for sale on Cafe Press here. Pardon the imprint on the image, but there is little I can really do about that.

She has the look of a Succubus, the clothing, pose and so on, but she is missing horns and a tail, so that is a bit of a shame. I’m not exactly sure what is behind her, but from the position of it, the likely candidate is a pair of skeleton-like wings.

I like her a lot, I would like her more if she did have horns and a tail too…

I did a little research and found a page on MySpace that belongs to this artist, and she appears to update it regularly, so for those of you that are on MySpace you might want to have a peek there… She also has an artist’s page at Cafe Press but that hasn’t been updated in over a year…

I’m hoping to find more of her works soon, and I am hoping that there are more Succubi as well!


Oct 22 2011

Yet another Morrigan Aensland YouTube…

Time for yet another YouTube of everyone’s favorite anime Succubus Morrigan Aensland!

And if you can’t see it here:


Some really nice images of Morrigan in this one, a few repeats from other videos but that’s okay… There is one image of her in the beginning of the video that has her being very red in colour which I don’t quite understand as that’s not really her colour traditionally…

Still, some really nice images of her in this one…