May 03 2012

Succubi Image of the Week 227

Last week on the Tale, I shared a piece of Succubus art from Bruce Colero. You can find it here on the Tale if you would like to see it again, or for the first time… Either way it’s wonderful and you really should have a peek if you haven’t before…

You can see more of Bruce’s works on the Tale that I have shared here and here, and over here, and here too, and as well here, and over there and right here, and here and lastly here too… Yes, Bruce has created a lot of seductive Succubus art and for that I am very grateful…

And, as promised, this week’s Succubi is another one of Bruce’s works…

Succubus Summoned by Bruce Colero

Succubus Summoned by Bruce Colero

The only title I could think of for this art is Succubus Summoned for obvious reasons I think.

She’s a lovely model and I think that the entire scene works really well with her pose. Lovely work with her horns and, of course, her tail is the one that I really love to see… The flames around her are really kind of teasing as they lick around her sex and hide them, even if only slightly…

It always amazes me how Bruce merges real life and his 3D art so well, at times they are almost seamless to me, and in this case, her tail and horns blend really well with her skin, which isn’t an easy thing to do I know full well…

Sexy and powerfully erotic as all Succubi should be…

As always, you can find Bruce Colero’s website here at

One more piece of Succubus art from Bruce next week, she isn’t quite as much a Succubus as the two works I have shared so far, but she is deliciously seductive…

Special thanks as always to Bruce for his kind permission to share his work and I hope you visit his site!


May 02 2012

A new worst in Succubi costumes…

I don’t often call a Succubus or Devil Girl costume the worst ever. That’s a special award that only the worst of the worst achieve, or are doomed to…

Here’s the latest winner of this less than an award…

Fancy Devil LadyThis… mess… is called the Fancy Devil Lady costume. I think that’s a misnomer and honestly if this is someone’s idea of fancy I really don’t want to see trashy please?

The costume comes with a corset style lace up front dress with long sleeves, a collar and a pair of devil horns. Stockings not included, and they don’t help at all honestly…

It sells for $50 US.

So much wrong with this that it’s not even funny. Not in the slightest. The entire thing is ugly, and the tail, there is one, you can just make it out, is laughable. The collar is worthless and the horns are probably the worst things that I have even seen in any costume that I have seen so far and that’s saying a lot honestly.

I hate the hem of the dress to no end. The ripped look is so passé that it amazes me that any costume designer would have used it. The sheer sleeves just add to the ugliness of it as well. The laced corset also makes no sense, it doesn’t help this at all.

There is no way that I can see of making this better other than leaving the package on the shelf with a warning sign so that others do not buy this.

I would give this a zero, and I will, but honestly I would give it a minus two if I could, but the scale doesn’t go that low…

But it easily could get there.

Do not buy. Avoid at all costs.



May 01 2012

Desires 27

Sometimes the song is the point and the point is the song… But can the one listening see what the point is? The Queen of the Succubi would like to know…


Desires – Truths

By MZ and Tera S

Part Fifteen

With a look of longing in her eyes, Tera stood up and walked over to the stereo system that was close by. She turned the system on with a slim red nail and then a song that was cued up already, began to play. As the first notes of the 80s music began. Tera faced away from him, her bum swaying slowly to the beat of the music.

My love, tell me what it’s all about
You’ve got something that I can’t live without

She slipped a hand slowly along her right side until her fingertips began to play with the right strap of her dress. As the music continued, she teased the strap over her shoulder letting it fall partly down her arm. A moment later and the same thing happened to the left strap. She turned around and revealed that her hands were holding the top of the dress against her breasts. She looked at him with total devotion and love for him…

Happiness, is so hard to find
Hey baby, tell me what is on your mind

As he watched, the dress slowly slipped lower and lower on her body, until her firm breasts were displayed to him. Her nipples stood out so hard in her need for him. As he watched and the music played on, one of her hands slipped to lay across her tummy as her other hand began to play with her right nipple slowly. Her eyes never left his as she began to slowly tease the dress over her hips with her fingers. She let out a little moan as the dress’s fabric caressed itself over her bum…

Coz I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till you call me on the telephone
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till we’re all alone

And then she simply allowed the dress to shimmy down her legs until it was a puddle of black around her feet. She stood there completely naked to him, the desire and love for him pouring out of her body to him. She slowly slipped a bare foot out of the clothing that lay forgotten around her feet and then a moment later the same happened to her other foot. She paused there a moment, her hands sliding over her now naked body, shivering in her undying love for him…

You know I love you even when you don’t try
I know that our love will never die

She slowly walked closer to him, and then she started to rubs her breasts against the tuxedo that he wore. Her eyes were almost mesmerised by his as she looked into his eyes, totally devoted to making that perfect moment that he had told her of. She gave out a little moan and nibbled her lower lip softly…

Hey darling when you look into my eye
Please tell me you’ll never have to say goodbye

Her hands slipped around his back and then she parted her legs as she began to rub her bare pussy against his pant leg shivering in the pleasure of just being so close to him. The she wetted her lips with her tongue before kissing his lips softly and needfully. Always her eyes looking at him with the love she had for him…

Coz I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) this is what I’ve been waiting for
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till my love walked in the door
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) true love is so hard to find
I found yours, you found mine

Then Tera began to walk him backwards slightly until he fell into the leather chair again. She placed her hands on his chest and then trailed them along his body, just brushing her fingertips over his cock before letting them leave his knees before cupping her breasts and tossing her hair over her shoulder. Her eyes burned with her love for him and she smiled lovingly at him…

I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) tell me what is on your mind
Got to let you know…
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till you call me on the telephone
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till we’re all alone

She then turned around, her shapely bum wiggling as she did. She reached down to the floor and picked up the thigh highs and the red stiletto heels. She placed the heels in front of her, and then straightened up again, before sitting down on his lap. She nuzzled her hair against his cheek as she leaned against him gently. She raised her left leg into the air and then rolled the hose up her leg slowly sighing happily as she did. A moment of straightening the seams later and her leg was covered in the hose invitingly. She shifted against him a moment and then did the same with her right leg…

Oh oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) true love is so hard to find
I found yours, you found mine
I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) tell me what is on your mind
No, no, I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait)
No, I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait)

The heels were waiting as she stood up again, her bare bum just in front of him. She slipped her left foot and then her right foot into the heels. She bent over and then slowly buckled the straps for the heels, her bum swaying slowly as she did. When they were on properly, she took a step forward and then turned in place to face him again, the need for him in her eyes as strong, but not as powerful as the love that she felt for him…

Say it one more time
Oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) this is what I’ve been waiting for
Oh I can’t wait (baby I can’t wait) till my love walked in the door

Tera moved to him and then slithered across his body to lay across the seat, her legs dangling in the air to the side. As the last words faded away Tera lay draped across his lap in the chair, dressed in the thigh highs and red heels. She looked into his eyes with love and devotion and then whispered in a husky voice, “I will love you forever…”



And to who has the trap been opened to?

We’ll see…



Apr 30 2012

A Birthday Poem from the Queen’s Heart…

Yesterday was my birthday, and I shared my gift to you all on that day. I received the gift of a poem from my heart on that day and I would like to share it today on the Tale because… Well because it’s wonderful and I want it to be remembered always…

A special day, when rockets blaze
and everyone’s quite keen
to celebrate a day of days:
the birthday of a Queen.

The fireworks were fzy’s bit;
Her Highness was beguiled.
When asked how he’d accomplished it,
her hero simply smiled.

A visitor winged her way in
–a smart, angelic blonde—
who brought temptation, not to sin,
but to refresh their bond.

Tera’s loving incu-bro’
did not spare any effort
but sent her something that would grow
(a cherry tree, you pervert!).

Tail, dressed in something extra hot,
had found a special toy
who, if she recalled where he got
to, might bring special joy.

A small gift came, quite by surprise,
unnoticed, set apart,
and only certain, soooooo green eyes
saw “Huggles from your heart.”

Kitty brought a bowl of cream
and snuggled with soft fur.
“Mistress, today can be a dream.
Come with me, lick, and purr.”

Keith’s gift, eternal, was just right,
something his soul had found.
When asked of it, he let his sight
stray shyly to the ground.

So come out for a stellar fete;
make sure you grab your pair o’
best dancing shoes.  Get ready, set . . .
. . . cheer, “Happy birthday, Tera!”

Thank you my heart for your love and kindness and putting up with my faults and messes that are my writing…

Love and Huggles for you and your Beloved always…




((Storm Clouds will return next Monday))

Apr 29 2012

The Succubi Queen’s birthday arrives…

So, I’ve been told that it is my birthday today… As such I think I should share a present with all of you from me… Or make presents of all of you to me…

Depending on your point of view of course…

GrowUp by TeraS

GrowUp by TeraS


And the story, for posterity…

Once I was a little girl in school. Boys pulled on my pigtails, and stuck them in the ink jars. They made me cry, and never apologized. I teased them, and called them names, I even did some things a little worse …

… but then I grew up …

Once I was a teenager, starting to fill out sweaters nicely. Boys wanted their way with me, and chased me all over the campus. I chased a few of them, too, and kept them off balance. But we never quite knew what to do with each other, at least not quite …

… but I grew up some more …

Now I am the Succubi Queen … at a perfect age, on my perfect day. And you are no boy … I can’t be bothered with boys anymore… But still you don’t know quite what to say, what to do … but you know something? I do … and can you imagine what a succubi like me … at a perfect age, on her perfect day … might wish to do … with someone like you?

I’m in control … and that sounds so exactly right, doesn’t it now?

What will I do with you? … What naughty things are in my mind? It frightens you, just a bit, but excites you much more, doesn’t it now?

I am going to have my way with you… But there are so many ways … which will I choose? I wonder … I wonder …

… Once I was a little girl … but I am all grown up now…

And we’re going to make a perfect birthday present to me of you…


As always, my thanks to my heart for making my words be the way they should be, to my Eternal, my love always, and to my family, huggles always…


Love and Huggles



Apr 28 2012

A Review of Demonsleep: Succubus Ascending by Binger Ray

I know that Succubi, for the most part, are seen as evil beings in literature and of course myth. Personally I don’t care of that aspect of them, and I would rather see the seductiveness and sexuality of them above all else. However, that’s not always the focus of a story with them, the question is whether or not focusing on the horrors of the myth makes for a good story or not…

Demonsleep: Succubus Ascending by Binger Ray

Demonsleep: Succubus Ascending by Binger Ray

  • Title: Demonsleep: Succubus Ascending
  • Author: Binger Ray
  • Format: Paperback
  • Publishing Date: March 17, 2012
  • Length: 66 Pages
  • ISBN-10: 1470060019
  • ISBN-13: 978-1470060015
  • This work at

The story tells of:

When Darrien Salter came into the Langdon family’s life, she already knew their darkest secrets. Little did they know, a tattooed stranger had been living in the attic of their home, hiding in the dark recesses of their rooms, and following them into stores, banks, and restaurants for months. He had good reason. As long as he continued to report their activities to Darrien, he could keep his wife alive… All the while knowing that Darrien was a Cambion, A being half human, half demon, on her ascension path to being deemed immortal and crowned a Succubus: a demoness appointed to steal the souls of men. With her invading their life supernaturally, can this family win against the odds?

Up front, the first thing I should say is that the story is rather violent in nature. All of the characters have dark sides, they all come out, and the dark side of humanity is there for all to see. While most of that is caused by the two succubi/cambion characters in the work, a lot of manipulation, lies, and similar actions all draw the main characters to perform acts that are, really, very dark, occasionally very evil, and that makes it hard to really want to care about any of them.

But here’s the thing, you do find yourself caring about a few of them, which makes getting through the darker parts much easier to do. That’s not to say that the story is happy all of the time, it isn’t, but then real life isn’t always a happy time either. And in this story, the succubi that appear in it make quite sure that the ones they claim are happy at first, but then things go downhill rapidly for them.

The work has some erotic moments in it, certainly the scenes with the succubi taking from their victims have their moment of pleasure, but it is not the core of the story. The central theme is the violence that they create by interfering with other people’s lives. There is drug use, manipulation of events and people, some really awful moments when characters are brought to their end as well. But then this work isn’t about the seductive nature of the succubi. It is a story of just how evil they really can be and are generally seen to be in most works.

So if you are looking for a story with traditionally evil beings, then yes, this story fills that role quite well. The thing of it is, and this I found to be well done, is that the two succubi in this story start out the same in their goals, but by the end one of them is forced to make a change and that leads into something different and interesting for me personally.

The only problem is, at the point I really wanted to see where they were both going to wind up, and I will not spoil that for you, the story comes to an end. Now this does leave a huge question to be answered if the author continues the story and I do think they should because while this book is about evil in all its forms, the next part of this story does not have to go there. It can move towards a resolution between the two succubi and, perhaps, something more than that.

Getting to the succubi that appear through the work, Darrien and Kym, I have to admit that I didn’t like either of them at the beginning of the story. They both seemed to be a bit too manipulative, too self involved and, mostly, were evil for the sake of being evil. While that was their theme through most of the story, Kym turned into something more than that while Darrien, at least to me, didn’t really change from what she was at the beginning of the story, which is a bit disappointing.

The author writes well, there aren’t really any moments that drew me out of the work spelling or otherwise, though I will admit that some of the more horrific scenes were a bit much for me personally. Now that is part of the setting and what the characters are, so you should expect some really violent moments in the work, but I could have done without them for the rest of the story I think held together well without them.

I’ll give this work three and a half pitchforks out of five.

If you are looking for a story that tells of the dark side of humanity and how it can be played upon by beings like traditional, in a way, succubi, this is the story for you.




Apr 27 2012

A Review of Disturbia by Niall Teasdale

My favourite book series has another chapter in its story, and so it is time for another review… The series is by the author Niall Teasdale and tells the story of Ceridwyn Brent and the universe she lives in with her Succubus Lily Carpenter who has become one of my favourite Succubi.

My first review of his first book, Thaumatology 101, you can find here. The second book in the series, Demon’s Moon was reviewed here on the Tale as well. I reviewed the third book in the series, Legacy as well. The author also released a collection of short stories from this universe called Tales from High Towers’ Study.  The fourth book in the series, Dragon’s Blood I reviewed here. This week I will be reviewing the fifth book in the series, Disturbia which brings our heroines to a turning point in their lives and the consequences therein…

Disturbia by Niall Teasdale

Disturbia by Niall Teasdale

This fifth book in the series is about:

As Ceridwyn Brent and her half-succubus lover, Lily Carpenter, begin a training course to become Special Advisors to the Metropolitan Police Force’s supernatural crimes division, the first of a series of mysterious deaths happens. A werewolf throws himself in front of a light-rail train, apparently being chased, though there is nothing visible following him. When another wolf from the same pack is found ripped apart in his home, the hunt for a supernatural killer begins.

The trail leads them to the darker side of London and into the underworld of illegal porn and snuff films which Lily is uncomfortably familiar with. Facing personal tragedy and Lily’s ugly past, the couple must ultimately face a killer bent on revenge who cannot die.

The story of Ceri and Lily sort of takes a diversion in this chapter of their lives. They find themselves learning to be part of the police force that they have been involved with from time to time in the series and in becoming more involved, things become somewhat of a train wreck for them.

I can see how both of them gaining a certain amount of “respectability” would be helpful considering what has dropped into their lives in the past, and where it might go in the future. There is of course some police work for the pair, much of it at times hilariously funny. But also the book shows just how much both of them have grow as characters as well.

Ceri is more centred in this story, she seems to have some of her life figured out, especially her relationship with Lily and her werewolf mate Michael as well. Lily has gained more understanding of herself, who and what she is, and more interestingly to me. made a relationship with her father. That I found to be especially interesting when talk in the book came to Lily being “owned” by Ceri and what that might mean and do to Lily’s father… I see something coming of this in the future, if I’m not sure what precisely.

Ceri learns an important point of her past as well, which really opens the door to several questions I have about one particular, not so minor, character in the series. If that goes where I think it does, that being their hesitation with regards to Ceri… That will be a moment to come when that truth is revealed between them and it might change Ceri… a lot.

The core of the story is dark. Very dark. I have to admit that at certain points I was squeamish over things that happened, or were remembered to have happened. I understand that the seeder side of the universes exists, we’ve seen hints of it in the past, but the moments were hard for me to get through even knowing that it was a story alone.

The resolution of the core story, the bringing of justice to those that deserved it in whatever means it came to pass was violent as well, but considering the source of the “justice” that had to be expected. But the mindless anger, rage and transference of that towards others that were not part of what happened… it seemed a bit off for some reason to me. Not that the character that was responsible for the actions wasn’t the right sort of being to do so… It just seemed slightly over the top to me… But then insanity will have that effect won’t it?

I liked the looks we were given into werewolf society. Michael’s father and family were more than I expected them to be and the climax of that plot thread was perfect in many ways… I admit that I cried when it was over for Michael and his brothers for their loss. It’s important to give characters like Michael a past, a reason for their lives, and a reason to live. I think he has that now with Ceri and I hope that leads to something wonderful for them both.

One of the more telling things that happens in this work is that Lily is forced to face her past head on. While that’s hard to bear at times, and really it is, Ceri and Ceri alone is enough for Lily to get through it all, push it aside, and turn her back on it for the woman she loves. That’s a victory for Lily and I think that will help to make her a stronger character in the future.

We get some very interesting hints about Twill in this book and I really, really want to know more about her that we have seen. She’s a mystery in Ceri’s life, not that is a bad thing, but the massive hints and suggestions that appear when Ceri looks into the Fae world… Dearest Twill you have some explaining to do my dear and when you do I wonder what Ceri will think of you then…

There is an undertone in the story which focuses on the question of, I think, doing the right thing for the wrong reasons, or the wrong thing for the right reasons. Ceri makes some ill advised choices, but that makes her human. Lily does as well, as so many others in this work do. But the thing of it is, given the chance to see right from wrong, and then using that knowledge to fix what isn’t right… That makes for an interesting read and, more so, a lot of character growth from the beginning to the end of this story.

As always, the work is well written, holds you in the universe tightly, and keeps the pages turning to the very last one. Of course that is the problem isn’t it? You get to the last page and need to see what comes next…

This work is well worth five pitchforks out of five.

Niall has expanded the universe in many interesting ways, offered some closure to a few questions that have cropped up in the series, but also left me wanting more…

And that’s never a bad thing…

The sixth book in the series, Hammer of Witches will be released very, very shortly…

My page turning tail awaits it as always…