Jul 06 2013

Another Succubus WIP YouTube

I found a really lovely bit of Succubus art the other day and as it is a YouTube, I’ll be sharing that today on the Tale.

And if you cannot see the video here on the Tale:


And, of course, an image of the completed art:

Succubus by Lipsy Maddy

This is called Succubus and is by someone that calls themselves Lipsy Maddy on YouTube… They say, at least in their comments, that they can’t draw…

Well. I think they do and the cuteness is really lovely too.

I wonder what her name is… I have a really vague idea for a story and I’ll really have to make an effort to get it down somehow…

I do hope that they continue their art… I see a lot of promise so far…

You can find their YouTube page here, they have a few other pieces of art there too!



Jul 05 2013

A Review of Showertime Succubus by Ryl Zero

Showertime Succubus by Ryl Zero

Showertime Succubus by Ryl Zero

I don’t really enjoy stories that are more horror than erotic in nature. It’s a fine line to walk and many writers can’t quite manage to make that work in the best of ways I have found.

If they can manage that, then the question turns to one of the story, where it goes, and if it makes some kind of sense. If however there are more questions left behind at the end of the story, then I’m not quite so sure about that being good for the story overall.

It gets more difficult when a theme, like Succubi, is mixed with others such as futa porn… Once in a while that works and I can accept all of the story… But then, it can’t be something really short as well… That starts to bother me some…

The story tells of:

A succubus deals out some carnal karmic justice on a rapist. Erin arranges to be alone with a coach not known for being a gentleman in order to deal out some carnal karmic justice, and have a little fun into the bargain.

Erin is waiting for someone to arrive in the shower with her so that she can make him pay for what he’s been doing… And being that Erin is a Succubus, she can make sure that happens… permanently.

Erin interests me. She’s much more mature than she seems to be in the story. But as much as that is obvious and as much as it should be part of the story, it really isn’t. The core of the story is her revenge on him and then the aftermath of it.

That’s not poorly done by any means. The writing is very good, the characters, Erin in particular are well done, her attitude and control of the situation is very Succubus like. The problem is that, to me at least, it’s shadows and mirrors of what and who she is. We really never see the real Erin for the mirages around her. Oh there is a glimpse when her eye turn completely black, but otherwise we have no real idea of the real her.

Perhaps that’s the point if you think about it. A Succubus is, after all, supposed to be what the others around her want her to be… But then the question is, what is Stacy’s relationship with Erin here? Stacy is obviously human, but also knows what Erin is so… Who is she? We never really know by the time the story ends.

There is a transformation of Erin because of what she does, and that in itself is interesting. But what that means is only touched on for the erotic scene that follows it. Perhaps that is the one problem with this story… Lots of tease, lots of heat, but the ending… Not too satisfying to me at least… Heat without meaning isn’t quite enough.

There are too many questions left at the end of the story and I would have liked it to be longer and tell more about Erin and Stacy… Where they met, why Stacy knows all about Erin… Things like that are left unsaid and I would have liked to know.

I’ll give this work three pitchforks out of five.

Interesting but short, a little on the squick side for me personally, but I am glad that the majority of the horror is off the page… But still… Would like to know more about Erin… She’s more than she seems to be and we only get a tease of that…



Jul 04 2013

Succubi Image of the Week 287

A slightly different image of a Succubus this week on the Tale. I say that because rather than being a Succubus, she is a descendant of one, or at least that’s how she’s described… But she is, really, wonderfully lovely…

Mira by Cyzra

Mira by Cyzra

This work is called Mira and is by an artist named Cyzra. You can click on the image for a larger version and you can find the original page on DeviantArt with this art here. Cyzra’s artist page can be found here as well, and there are many lovely works of art there to find. I also would like to direct you to this artist’s website as well here, where the art is just stunning…

Mira is described as being a tiefling Succubi descendant, her full name being Miranda Kaijitsu and she is also known as Mira Shadowblood. I tried to find more about here but I cannot seem to find anything more about her. Should someone have a link to a book or something else that she appears in, or is written about, could you please leave a comment?

To me, she looks something like she’s in a steampunk slash pirate universe, I like her look, the clothing is wonderful and her horns fit her style perfectly. I’m a bit saddened that she doesn’t have a tail, but that red wrap around her waist kind of reminds me of one…

Lovely art that poses so many questions about Mira and, in that it looks like a portrait, opens so many stories in my thoughts…

Jul 03 2013

I’ve definitely seen this costume before… Another way.

So, last week I mentioned that the costume I was looking at seemed… familiar. I thought that I had seen it before, just a bit differently presented. Well, I found yet another version of this costume and my view of it seems to be going downhill even faster…

Devil Dress with Sequins

This time, the site selling this costume decided to use an even more vague and random name to describe it. This is called the Devil Dress with Sequins and it comes with the red gown with that sort-of flame black sequin design, a pair of devil horns and the pitchfork the model is holding.

It does not include the shoes or anything else and it sells for $99.95 US, but there are some discount sales on which means that this costume can be bought for less than $85 US.

I’ll have to admit that I kind of like the dress, not the lousy flame pattern though, don’t care for the pitchfork yet again, and the horns do nothing for me once again.

What really makes this a train wreck I think is the look that the model has and the expression on her. If this is supposed to make the costume look sexier or more appealing…

It isn’t working, even if I like the shoes.

It brings me to a thought which is, why do pictures like this, with the look this model has, make it to publication in the first place?

I’ll bet there is another image of her were she is smiling and has a more comfortable pose that helps in the sexy…

Setting that aside, it bothers me that this design is being recycled yet again… and again… and again… ad nauseum… What’s more bothersome is that they keep using that same ugly black flame pattern on the dress, the same lousy pitchfork and the same set of horns.

Yes there are some variations in style, yes the looks change a bit, but in the end there isn’t all that much difference.

So, in spite of all of that, this is probably the one combination that I can just barely accept, the model’s look having nothing to do with that.

One single pitchfork out of five.

In a pinch I’d wear the dress and the shoes, but my own pitchfork and horns…

I wouldn’t like it, but I could manage it… barely.



Jul 02 2013

Desires 84

When the erotic moments… come… they do so in a special way I think…


Desires – Beginnings

By BStyles and Tera S

Part Twenty


She didn’t resist as he raised her hand and then kissed the palm. She did shiver at the kiss in surprise though. It was like a kiss of warmth and rightness that she hadn’t known before. She gave a little moan at the feeling and a light blush rose on her neck. She loosened her touch and watched him turn to face her.

Tera smiled as he looked into her eyes. Then she closed her eyes and allowed him to touch as he wished. As his fingertips brushed over her horns she sighed happily in the feeling. He made a soft rub against the very tip of her right horn and then drew his finger down the length. As his finger rubbed against the base of her horn where it met her skin she gasped in surprise. Then she couldn’t help but nuzzle herself into his touch. It was like nothing her mind could remember having felt before. A quiver of pleasure passed through her horns into her mind and then began to wash through her. She felt her body heat up, the thrill of that moment making her tail flex and twist in the air behind her.

Then his hand moved towards her tail and she froze for a second. As his fingers slid across the length of it, she gasped and moaned in the pleasure. She opened her eyes and regarded him. With a bare whisper she said, “Slide your fingers along the length to the base Martin…. Please?” As he did so, a broad smile passed across her lips. He paused when his fingers were so close to touching her bum and underneath the base of her tail. She nibbled her lip and said, “More? Please?”


I still believe to this day that I could have done this better…




Jul 01 2013

The Realm’s Canada Day…

It is Canada Day, July 1st, today and as has been tradition for the last five years here on the Tale that the Poet Laureate of the Realm, my Heart, has added a new stanza to a Realmized version of O Canada…

And I thank him for the giggle and the smile…



O Canada!
No Realm, but one nice land!
True patriot love in succubi command.
With playful hearts and glowing eyes,
quite mischievous and free,
above our bangs our horns shall rise,
O Canada, for thee.
Gorgeous and glad, glorious and free,
O Canada, we swisch our tails for thee.
O Canada, we swisch our tails for thee.

Incubi, too,
stand proud, tall, and erect
(watching their mates results in great effect)!
Their tails reach out to wrap around
the beauties whom they see,
arousal in each sight and sound
sets their libidos free!
He touches her, Eternal-ly!
Make Canada the Realm and set it free!!
Make Canada the Realm and set it free!!

In Canada
we try not too make spills,
and, in the Realm, we first break stiff men’s wills.
We don’t approve of making mess
that’s not necessary.
With huggles we get more success
(what fireworks we’ll see!).
We’ll tie and rub to set you free;
send Canada upon a lustful spree!!
Send Canada upon a lustful spree!!

Come closer, dears;
our scents are in the air.
You’ll be seduced, and we’ll not leave our chair!
Your Queen is neat. Ours has her beat
in sexuality.
Both Will and Kate will feel so great
once they stop in for tea
(or Diet Coke). Just watch and see.
O Canada, we’ll rev your royalty!!
O Canada, we’ll rev your royalty!!

Will Canada
hang on to all its dough
while other lands have economic woe?
Those succubis have tempting eyes.
One look, we think of sex!
Not one pays out; one stare, one pout,
she instantly collects.
Their bonds bring sweet maturity.
Oh, Canada, cum into solvency!
Oh, Canada, cum into solvency!


In Canada
state secrets do not leak.
No Snowdens here
to dig them up, then speak;
but succubi, were they to try,
would get them in a blink.
It’s no surprise; the coolest spies
melt, babbling, at a wink.
With one soft kiss, they’d take a knee,
and, Canada, they’d give the Realm your key!
O Canada, they’d give the Realm your key!





Happy Canada Day to all!


Jun 30 2013

A Review of The Sex Demon by M.G. Morgan

The Sex Demon by M.G. Morgan

The Sex Demon by M.G. Morgan

Story means everything. It is the story that makes you want to see what happens next. It is the story that takes you from the beginning to the end. But, if you have two characters, one a Succubus that is more than you expected, and her pray, who turns out to be so much more… that’s a book I will read over and over again.

  • Title: The Sex Demon
  • Author: M.G. Morgan
  • Publishing Date: December 13, 2011
  • Length: 30 Pages
  • ASIN: B006M4A2AQ
  • This work at Amazon.com

It is the story of:

Sasha is a hot succubus seeking sexual prey. When Antony moves into the apartment where she resides, she uses her power to feed from his frenzied masturbation and erotic visions.

While he sleeps, she takes her pleasure from him and when he brings a couple around to the apartment, Sasha joins all of them in an orgy of blowjobs and fucking.

Her cock-pleasing adventures lead her to find the one man who can fully satisfy her.

The first thing I need to say is that the summary of this work is not really a fair description. Oh there is some very hot sex, there is no doubt about that, but unlike a hot flash, this work has characters with a history, a story to be told, and a resolution that is just wonderfully sprung onto the reader. I won’t ruin the reveal in the story, but when it comes it made a lot of sense, but more importantly, it answered some questions about the main characters that satisfied me.

Sasha, the Succubus of the story has some traditional powers and abilities that are seen in many Succubus stories, but some that I didn’t care for. I didn’t like that her teeth were sharp and pointed like a vampire’s, but the description of her otherwise is deliciously Succubus-like. The descriptions of her powers being tied to darkness and shadow painted a lovely picture and she became a very real person in that to me.

Her “victim” and you will have to read the story to understand why I have quotation marks around that, is… well, if Sasha is the perfect woman, than he is the perfect man, and that means a lot as the story progresses. There are secrets held within him and there are hints of what they are until the big reveal at the end of the story.

And that reveal, well it took a story that could have been very dark and sad into something very hopeful and wonderful for me. Really, that’s the one thing I look for in a story and I was very pleased to see it in this one.

The erotica is very hot, very much so. Sasha is really one of the best Succubi that I have read in some time, but it wasn’t just how she played her prey, the descriptions of the moments they share, or even the climax of the story which moved in a direction that I didn’t expect. It was that the story focused on the moments, the feelings, the emotions.

That makes this very special.

Obviously it is really well written and told, I have but one regret and that is the story is too short for all of the promise in it. Especially when the reveal is made about who the man Sasha has encountered is, what that means, and what it transforms her future from.

Going from hiding in the dark to living in the light is everything…

Four and a half out of five pitchforks.

I so very much wanted a longer story about these two. I wanted to know their past and their future. If I am very, very lucky there will be a second story about them, but regrettably, it probably will never happen…