Category Archive: Succubi

Nov 07 2016

The Second Coming – Part V By TeraS

This, the next part of The Second Coming, was supposed to appear on Halloween … I wanted to try and finish this story by then, but that doesn’t seem to have worked out for me. I think there’s one more chapter in this, possibly two—at least I think so; we’ll have to see where my …

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Nov 06 2016

A Review of My Incubus by Jack Stroker

My Incubus by Jack Stroker

One of the things that a story needs is emotion. Whether that is in the characters, the events that unfold, or something else, without the emotional connection a promising story can become much like reading a cookbook. All of the ingredients are there, but you can’t eat the pictures on the page to know what …

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Nov 06 2016

A Review of Making The Incubus by Benedict Palantine

Making The Incubus by Benedict Palantine

There is a difference between telling a story and simply describing it. Focusing on action rather than plot or experience rather than developing the characters can be an issue. Beyond that, telling the story in a series of long, never ending pages without a break, or paragraph for that matter, strains one’s ability to comprehend …

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Nov 05 2016

An artist’s succubus process YouTube

Busty Succubus Girl by NoStylin

Another of the work in progress YouTubes I have been sharing on the Tale lately today. The thing about this one is that, I think, the artist might be confusing succubi and vampires just a touch. That’s not to say the art isn’t amazing, because it is. It’s just that, at least to me, I …

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Nov 04 2016

A Review of Passion’s Price by Alana Church

Passion's Price by Alana Church

I’ve been captivated by The Succubus series by Alana Church from the beginning. I’ve loved each character, the love, the story, it’s been, in many ways, speaking to many of my personal beliefs about succubi. Today a review of the eighth work in the series, possibly the last, but, there is always hope isn’t there? …

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Nov 04 2016

A Review of Jasmine’s Incubus by Dixie Richards

Jasmine's Incubus by Dixie Richards

The telling of a story matters. Editing out the flaws, making the dialogue sing makes a real difference. Clunky prose leads to taking away heat when it is needed, power when it must be. The point of writing is to express oneself, but if one can’t find the means, then one needs to revise and …

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Nov 03 2016

Succubi Image of the Week 459

Succubus by thefireis

A sharply contrasted image of a Succubus this week on the Tale. Sometimes there is a piece of arty that has one thing about it that holds you. A little splash of colour perhaps. The expression of the subject within the art itself. Occasionally there is just something that whispers there is more, to keep …

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