Dec 05 2014

A Review of Summoning the Demon Brat by Vivian Archer

Summoning the Demon Brat by Vivian Archer

Summoning the Demon Brat by Vivian Archer

There are some characters who are Succubi that I just adore. That happens because they are not stereotypical, they have personality, and most importantly, they aren’t what they are expected to be. Being a Succubus does not, at all, have to mean that one has to be evil, cruel, or worse. It’s much more satisfying to have control, know how to use it, and with that, bring pleasures to not just oneself, but the one you are with.

All of that is what I look for in a story, and it’s nice to find a work that has, as a whole, everything I want in a Succubus. The problem comes when the editing takes away from that and it shouldn’t. Ever.

  • Title: Summoning the Demon Brat
  • Author: Vivian Archer
  • Length: 20 Pages
  • ASIN: B00QEF52MQ
  • Publishing Date: November 29, 2014
  • This work at

The story tells of:

Isaac is a Summoner, and when his first summoning leaves him on his knees, he knows he’s in trouble. In a pillar of black flame a petite demoness stands in front of him, smiling down. Of course, for pulling her from her awful hellish realm, she wants to give him whatever reward he desires, and she’s pleased to see the reward he wants seems to be her.

Isaac comes into his power and summons a creature from the other worlds that holds power greater than anything anyone has seen. Her name is Lilandra, she’s a Succubus. And she has the power of sexy cuteness. Isaac’s quite doomed… But that might not be such a bad thing for either of them.

From the start, there is a quirkiness to the story that just really worked well. While Isaac is a bit lost at times, and the reason for that when the story comes to a close is just perfect, Lilandra herself sets the tone by far.

Lilandra is not, at all, a stereotypical Succubus. Really she’s the definition of a sexy cute Succubus with a bit of dominance tossed into her character. While her initial appearance sounds really bad, when she is fully described I couldn’t help but smile and just adore her. She has horns, wings and a tail of course, and most interestingly, her tail is an erogenous zone and the author plays that up quite a lot which I just loved dearly. Being a bit smaller than Isaac also ramps up her cuteness and that snowballs into something really special.

She has a impish personality, which suits her well, and that leads to some very interesting moments between herself and Isaac. There always seems to be a smile in her words, a bit of teasing of Isaac, that draws out her character and builds upon that. She does have a dominant streak in her personality, but it isn’t overly mean and it isn’t cruel as a whole. There was only one point in the story where Lilandra makes Isaac do something that I didn’t really like, but that was a fleeting scene that didn’t last long thankfully.

Isaac himself has honour in his personality and that was important in this story I felt. He gives Lilandra something she didn’t expect, and that made him more attractive not just in the physical sense, but emotionally. That bound the two characters together in a way that built up their own personalities. It made what otherwise could have been a story about a Succubus appearing and having sex into something with emotional context to drive the story onwards.

The work is a bit more than a hot flash, mainly for the story and the character development that occurs. When the erotica arrives there is a mix of dominance, submission, magic and a bit of mind control mixed together. The erotica touches on many different sorts of passion, some a bit on the violent side, but not too much so. The scenes are erotic, sensual, emotional. They create something that mixed with Lilandra’s personality and Isaac’s own, brings out something special and unique.

But in spite of all that I loved about this work, there are problems. First and foremost the work needs a serious editing. There are some silly mistakes such has using “he” instead of “she” at four points in the story. Also, there is a disconnect with the location of one specific named character from where they were at the beginning of the story and where they were at the end. At the beginning of the story this character is in the room with Lilandra and Isaac, but unconscious, and at the end of the work they enter the room the following morning. That’s a problem as in-between there is no mention of any of the other characters introduced at the beginning of the work leaving the room. There is also some confusion when Lilandra and Isaac first are face to face. It’s hard to see how Isaac needs to look up to Lilandra when she has to look up to him in the next moment.

There’s just a lot of small little details that bothered me and they shouldn’t have. The story is written well otherwise, the characters I really liked and by the end I just adored Lilandra, her attitude, and what emotions swirl around her. She’s a Succubus that I love very much and as such I think the story just didn’t need to have as many flaws as it did.

Three and a half pitchforks out of five.

The author noted on their Twitter feed that there will be another work in this series, and I really look forward to seeing where Lilandra and Isaac go from where this story ends. Being that Lilandra isn’t exactly what she’s expected to be, I think that will be something to watch unfold. But the author really needs to edit their work a lot more. Too many errors just take away from what otherwise is a story I really enjoyed very much and that shouldn’t have been. Part Two, whenever it happens, I will be looking for.



Dec 04 2014

Succubi Image of the Week 360

Back in March I came across what an artist on DeviantArt called their idea for a Succubus character that they thought might be a good idea for a comic of some kind. The art itself I loved, and when I read what the Succubus did as her job… Well, that just made me adore her even more…

Demon gal redesign by RasTear

Demon gal redesign by RasTear

This art is titled Demon gal redesign and is by RasTear, an artist on DeviantArt. You can find the original page with this art here and this artist’s page can be found here.

She’s described as being a front desk worker at a succubus service centre and that idea really appeals to me in a lot of ways. She’s just so cute and I really feel like there is a wonderfully happy story to tell about her. Love her look, her hair looks right and the expression in her eyes is something that I find captivating too. The full image of her here on the right for me has such personality in it. It feels like she’s a good friend to someone and she seems to be fun to be around if a little bit shy in her own way…

The artist’s style is very appealing to me. There is life in their art and that makes for art that catches your eye… Having looked at their other art they have shared, they have a talent for telling a story with their characters and I do hope that someday her story is told.


Dec 03 2014

Black sort of works for a Fire Devil I suppose…

Fire Devil CostumeI have a thing for shiny black sexy costumes… I think that the right costume like that has has a really nice, sexy look really does work for me in a lot of ways… Especially with a red wig, but that’s another story I suppose…

This is called the Fire Devil Costume and it comes with the corset, mini tutu, pair of wrist bands, choker and set of devil horns. Shoes and stockings are not included, nor is a tail. Oh, and the company that makes it is called… Trashy Costumes, but I won’t hold that against them.

I will hold the $640 US price tag against them I think however… Or I am really going to try to at least.

The thing is that I have looked at this company’s costumes before and some of them are really quite tempting in many ways to me and this one really does as well. To a point.

The main issue I have is that while it looks lovely, and really it does, I’m unsure if it is really worth the price tag. There is at least one other costume by this company that is slightly less expensive and to me is a far more sexy and Succubish costume than this one is.

That’s not to say that if I was offered one I wouldn’t at least try it on to see what it really looked like on me and I’m almost sure that having done so it would be a hard decision to make whether I would or wouldn’t.

I wouldn’t have the fishnets though and I would find better heels at least. I do think the horns making the outfit is a nice touch even if I don’t really care for the mottled look of them all that much here…

Four of out five pitchforks. Likely almost a four and half with better horns and shoes, but then I’m picky aren’t I?



Dec 02 2014

A Review of Taken By The Succubus by Della July

Taken By The Succubus by Della July

Taken By The Succubus by Della July

Sometimes there are books that give me pause when I read them. It’s not normally the themes or the characters that do, the problem comes when the story feels… off.

Trying to understand why that is, at least for me, is important because I want to enjoy the stories I read and not wonder after all is said and done what exactly happened within them. But sometimes I can’t work out the reason and it bothers me.

  • Title: Taken By The Succubus
  • Author: Della July
  • Publishing Date: August 27, 2012
  • Length: 3,300 Words
  • ASIN: B00938E0K6
  • This work at

The story tells of:

When Joey rubs an old Aladdin’s like lamp he doesn’t expect a creature living inside to show up and turn upside down his viewpoint on his dream orgasm. But then he realizes that something important is missing in this great sex recipe…

Joey uses a lamp from a friend that promises to give him what he desires, his fondest wish to be with someone he wishes to be with. That dream comes true, but not exactly how Joey thought it would be in many ways. And in that dream, he learns a lesson about reality that he should have known in the first place.

This is an odd work in a lot of ways to me at least. The main one has to do with the way the Succubus in the story, if she is one mind you, acts and speaks. It seems off somehow in the course of the story in tone or words or both at times and that jarred me from the story many times. I didn’t have a problem with the themes, or the actions, or even what happened to Joey as a result of his desires and the trickery of the Succubus.

My problem is that the writing seemed uneven moving from well written passages into hard abrupt moments in the story that felt wrong. It is most likely my personal preferences speaking, but there was just no… soul… in the characters for the most part I felt until the last few pages where the climax was.

The Succubus herself was very two dimensional and quite stereotypical for the most part. Joey was not much better as well and while I can chalk that up to this work being a short hot flash it doesn’t make for a work that I could really enjoy as a whole.

I should say, quite clearly, that I didn’t have a problem with the themes of gender swapping in this story nor did I have a problem with the sex scene overall. Where my problem comes in is in the cardboard emotions and dialogue within the work. I wanted to have just a little bit of character growth along with erotica and, to me at least, there was very little of that to be seen until there was almost nothing left to read.

As a hot flash, this work could have been better than it was if there was something more given to Joey’s personality from the beginning and not just what happens at the end. Lessons learned need to come throughout a story and not as a bolt of lightning out of the blue.

Two pitchforks out of five.

A hot flash that was missing something. I’m still not sure what that is exactly, but in having it not there hurt the story and that bothers me…



Dec 01 2014

Today marks Seven Years of the SuccuWiki and 3,000 articles

Rianna and Tera by SueChan

Rianna and Tera by SueChan

Today, December 1st, 2014, marks the SEVENTH year of the SuccuWiki and, as well, today will be the 3,000th article posted too. I’ve been mulling this article over for some time now and I finally made up my mind as to what it will be about.

(Edit: I can’t add today obviously… This is actually the seventh year of SuccuWiki)

I haven’t really written much about the Realm on SuccuWiki for a while and I think, today, I will be marking this milestone by telling the story about one of the Realm that matters very much to me. Her name is Rianna, and she is known as the True Daughter of Tera, the Queen of the Succubi … The work of art which I am sharing here was created by SueChan many years ago and it is how I, and my dear Love, see her …

So, here is the entry in the SuccuWiki for Rianna. It’s not complete and doesn’t tell her entire story … but it opens the door to her, her past, and perhaps something more to be …

A Daughter that I never had, never will be able to, but wish for every day …


*Name: Rianna Donna (Birth Name), Rianna (Realm Name), Tail Name: Unrevealed, but known to Tera

*Titles: True Daughter of Tera, Princess of the Realm, Heiress to the Realm

*AngelKitty: Kira

*Age: Physically 20, though she is actually several centuries old

*Hair Colour: Strawberry Blonde (Normally); Black (Tail’s Colour)

*Eye Colour: Blue (Normally); Green (Tail’s Colour)

*Tail Colour: Blue (Normally); Black (Tail’s Colour)

*Personality: Bookish, quiet, and shy

*Strengths: Devoted to Tera above all else; Exceptional physical and mental transformation ability

*Weakness: Susceptible to hypnosis

*Favorite Place: Nearby Tera, huggling her, or out in the field, seducing and saving the world.

*Quote: Ummm… Whoops?

Rianna, born as Rianna Donna and known as Tera’s True Daughter, is a succubi, and is one of the Realm’s more complex individuals. She is a blue-tailed succubi and her tailself is a black-tail; her angelkitty is named Kira. Devoted to her mother, Tera, she has a very strong submissive personality which shifts often towards the extremes of a dominant personality.

Physical Description

Rianna is a young member of the Succubi who appears to be in her middle-to-late-twenties. She is a blue tailed succubi and her tailself is a black tail. Her scent is of blueberries and, when she teleports, that scent is exceptionally strong for one of the succubi. Originally blonde, her hair changed colour slightly when her powers as one of the succubi came into being, and she is now strawberry-blonde. She has big blue eyes that can only hint at the powers she holds within herself and all that she is capable of doing. She normally wears loose clothes, often sweaters, to hide the fact that she has an ample bosom, but does have a bit of an exhibitionist streak in her, tending to wear skirts that just show off the curve of her bum. She also has a bit of a fetish for knee high white socks and blue heels or, occasionally, loafers.


Rianna is a bit of a bookworm in nature which explains her seemingly bookish personality. She is very quiet and shy most of the time, tending to defer to those around her as much as possible and usually remaining in the background. While this makes most who meet Rianna underestimate her abilities, there is a darker side to her that comes out when someone she is devoted to is threatened or worse. She can be extremely creative in seeking out a measure of justice—or revenge, if need be—even going so far as to use her powers to transform herself both physically and mentally,

Rianna’s devotion to her mother, Tera, is unquestionable and beyond reproach, this being the result of many years ounder Tera’s care when neither of  them was aware of who exactly the other was or what they meant to each other. When the truth was revealed by Rianna’s tailself, that devotion, which was once between a Mistress and her Submissive, was transformed into an undying love and devotion between Mother and Daughter.

Rianna tends to giggle quite a lot, and has been known to play out pranks on others in the Realm and elsewhere. While this does, on occasion, end up with Rianna receiving a bemused look from Tera. She knows her limits and adheres to them, not wishing to cause trouble for Tera if she can help it. Rianna does not make friends easily, as her shyness tends to get in her way, but, once she gets comfortable with someone, she devotes herself to them with a passion that few succubi are capable of.

Rianna’s personality does tend to shift quite a lot, from being very submissive to very dominant at almost any time, and can be triggered by a memory of her own or her tail’s past. When more submissive, it is not uncommon to see Rianna dressing formally in outfits that tend to play up her submissive side and draw the unwary to her. This usually has the effect of some attempting to control Rianna for their own purposes. She will allow such attempts to be made, as she sees this as a means to satisfy her submissive side, when Tera is attending her other duties. When such individuals are seen to be not dominant enough to satisfy Rianna’s own submissive needs, which are only truly satisfied by Tera, she rapidly transforms into her dominant personality and uses her powers to turn the tables on them. As such, Rianna has a collection of those who made such errors in judgement and now carry her blue collar as a mark of their being owned by her.

Rianna’s love is held by one individual whom she sees as being able to control her submissive needs and respect them at the same time. It is, however, a tightrope for Rianna to balance upon, and at times she will submerge her true personality beneath a constructed personality and transform herself, so that no evidence exists of her true nature. The construct has her own name, wants, and nature, all of which give her a more Asian aspect to her character and personality, this being a reflection of the one she loves.

In short, Rianna is complex and unique in the Realm for many reasons, but the one single part of her personality that never changes is her devotion, being a blue-tail.


Rianna’s powers include many of those that those in the Realm have with some special aspects. She has the ability to read the minds of others, but she generally only uses that power when she has permission to do so. She has the power to alter her form, like all succubi and incubi do, though she tends to limit that use to enhancing her own form at times, if needed. Rianna can teleport in a similar fashion to Tera, though Rianna’s scent when she does so is that of blueberries. Rianna is one of only a few in the Realm that can communicate with their angelkitties mentally. She has the ability to “read” the auras of others and know how dominant or submissive they are. She can alter her clothing to make herself more appealing to those that wish to try to dominate her.

Rianna has the ability, which she inherited from Tera, to form collars from her own energies which give her control over others, both mentally and physically. She can also create leashes and other means of control at will. It is not uncommon for Rianna to twirl a collar from a finger and then flip it through the air at someone with unerring aim, sealing her target’s fate to her whims when her dominant personality is in control.


The beginning of Rianna’s story is also the beginning of Tera being the Queen of the Realm. As part of the pact she made with the Light and the Dark for the Realm’s freedom from both, Tera lost the ability to have children, and, as such, never expected to have a child of her own. However, she was not aware of her own mother’s plans to use the letter of that pact to give Tera one last gift from her parents. A short time before Tera lost her parents, her mother found a healer that was able to take from Tera a small sliver of her soul and save it. At the same time, Tera’s mother traveled to where she could find Tera’s future Eternal and King, Keith, and took from him the same small portion of his being.

As the pact said that Tera could not bear a child, Tera’s mother found a surrogate couple on Earth and, who willingly bore Rianna and gave her the name Rianna Donna. In doing so, Rianna was given a life that would have been otherwise forbidden, and would, in time, become a gift cherished by Tera and Keith … a gift they never expected possible … a daughter, Rianna.

Rianna never knew of her true history or what she truly was until she reached the age of 18 and was given a scholarship to Mtech as a result of her work on subliminals and other similar research which brought her to the attention of Tera’s presence on Earth, Succubi Enterprises. Upon entering Mtech, there was an attraction between Tera and Rianna, which at first was more of a caring Mistress and her submissive. Rianna found herself in several different relationships and unexpected situations while at Mtech, which eventually resulted in her tailself forming and her own powers coming to the fore, her horns and tail appearing for the first time. This broke the protections that had hidden Rianna’s true nature from all those around her, making her seem like any other human being.

When this occurred, the reasons for the familiarly were made clear, as Rianna’s energies had a great deal of Tera’s own and that of her Eternal’s. Upon confronting Rianna’s tailself, Tera discovered that Rianna was, in fact, her Daughter, heir to the Realm, and a Princess of the Realm. What followed was literally decades of trying to come to terms with the truth now known by all of them. Tera and Keith immediately accepted Rianna as their Daughter and Rianna accepted them as her parents, thankful to have them in her life after the passing of her human parents in a tragic accident years before Rianna came to attend Mtech. The main issue they faced was Rianna’s need to be submissive and how that need was at odds with Tera’s own dominant nature. It took some time for Tera to accept that Rianna was happiest when Tera took a more controlling approach to her, needing that to satisfy her submissive side.

Upon leaving Mtech, Rianna moved into the Realm with her love, whom she met at Mtech, and they have been together since. While Rianna’s love has not asked for, or suggested that she would like to become one of the Succubi, the offer is there if she should ever decide to do so.

While she is a Princess of the Realm, Rianna, like Tera, doesn’t really think much of pomp and ceremony, and tries her best to avoid it like the plague. She is just happy to explore the Realm, discover herself, and simply be who she is. While she is aware that she will rule the Realm someday, Rianna doesn’t dwell on that future, secure in the knowledge that, for once, the future can take care of itself.

Rianna tends to take on more risky adventures, as she sees herself as being one of the defenders of the Realm, which does, at times, bother Tera and Keith, but they recognize that she isn’t without her own abilities and powers and they know that, if nothing else, Kira, Rianna’s angelkitty, will look out for her and remind her when she’s taking a huge risk or being foolish.

But there is one truth that Rianna knows most of all. She is loved by Tera and Keith, she loves them dearly in return, and her devotion to them and the Realm is for always.


Rianna’s tailself is one of the more unique beings in the Realm, whose genesis harkens back to the time before Tera became Queen. While it is a well-known fact that Tera’s mother is the source of the Realm, what isn’t known, save to Tera’s tailself, Tail, is that Rianna’s tailself is, in fact, Tera’s father.

While it is generally assumed that Tera’s father had sacrificed himself at Tera’s hands, and it appeared so to all of those who saw the event, and that he was no more, the truth is much more complicated. The events are detailed in Tera’s history, but, with regards to Rianna’s tailself, Tera’s father was given a second chance to redeem himself through the actions of his Eternal, Tera’s mother. He was placed in the Lake of Fire to await the will of those within the Lake for his moment to return to a changed Realm.

When that moment came, he was merged into Rianna’s unborn form and remained dormant until Rianna came into contact with Tera and her own natural powers began to manifest themselves. Eventually, he made himself known as Rianna’s tailself, not taking a name as Tera’s own Tail had done.

While at the multi-universe university called Mtech, Tera’s Tail came into conflict with Rianna’s and, when this happened, Tail recognized him and threatened to bring about his destruction once more as she had done in the past. He proved that his purpose was to protect Rianna’s future in the same way that Tail was meant to protect Tera’s. This was his chance at redemption, to see that the path he had taken was not the one meant to be and to make things right, not for himself, but for Tera and her daughter.

He then renounced his past, leaving it behind, and changed his perspective from masculine to feminine, though he had never changed Rianna’s form when Tail had confronted him or otherwise. She still did not take a name, and did not attempt to influence Rianna, though at times, when Rianna withdraws into herself while one of her constructs is in control, they speak to each other. Rianna doesn’t always remember their conversations, but her TailSelf remembers every word and promise made.


Rianna’s angelkitty is named Kira, who first appeared to Rianna when she was attending the multi-universe university called Mtech, where Tera was the Co-Dean and Student Advisor. Kira, in her angelkitty form, is a brownish-grey Calico kitten with blue wings. In her human form, Kira appears to be a younger sister to Rianna, having some of the same physical attributes that Rianna has in body shape and hair colour, but not to the same degree—if Rianna is “busty,” then Kira is “curvy”. Kira’s personality, however, is not as submissive as Rianna’s and, as such, Kira tends to be forceful about her opinions, not being afraid to tell Rianna exactly what she thinks.

When Kira first appeared to Rianna, she was a newborn angelkitty, and was unprepared for all of the changes that Rianna faced in her time at Mtech. During one terrible event, Kira was forced to age rapidly to help stop a disaster in the making; this hurt her greatly and caused Rianna great pain. For a time, Kira was unable to remain in her angelkitty form and was forced to remain in her human form instead, limping and obviously in pain. It was well over a year before Kira healed, with Rianna’s help, and was able to shift forms once more.

Kira is always close by Rianna, though at times she can be invisible or simply hiding in the rafters of a room or in a tree somewhere. It isn’t uncommon for Kira to flutter up to Rianna and give her a look, of which Rianna instantly knows the meaning. They also have the rare gift of being able to hear each other’s thoughts and being able to communicate in a way that cannot be blocked or read by others. This has led to many of Rianna’s pranks being assisted in some way by Kira.

Kira has an odd power over Rianna, which is seen from time to time: Kira will flutter up to Rianna before hovering in front of her. Kira then places one of her front paws on Rianna’s nose and mews, just once. Rianna then seems to go into a trance and then makes Kira a sandwich, usually tuna, which Kira then flutters off with to eat. When Rianna snaps out of her trance, she has no recollection of making a sandwich and is confused as to what happened; then she makes her own sandwich and goes on her way.


As I mentioned at the beginning, this doesn’t tell all of Rianna’s story, but at least some of that story can be seen and… perhaps… She’ll appear again someday…



Nov 30 2014

A Review of Savion and the Succubus by Sara Kane

Savion and the Succubus by Sara Kane

Savion and the Succubus by Sara Kane

Some stories have the creation of a Succubus as a curse. The way that happens varies, of course, but sometimes the larger question to ask is: Why was she cursed in the first place?

What follows from that question can be so much more interesting than the curse itself. After all, history, especially the history that makes someone who they are, has a way of returning again…

  • Title: Savion and the Succubus
  • Author: Sara Kane
  • Publishing Date: June 25, 2012
  • Length: 266 Pages
  • ASIN: B008EXKT2O
  • This work at – No Longer Available

The work tells about:

Fallon, succubus assassin, will do anything to find her missing daughter–even take a contract on the only man she’s ever loved and ever desired as something more than prey for the demon she’s become.

Savion Ardennes, alpha werewolf, isn’t surprised when he discovers the woman looking for her daughter is really a succubus sent to kill him. Many have tried and many have failed. But this one will succeed because he can’t stop touching her, or living the fantasy that she’s the woman he loved and murdered all those years ago.

Guilt and betrayal are wielded expertly by black forces trying to destroy them both. Can Savion and Fallon overcome the darkness and find the light of truth that will lead them home to each other?

There are many different kinds of supernatural beings in this work. Vampires, werewolves, demons of all sorts. But only a single Succubus, Fallon. She has no horns or tail, but she does have the ability to enflame the desires of others and beyond that turn them quite literally into ashes when she is finished with them. She’s placed her real self far into her past, pushed her true self into a corner and locked it away so that she can survive and it has worked so far. At least until she takes a contract and finds herself facing the man, now werewolf, that made her into what she is. But she can’t hide that she still loves him, even if it costs her everything.

Fallon I found to be interesting for many reasons, but the one that I particularly enjoyed was the descriptions of her using her power, reaching out to those around her and what effect she has on them. When she cannot control her abilities and things go a bit wild, the moment was very striking and stayed with me throughout the rest of the work.

The work has many threads running through it and paying attention to each character as things progress is a must. It does become slightly confused towards the latter third of the work when certain truths are revealed and some very unexpected changes happen.

While there was much told about Fallon, her daughter is for the majority of the work a mystery. That is a shame really because she didn’t feel like part of the story save for a means to draw Fallon into the situation she was in. When things happen in that thread, they seemed very rushed and… incomplete.

Savion is a werewolf, the leader of his pack, and still holds within him the need for who Fallon was. That need is cloaked beneath an iron persona, which it must be of course. Still, when he comes into contact with Fallon he knows there is something about her that is familiar. It is that familiarity that drives much of the story forwards as each of them sidesteps the other, the secrets swirling around then both.

The level of plots and mechanisms that have been swirling around them, and many others, really is very intricate and well designed so they their actions, their choices, do not see out of place or strange as the story develops. When everything breaks, the piece match up really well and while there are two moments that felt slightly odd, overall the climax of the story is delicious.

Fallon’s personality, her drive, the way she stands up to those around her, occasionally making them do what she wants, mainly driving many of them to dislike her in spite of themselves really makes her a force. It is that force of personality that makes this story so much more.

The erotic moments are not overwhelming, save for when Fallon goes out of control an in those moment it is very hot and animalistic in nature. But then the more personal and important moments have that as well at times.

The end of the work closes the door on Fallon, things change for her and when they do I have to admit that I was slightly disappointed in that. I thought, based on one vital moment that Fallon and Savion share, that she would not change from what she is, but she does change and in that the story of a Succubus comes to an end.

But, and this is the important point, there are open doors to new stories from this world… But they never appeared and that is a real shame.

I’m giving this work four out of five pitchforks.

Really there was much to like about Fallon, the ending felt right, but there were so many open doors to explore that haven’t been… and likely never will. The bigger shame is that this work isn’t available any longer. It really was well worth the read…



Nov 29 2014

A Morrigan and Lilith Aensland YouTube with music that works…

There are, of course, many Morrigan and Lilith Aensland YouTube videos out there. But to be honest very few of them have music that even slightly seems, at least for me, to work with the characters… I found one this time which I actually like and the name of the song, for me at least, makes me smile…

If you cannot see the video here on the Tale, try this link:

And, of course, the one image of the video that I liked the best…

Morrigan and Lilith Aensland

I just really like the poses and the outfits they are wearing… The artist created a lovely work of the sisters here and really it is so difficult to find a cute and “sisterly” image of the two of them together…

Getting back to the song, it’s titled Seduction, and really isn’t that quite the right sort of song to use with a pair of Succubi?

I really think so…