May 06 2012

A Review of Incubus Lust by Charlotte Davila

Time for another story that is mainly about Incubi because… well because there really aren’t a lot of them that appear and so I think that it’s important to give them some spotlight time too. One thing that I would like to see someday is an Incubus in one of these stories that doesn’t show themselves as being totally evil or totally not cut out for being one. This work comes close to that hope at least…

Incubus Lust by Charlotte Davila

Incubus Lust by Charlotte Davila

The book blurb says the story is about:

Marcus, an accomplished demonic incubus is sent by Lilith, the Mother of All Succubi, to seduce Elizabeth Benoit, a small town diner owner whose fiancé has just left her. What he doesn’t count on is the feelings that Elizabeth stirs within him.

Marcus, the Incubus of the book, is to put it mildly unhappy with his life, his role, and most of all the beings above him that make his life miserable.

Lilith appears and puts him on a case to turn a woman named Elizabeth into a Succubus and the story proceeds from there. Along the way, Marcus discovers that he needs Elizabeth and in the end a surprise awaits them all.

Couple of things I wasn’t happy about in the story. The main one was Lilith. While she didn’t have a major role in the story itself, she struck me as being too aloof a character from the moment she appeared. I think that it was the “I need you, but I don’t really care all that much” attitude that got to me. I did find it interesting that it appears that incubi and I have to assume succubi use things like blackberries and airplanes and cars to get around.

It also was interesting that in this story we never see any of them with horns or tails but Lilith does comment that Marcus has decided on being in his human form. So the question then becomes, do they, or not, have horns and tails?

The other thing that I found odd was the means to which humans were taken by incubi or succubi and then “turned.” I think that having such things happen in such a “here, sign this” way is a little bit stereotypical for my liking.

Setting aside the things that bothered me, oh save one more, too short a story, needed to be longer and perhaps slow down the actions of the characters and don’t railed them throughout the story into decisions and actions. I liked the overall writing, there wasn’t anything that drew me out of the story too much.

I think that there could be other stories to tell in this universe, but honestly I think that the author needs to allow the characters to develop more than is allowed in how short this story is. I know this is a common complaint I have with a lot of things that I read, but honestly would to be too much to ask for a story like this one to go into some more depth in the characters or the revelation that happens at the end of the story?

Just was very quick for me and I didn’t real want it to end so soon.

I’m giving this work three pitchforks out of five.

Longer please, make Lilith more likeable, and slow down the story just a little bit…



May 05 2012

A neat 3D Succubus watching the moon…

I was looking at Vimeo again today and found a neat little video of a 3D Succubus that someone created… and she has a tail…

And if the embedding does not work:

And one screenshot as well…

Succubus Turn by Ray

I think she’s really very cute… A neat little tail, cute wings, and a lovely expression that I think suits her really well. She’s not over the top sexy either which I appreciate a lot too…

The creator didn’t really explain why they made this, I’d be interested to know what made them decide to bring her to life and what the story is, if there is one, behind her…



May 04 2012

A Review of A Succubus for Christmas and Other Tales of Devilish Delights by M. E. Hydra

One of the authors that I have followed for some time is named M.E. Hydra, or as I have known them from the Literotica days, Many Eyed Hydra. I’ve always been taken by their writing style and their ability to tell a good hot story… especially when Succubi are involved. They have several books which contain most of their stories available for some time now. Three of them are anthologies of short stories and the fourth is a full length work. Over the next little while I will be reviewing each of them on the tale, starting this week with A Succubus for Christmas and Other Tales of Devilish Delights.

A Succubus for Christmas and Other Tales of Devilish Delights by M. E. Hydra

A Succubus for Christmas and Other Tales of Devilish Delights by M. E. Hydra

This collection of stories is about:

Beautiful, seductive, enthralling, sensual, irresistible…deadly. The succubus is an enduring icon of myth, a demon that seduces and sleeps with her prey before taking their life and soul. In this collection M. E. Hydra brings you thirteen erotically charged tales of sexy succubi and other exotic creatures. In A Succubus for Christmas a man discovers his surprise sexy gift also possesses a dark side… The Masterton Covenant asks how much would you risk for one night of perfect pleasure… Four men are taken to a very special place in Flesh Pitchers of Prague… A tough demon slayer discovers why ‘Men can’t fight them’ in Slayer vs. Succubus… A man gets his Happy Ending in a sensual massage that touches him right to his soul… A former soldier tries to resist the wiles of an exotic alien queen in The Coils of Aenictia. Prepared to be enthralled, aroused and terrified by these and other tales of dark, seductive beauties. They’ll give you pleasures beyond your wildest dreams, and terrors beyond your darkest nightmares…

This work is a series of short stories by the author M.E. Hydra, and as such I will review them all in short form before I review the work in its entirety:


A Succubus for Christmas – Steven receives a gift from two friends of his through which a Succubus is summoned to him. He discovers the pleasures of a Succubus in bed… in the shower… on the couch and so on. But the problem is what happens when the price has to be paid for what you receive? Some very hot scenes, but the climax of the story and the reveal therein was an interesting twist on things. Somewhat violent towards the end of the story, but not excessively so compared to the heat of the story.


The Masterton Covenant – An old man tells of the story of when he summoned a Succubus and entered into a covenant with her, living to tell the tale. In truth a very interesting play on the “contractual” agreements that appear in many stories between humans and Succubi or other devilish beings. I did find that what the Succubus did to the teller of the story was very, very evil and made complete sense considering what she is, a Succubus, and what the result of having sex with one normally results in. Again, lovely hot scenes that quickly spiralled into something much darker. I thought the “voice” of the teller both in the here and now, and the past, were very well separated. I also thought that the Succubus was quite an interesting character in her own right and would like to know more about her.


Bubble Bath – A man enters a shop and finds himself purchasing a container of bubble bath with some very unique effects. Really a very hot story for the start to the inevitable finish. A really unique means of a Succubus being summoned and one that will stay with me for a while I think. Lots of questions left at the end, but overall a nice, tightly written short Succubus story.


Flesh Pitchers of Prague – A stag party visits Prague and gets thrown out of a club for being idiots. Seeking a quick lay, they take the advice of a cab driver and go off the beaten track to a place that promises something of a once in a lifetime experience. Probably the most horrific of all of the stores. Not really a Succubus story, and I won’t spoil it mind you, but, the squick factor is fairly high in this one. Personally my least favourite of all of the works in this collection.


Hookah’ed – A hitman is sent into the den of a Don in order to steal some information. When he discovers that the Don has no security and seems to be surrounded by hot women, the job looks to be an easy one. It’s an interesting crime story of what it might be like if Succubi were in the mob. I didn’t think much of the way the Succubi made the hitman breathe in their aroma, but that is a minor nit really. Overall a hot story and the last few lines did make me laugh.


Pool of the Undine – A drunken camper gets caught in the rain and takes shelter in a cave with a pool in it. And something living in the pool draws something out of him eventually as well. Not a Succubus story, not really. I have to say that I don’t like water sports and the moments of that in the story I skimmed over. I didn’t like the male character much, well really drunker Englishmen with no manner really do nothing for me in the first place, so, I just didn’t find myself really getting into this story all that much.


Slayer vs. Succubus – The greatest of all of the Church’s demon slayers finds out that a Succubus is inhabiting a monastery. Being the greatest of them all, he confronts the Succubus. Problem is that he’s a man, she’s a Succubus, and that means some real problems. I think this is the second of my favourite works in this collection. Lots of Succubus powers, seduction and erotica in the story which I enjoyed quite a lot. I liked that the Succubus wasn’t so much evil as she was seduction incarnate, which I think Succubi should be. Lots of lovely descriptive moments and an excellent read overall.


Arachne’s Web – A man finds a website owned by a model named Arachne and, over time, falls into her web. Not really a Succubus story though at the beginning it had all of the appearance of one. A good deal of horror in this story, the ending is very much so. Didn’t really enjoy it personally, though the writing was excellent, the characters strong, and the effects of Arachne on the main character were really well told.


Wrapdance – Some friends visiting Moscow leave a club and search for a better one, which they find, that has erotic women dancing with a secret. Some good heat in this story, the succubi are interesting and sensual, if the reveal is a bit on the horror side and less on the erotic side.


The Coils of Aenictia – A town is held within another dimension, under attack by horrific creatures bent on destruction. A human warrior faces them and his past. Not a Succubus story, more of a “fall into another dimension and what happens next” sort of story. For the most part it didn’t interest me, there was a lot of horror in the story overall. Again very good writing and for those that like horror, it’s well done. I did find that the being the human warrior faced was much more than she seemed to be in the beginning, but it was the struggle to resist her that I think is the core of this story and was telling about both characters.


Squeezed – A superhero faces a new supervillainess in his small town. The problem is that she’s not like any supervillain he’s faced before. I have to say that superhero stories aren’t really my thing to be honest. The villianess isn’t a Succubus, anything else would be a spoiler so I won’t reveal that. I will say that I couldn’t help but giggle at the hero and the supervillainess’ names… Just too funny and well played I thought for the setting. A nicely done story that I did enjoy.


Happy Ending – A man looks for a gift for his wife, and instead finds a small shop with a woman that promises a massage beyond belief. A very hot story with a Succubus tangentially connected to the story. Very hot, really did like it even though the Succubus was only fleeting in the story.


Incall with a Succubus – A politician is told to visit a “professional relaxation therapist” by a friend. He does so and discovers that Succubi are very real… And some of them, one in particular, has a soul of her own. This was, by far, the one story in the collection that was my favourite story. Nicole holds almost all of the traits that I personally see in a Succubi, which is my concept of a, for lack of a better explanation, a Succubus with a conscience and a soul. She’s smart, she’s seductive, she knows her limits and that of those she comes in contact with as well. She gives of pleasures to receive them and in the end, proves that not all things that have horns and a tail are evil. The perfect ending to the collection and I truly enjoyed this story so very very much…


Overall the author writes stories that are exceptionally descriptive, the Succubi when that are part of the story have both their sexual and more demonic sides, but occasionally, like with Nicole in the last work, the horror is muted for the personality of the Succubus.


There is a lot of focus on the horror aspect of this author’s writings, but there is nothing wrong with that really. Each author has their particular focus on stories to tell and if they can do so well, then they should focus on that.


But here’s the thing that I think need be said. This was the first collection of Hydra’s early works and his writing style, themes, and stories do change as you move forwards through his works. Not every story is a personal hit for me, but, if you look, there is a story for everyone…


I’ll give this work four and a half out of five pitchforks.


Good stories, great characters, well written and it shows… I just wish that more Succubi were more like Nicole than what they normally are…

There will be a review of the next work in this author’s series next Friday…

May 03 2012

Succubi Image of the Week 227

Last week on the Tale, I shared a piece of Succubus art from Bruce Colero. You can find it here on the Tale if you would like to see it again, or for the first time… Either way it’s wonderful and you really should have a peek if you haven’t before…

You can see more of Bruce’s works on the Tale that I have shared here and here, and over here, and here too, and as well here, and over there and right here, and here and lastly here too… Yes, Bruce has created a lot of seductive Succubus art and for that I am very grateful…

And, as promised, this week’s Succubi is another one of Bruce’s works…

Succubus Summoned by Bruce Colero

Succubus Summoned by Bruce Colero

The only title I could think of for this art is Succubus Summoned for obvious reasons I think.

She’s a lovely model and I think that the entire scene works really well with her pose. Lovely work with her horns and, of course, her tail is the one that I really love to see… The flames around her are really kind of teasing as they lick around her sex and hide them, even if only slightly…

It always amazes me how Bruce merges real life and his 3D art so well, at times they are almost seamless to me, and in this case, her tail and horns blend really well with her skin, which isn’t an easy thing to do I know full well…

Sexy and powerfully erotic as all Succubi should be…

As always, you can find Bruce Colero’s website here at

One more piece of Succubus art from Bruce next week, she isn’t quite as much a Succubus as the two works I have shared so far, but she is deliciously seductive…

Special thanks as always to Bruce for his kind permission to share his work and I hope you visit his site!


May 02 2012

A new worst in Succubi costumes…

I don’t often call a Succubus or Devil Girl costume the worst ever. That’s a special award that only the worst of the worst achieve, or are doomed to…

Here’s the latest winner of this less than an award…

Fancy Devil LadyThis… mess… is called the Fancy Devil Lady costume. I think that’s a misnomer and honestly if this is someone’s idea of fancy I really don’t want to see trashy please?

The costume comes with a corset style lace up front dress with long sleeves, a collar and a pair of devil horns. Stockings not included, and they don’t help at all honestly…

It sells for $50 US.

So much wrong with this that it’s not even funny. Not in the slightest. The entire thing is ugly, and the tail, there is one, you can just make it out, is laughable. The collar is worthless and the horns are probably the worst things that I have even seen in any costume that I have seen so far and that’s saying a lot honestly.

I hate the hem of the dress to no end. The ripped look is so passé that it amazes me that any costume designer would have used it. The sheer sleeves just add to the ugliness of it as well. The laced corset also makes no sense, it doesn’t help this at all.

There is no way that I can see of making this better other than leaving the package on the shelf with a warning sign so that others do not buy this.

I would give this a zero, and I will, but honestly I would give it a minus two if I could, but the scale doesn’t go that low…

But it easily could get there.

Do not buy. Avoid at all costs.



May 01 2012

Desires 27

Sometimes the song is the point and the point is the song… But can the one listening see what the point is? The Queen of the Succubi would like to know…


Desires – Truths

By MZ and Tera S

Part Fifteen

With a look of longing in her eyes, Tera stood up and walked over to the stereo system that was close by. She turned the system on with a slim red nail and then a song that was cued up already, began to play. As the first notes of the 80s music began. Tera faced away from him, her bum swaying slowly to the beat of the music.

My love, tell me what it’s all about
You’ve got something that I can’t live without

She slipped a hand slowly along her right side until her fingertips began to play with the right strap of her dress. As the music continued, she teased the strap over her shoulder letting it fall partly down her arm. A moment later and the same thing happened to the left strap. She turned around and revealed that her hands were holding the top of the dress against her breasts. She looked at him with total devotion and love for him…

Happiness, is so hard to find
Hey baby, tell me what is on your mind

As he watched, the dress slowly slipped lower and lower on her body, until her firm breasts were displayed to him. Her nipples stood out so hard in her need for him. As he watched and the music played on, one of her hands slipped to lay across her tummy as her other hand began to play with her right nipple slowly. Her eyes never left his as she began to slowly tease the dress over her hips with her fingers. She let out a little moan as the dress’s fabric caressed itself over her bum…

Coz I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till you call me on the telephone
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till we’re all alone

And then she simply allowed the dress to shimmy down her legs until it was a puddle of black around her feet. She stood there completely naked to him, the desire and love for him pouring out of her body to him. She slowly slipped a bare foot out of the clothing that lay forgotten around her feet and then a moment later the same happened to her other foot. She paused there a moment, her hands sliding over her now naked body, shivering in her undying love for him…

You know I love you even when you don’t try
I know that our love will never die

She slowly walked closer to him, and then she started to rubs her breasts against the tuxedo that he wore. Her eyes were almost mesmerised by his as she looked into his eyes, totally devoted to making that perfect moment that he had told her of. She gave out a little moan and nibbled her lower lip softly…

Hey darling when you look into my eye
Please tell me you’ll never have to say goodbye

Her hands slipped around his back and then she parted her legs as she began to rub her bare pussy against his pant leg shivering in the pleasure of just being so close to him. The she wetted her lips with her tongue before kissing his lips softly and needfully. Always her eyes looking at him with the love she had for him…

Coz I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) this is what I’ve been waiting for
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till my love walked in the door
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) true love is so hard to find
I found yours, you found mine

Then Tera began to walk him backwards slightly until he fell into the leather chair again. She placed her hands on his chest and then trailed them along his body, just brushing her fingertips over his cock before letting them leave his knees before cupping her breasts and tossing her hair over her shoulder. Her eyes burned with her love for him and she smiled lovingly at him…

I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) tell me what is on your mind
Got to let you know…
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till you call me on the telephone
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till we’re all alone

She then turned around, her shapely bum wiggling as she did. She reached down to the floor and picked up the thigh highs and the red stiletto heels. She placed the heels in front of her, and then straightened up again, before sitting down on his lap. She nuzzled her hair against his cheek as she leaned against him gently. She raised her left leg into the air and then rolled the hose up her leg slowly sighing happily as she did. A moment of straightening the seams later and her leg was covered in the hose invitingly. She shifted against him a moment and then did the same with her right leg…

Oh oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) true love is so hard to find
I found yours, you found mine
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) tell me what is on your mind
No, no, I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait)
No, I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait)

The heels were waiting as she stood up again, her bare bum just in front of him. She slipped her left foot and then her right foot into the heels. She bent over and then slowly buckled the straps for the heels, her bum swaying slowly as she did. When they were on properly, she took a step forward and then turned in place to face him again, the need for him in her eyes as strong, but not as powerful as the love that she felt for him…

Say it one more time
Oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) this is what I’ve been waiting for
Oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till my love walked in the door

Tera moved to him and then slithered across his body to lay across the seat, her legs dangling in the air to the side. As the last words faded away Tera lay draped across his lap in the chair, dressed in the thigh highs and red heels. She looked into his eyes with love and devotion and then whispered in a husky voice, “I will love you forever…”



And to who has the trap been opened to?

We’ll see…



Apr 30 2012

A Birthday Poem from the Queen’s Heart…

Yesterday was my birthday, and I shared my gift to you all on that day. I received the gift of a poem from my heart on that day and I would like to share it today on the Tale because… Well because it’s wonderful and I want it to be remembered always…

A special day, when rockets blaze
and everyone’s quite keen
to celebrate a day of days:
the birthday of a Queen.

The fireworks were fzy’s bit;
Her Highness was beguiled.
When asked how he’d accomplished it,
her hero simply smiled.

A visitor winged her way in
–a smart, angelic blonde—
who brought temptation, not to sin,
but to refresh their bond.

Tera’s loving incu-bro’
did not spare any effort
but sent her something that would grow
(a cherry tree, you pervert!).

Tail, dressed in something extra hot,
had found a special toy
who, if she recalled where he got
to, might bring special joy.

A small gift came, quite by surprise,
unnoticed, set apart,
and only certain, soooooo green eyes
saw “Huggles from your heart.”

Kitty brought a bowl of cream
and snuggled with soft fur.
“Mistress, today can be a dream.
Come with me, lick, and purr.”

Keith’s gift, eternal, was just right,
something his soul had found.
When asked of it, he let his sight
stray shyly to the ground.

So come out for a stellar fete;
make sure you grab your pair o’
best dancing shoes.  Get ready, set . . .
. . . cheer, “Happy birthday, Tera!”

Thank you my heart for your love and kindness and putting up with my faults and messes that are my writing…

Love and Huggles for you and your Beloved always…




((Storm Clouds will return next Monday))